I like the idea of Jae and NEG taking a break from each other for at least a little while. Especially since when it's my turn, writing NEG is like the South Park guys writing Kenny. Just there in the background doing nothing more than a couple lines and key gags.
The use of Eiji's emails make it a great chapter by default. Though you forgot that I actually used the "sisters" email in an earlier chapter. Still, the use of the "property of ones" email had me rolling.
A long time ago I was thinking of introducing Shermie as Cracker Jack's estranged daughter but forgot about it. Thank God somebody saw the connection ^_^
Definitely needed some prereading, though. Saw some grammatical and typographical issues. Other than that, you did a great jorb.
Gavok
Now it's my turn.
Posted on Apr 21, 2003, 1:28 AM from IP address 66.66.35.107