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  • Re: Chapter 1

    • Posted Sep 4, 2008 8:21 PM

      Chapter 1: (Jack & Karnage's Time's Up)

      At a wedding reception area, the Neo Outsiders that were there looked around the rainy place.

      Brick: Yeesh, it looks deserted.

      Boomer: (notices) Wait, who's that?

      The group looked as they saw a familiar woman soaked in her wedding dress, looking worried.

      Sora: Elizabeth Swann?

      Elizabeth: (notices) Sora? What are you doing here?

      Before they could reply, the group looked as they the ships arriving with flags marked with the "East India Trading Company" sign. The long boats came ashore, with one of them having a horse and its rider.

      Donald: Uh oh.

      Then, the soldiers with a familiar figure in chains was brought forward.

      Goofy: Hey, it's Will Turner!

      Elizabeth looked worried as she came to him.

      Elizabeth: Why is this happening?

      Will Turner: I don't know.

      He then grinned to his girlfriend.

      Will Turner: you look beautiful.

      Elizabeth: I think it's bad luck for the groom to see the bride before the wedding.

      Will Turner: (notices) Sora? Donald? Goofy? What are you doing here, and who are these people?

      Sora: Hey, Will. These are my friends, the Neo Outsiders, and my girlfriend, Ariel.

      Elizabeth: I see...

      Voice: Stop! Make way! Let me through!

      Then, the group noticed a man with a huge white wig pushing passed the soldiers toward the couple before the soldiers stopped him with the spears.

      Man: (frowns) How dare you! Stand your men down at once! Do you hear me?

      Just then, another man in a white 1700s wig came as a soldier helped removed his hat.

      Young man: Governor Swann...it's been too long.

      Swann: (shocked) Cutler Beckett!

      Beckett: It's Lord now. Actually.

      The spears were uncrossed while the older man made his way to Beckett.

      Swann: Lord or not, you have no reason and no authority to arrest (points to Will) this man.

      Beckett: In fact, I do. Mr. Mercer?

      Another man, the one without the wig, brought him a wooden box. Beckett took out a paper before handing it to the governor.

      Beckett: The warrant for the arrest of one Will Turner.

      The group looked at it, looking disbelieved before the governor spoke.

      Swann: This warrant is for (gasps) Elizabeth Swann!

      Storm: (gasps) Oh no, it also says it's for Sora, Donald, and Goofy!

      Beckett: Oh, is it? That's annoying, my mistake...(snatches the paper) Arrest them.

      Ariel: (shocked) What!?

      The soldiers grabbed Elizabeth, Sora, Donald, and Goofy.

      Ariel: On what charges?!

      The group tried moving in to stop them.

      Will Turner: No!

      Beckett: Aha, here's the one for Will Turner and these so-called Neo Z Fighters.

      He gave it to the governor and the others, who all looked in disbelief while Beckett took out another paper.

      Beckett: And I have another one for a Mr. James Norrington. Is he present?

      Elizabeth: (angrily) What are the charges?

      Swann: Commodore Norrington resigned his commision some months ago.

      Beckett: I don't believe that was the answer to the question I asked.

      Sora: (glares) Lord Beckett, in the category of questions not answered-

      Elizabeth: We are under the jurisdiction of the King's governor of Port Royal and you will tell us what we are charged with.

      Swann: (reading) "The charge...is conspiring to set free a man convicted of crimes against the Crown and Empire and condemned to death for which the-"

      Beckett: For which the punishment, regrettably, is also death.

      Neo Outsiders: Oh no!

      Beckett looked at each one before stepping up to the group.

      Beckett: Perhaps you remember a certain pirate named Jack Sparrow.

      Will, Elizabeth, Sora, Donald, & Goofy: Captain!

      Elizabeth: Captain Jack Sparrow.

      Beckett: Captain Jack Sparrow. (smirks) Yes, I thought you might.

      Daisy: Oh great, this Beckett's even more of a jerk here than the other one we have in our world.

      Minnie: I only hope Mickey and the others are doing all right.

      Back on the Black Pearl, a few of the Neo Outsiders were at the side of the ship, looking out to the sea.

      Future Sarah: So that man, Gibbs, used to work for the government here?

      Future Smart A**: You better believe it.

      Some of them looked at the aging man, Gibs, as he sailed the ship on the helm.

      Gibbs: (singing) 50 men on a dead man's chest.
      Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum.
      Drink and the devil had done ye for rest.
      Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum. Ha ha ha ha ha!

      Mickey: Problem is...we don't know where to find Minnie or the others. They could get hurt or worse...

      Luffy: Don't worry about it. I'm sure she and the others are all right.

      Gibbs continued laughing as he drank the bottle he had on his hand. At the same prison island, Team Rocket with the Heffalump and Woozle shoved the boat off as they got on.

      Jessie: Finally, we're out of there.

      James: (to the pirates) So...what are your names anyway?

      Man: I'm Pintel and this is my comrade, Raghetti.

      Raghetti: Uh, hello.

      Meowth looked up as they rowed. They saw the prisoners tortured in cages before looking at coffins being dumped to the sea.

      Meowth: Ick, I wouldn't wanna be those guys.

      Stan: Me either.

      Meowth: Besides, water don't do so well with me.

      James: I thought you can swim.

      Meowth: (annoyed) I'm saying because I don't like having my fur wet.

      The dog with the keys looked at Meowth before he glanced at it.

      Meowth: What are you looking at?
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