I haven't read the parts yet, just the bios, but I will read those later. ^_^ My suggestion right now is to find all the people who are no longer at Bob and remove or set aside their characters. If they can be taken out of the revamped story (we can still save the original... ^^;
, or if they play too big of a role, maybe someone else could play them? Oh, and here's my improved bio. It needed some... tweaking. ^^;;;
Quatre’s Girl:
Name: Hikiko Foxfire
Nickname: Kiko, "Kid" on occasion
Age: 14
Hair: Almost black, with plum highlights
Eyes: Dark Brown
Height: 5 feet 4 inches
Weight: 105 pounds
Power: Mystic Creature Communicator
Weapon(s):
1)Throwing darts (some laced with poison)
2)Dagger (medium-length blade)
Animal: The little, colorful bird Fredricormonder Aurelious the III, later nicknamed "Freddy"
Is that better? I'm willing to go through the story and change my name where it needs changing. ^_^ I hope others do this too!!
~QG~