(We see a blank screen at first; then words show up to say: Many years later. We Fade In to Washington D.C. We go to the FBI building. It is where it is in "24 Days". We QC to inside the FBI director's office. Scott Drawford, voiced once more by Scott Glenn, is in there working at some paperwork. A voice is then heard over the intercom.)

Voice: Mr. Drawford, your new agent is here.

Scott Drawford: Sent hem in.

(A man came in. He looks suddenly familiar. Drawford looked him over.)

Drawford: Good to have you aboard, Mr....?

Man: My name is...Vincent Morre.

Drawford: Vincent Morre? I thought he was dead.

(The man started to get anger and restrain myself from trying to choke the director)

Vincent Morre II: Look! I don't care if you are the director of the FBI! No one mistakes me for my father and gets away with it!!!!

Drawford: Oh, I am sorry. So you are his son?

Morre: Yes.

Drawford: You must be unforunately to be name after a man who...

Morre: I know what he did! Can we get on with this please?!

Drawford: Ok, ok! I will assign you to check on the prisoners.

(Morre, with a frown, nodded and is about to leave...)

Drawford: One more thing.

(Morre turned around, annoyed)

Morre: Yes?

Drawford: Whatever you do, do not go into Prison Cell # 419.

Morre: Why?

Drawford: We got a prisoner in there who is very dangerous and is locked up since 2002.

Morre: (interested) And that is....?

Drawford: I rather not say. Just do your job.

(Morre, trying not to mouth back, left the office. QC to the area where the prison cells are. He looks angry as he checks prisoners off)

Morre: **** it! I wish I can find someway to get revenge for the pain and misery I have suffered since it happened!

(He then stop in front of a cell. It is Prison Cell #419)

Morre: Hmmm. Mr. Drawford told me not to go in there. Then again, I am curious and since there is no camera watching...)

He then open the peephole on the door. QC to inside the cell. We see Morre who is looking in. He saw what it is. He smiled evilly. QC to outside the cell. Morre look happy)

Morre: Well, well. So that's who is in there. Good thing I saw that biography on "America's Totally Hated". Otherwise, I wouldn't finally have a plan on vengeance.

(QC back to inside the cell. Morre close the peephole. FTB as we hear an evil laugh.)
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Okay, time for robert to take off. Don't forget the kids of the Histerians (I know what I hadn't finished up the Next Generation story yet, but I wish to included them). Don't forget that their voice actors are: Cody Ruegger (BB Kiddington), Tress MacNeille (Cinnamon and Smiling Kelly), Nathan Ruegger (Toadster), and Frank Welker (Leon Houser). So you know what to do.

How many years has it been exactly since 24 Days? I'm asking since I think it's good to know how old the kids are, if they're old enough to start school it should be between about 2020-2023. I might want to start things off that way and we may want to know for future scenes involving the children.

I think they should be ages 10-12 so can you do that? I hope so.

{Fade to a home in suburban Washington D.C. We then go inside and tour the house for a few seconds as we hear a young voice speak in the background}

Voice: So you fought monsters, devils, babies, robots, scientists, ladies, freaks, yourself in another universe, and more monsters before you had me. Did I mention everything or did I miss a few?

{We now see the owener of the voice: an 11 year old boy. And he's sitting next to a man who's about 35 years old, but a bit old even for that age. Still, when we hear him talk, we can tell who it is: it's former FBI agent and current father Loud Kiddington himself}

Loud: You probably did, but hey, join the club. When you haven't fought anyone in 11 years you tend to put memories of past battles on the backburner.

Boy: Tell me how you beat that devil guy from the Powerpuff Girls. I mean, if the episodes on Cartoon Network Classic are telling the truth, it must have been really hard to beat that guy.

Loud: By comparasion to other foes, that was no more difficult than surviving a light rainstorm.

Voice:{Female}Yes, and I hope you won't make getting to school on time any more difficult, will you B.B?

{Charity, now about in her mid 30's herself, walks into the scene}

B.B: It'll be less harder when I hear Dad promise to tell me more stories when I get back.

Loud: Well then, there's no difficulty at all in this issue anymore, I guess.

B.B: Dad, you really talk funny sometimes.

Loud:{Laughing}If you want we can discuss that later on too, will that help you get ready for school faster?

B.B: I guess so.

Charity: Okay then, go upstairs and get your stuff, you don't want to be late for the bus and make your friends worried.

B.B: Why would they, I'm the son of a superhero, so I must have some of those character traits to get me past anything that can stop me!

Loud: Okay, remind me, you said I was the one who talked funny?{Laughs again}Go on, get out of here.

{B.B does just that}

Loud:{To Charity}All right, remind me of this now. Which one of us should be the one to worry about him knowing about us?

Charity: I am, though as you said, that's slipping away fast. I mean, we haven't had anything happen to us in 11 years. Plus, everytime I say something like that, nothing happens, whereas before a big battle would start when I did.

Loud:{Waits 5 seconds before answering}And thus the winning streak continues! Heh heh, you know, it was hard to get used to a normal life after having nothing but, at first that is.

Charity: Anything's better than the first 6 years we had reliving our experiences with Big Fat Baby through our son. But as we are living proof of, the worst experiences always lead to the best ones, well, eventually.

Loud: At least the aging process hasn't taken your philosophy away.{Pause}Okay, so I can't coime up with good flattering lines all the time, but it's the morning and I'm old, so I have excuses.

{The phone nearby then starts to ring}

Loud: I'll get it while you help get B.B to the bus.

Charity: Sounds like a easy to remember plan, I'll go prove that right now.{She head supstairs while Loud answers the phone}

Loud: Hello?

Drawford:{V.O}Loud, it's your old boss calling in one of my many favors.

Loud: What is it Scott, did I forget to clean out my desk or take important papers with me?

Drawford: No, I have a new agent with me that has a certain relation to someone you were unfortunate to know. And I think it would help him if you came over and helped him adjust to life here and tell him there are no hard feelings for what his dad did and whatnot.

Loud: Sounds like an offer, of course you'll have to tell me who he's related to so I'll know how good or bad of an offer it is.
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Next!

(We QC to the school where BB Kiddington is going to. In the classroom, he is sitting next to his friend, Leon Houser)

B.B: Hey, Leon.

Leon: Hiya, B. B. How is your weekend, buddy?

B.B: Oh, same old, same old. Of course, being a son of a superhero has it's advantages. How's your weekend, Leon?

Leon: Nothing much. Mommy and Daddy is still in Hollywood filming their movie, but they promised to get back home for the weekend.

B.B: I hope...

Voice: Hey, B.B.

(That voice made B.B's heart pound a bit. He sees who the voice belongs to. It is Smiling Kelly. She looks like Cho-Cho, but has yellow hair. She sits next to him)

B.B: Heh, Hi Smiling Kelly.

Smiling Kelly: How is your weekened?

B.B: Pretty fine.

Another voice: Oh, I bet it is, dude! (Laughing maniacally)

(Another person sat next to Leon. It is Cinnamon, Toast and Pepper's daughter)

Smiling Kelly: Hey there, Cinnamon.

Cinnamon: Hi, guys! How the weekend go?

Leon: It is just me, or do we all need to know how the weekend went?

Yet another voice: Not me.

(Another kid sat near B.B. It is a boy who looks like Froggo, but wear a clothes out of stylish. It is Froggo's son.)

Toadster: I preferred to keeping it real and not bother with everyone else's problems.

(B.B noticed something and frowne)

B.B: Well, get ready for a new one.

(Their teacher came in. It is...)

Joseph Stalin: Okay, listen up class! Time to begin class. You got a 300 page essay due Friday!

(The class groaned at this. QC to a factory in Washington D.C. We go inside and toured it. We then see a woman wearing business clothes. She is on a cellphone talking to someone)

Woman: So how is everything at your new job, brother?

(QC to another house in Washington. It is Vincent Morre II's house. He is talking to his sister on a phone)

Morre: Oh, everything is fine. Of course, the FBI is bringing in you-know-who to helped me adjust.

Woman (V/O on phone): I sure hope you don't yell at him because of what happened to dad.

Morre: (trying not to yell) No, no. I won't do that. That's in the past, Natalie.

Natalie Morre: Good. Just in case you forget, it isn't their fault.

Morre: I know! Now, when will my package get to me?

Natalie: Oh, tomorrow. Are you sure you need robots? Why do you need them, anyway?

Morre: Oh, I just thought I could help out the people of the FBI. That's all.

Natalie: After that Shelton problem, I thought they wouldn't dare to use them.

Morre: I will try to convince him.

Natalie: Great. Oh, I got to go. See ya, brother.

Morre: Same here.

(Natalie hung up. Morre did the same thing. He then turned to someone else who is in the room)

Morre: Heh, my sister doesn't know what she is getting herself into. She doesn't even know she is helping me with a plan I am now having. You know what to do.

Voice: Of course, after all...

(The man appeared. He appears to be some sort of hit man with sunglasses)

Man: The Metal Bodyguard says I am going to help you anyway possible.

Morre: Good.

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Okay, robert. I hope you bring in Jeff Livingson (Jeff Goldblum's character). Remember, he is successor to Dr. Harry Norman. Don't forget that.

{Fade to the next day at the FBI building. There, Loud and Drawford are walking through the halls}

Loud: So how long do you think it will take for this guy to get adjusted?

Drawford: From a call I got last night, it seems it'll be sooner than we thought. He told me he wants to bring robots into this place to help us.

Loud: Now shouldn't that be the tinest bit unsettling to you?

Drawford: Well we're inspecting them first of course, and we sent Livingson over to help us with that.

Loud: Harry's replacement?

{Then, on cue, someone walks into the scene wearing a suit and glasses}

Man: Yes, ooh, ah, the replacement for a legend's here, that's how it always starts, but then later there's more talk about him and not me. But still, I have plently of time to fix that, now don't I?

Drawford: Loud, in case the introduction wasn't obvious enough, you otherwise remember Jeff Livingson, right?

Loud: Of course. So how are things in Long Beach, is running a science club harder than you thought?

Livingson: I have enough hard work going on there to make sure I don't have time to think about it. And the fact that the early inventions we've sent to the FBI have gotten good reviews helps too.

Drawford: Hopefully the robots Morre says will be arriving soon won't take that much work to look at.

Livingson: Doesn't seem like that much, besides, I have looked at weirder things. How many people in this room can say they looked at science stuff involving flys, dinosaur bones, and anti computer virus technology?

Loud: I ordered anti virus stuff off the net once.

Livingson: Off the Net, eh? Well, I'm sure that was more dangerous than facing at least 5 of the bad guys you've gone up against.

Loud: Yes, my past. Hopefully I can clear up the new Morre's as well. That was why I came down here, so tell me where he is so I can start that job quicker.

Drawford: I believe this historic meeting is to take place in the prisoner's hall, that is unless Vincent went somewhere else in the last 2 minutes.

{Fade to the prisoners hall as Morre is again peeping through the keyhold to cell #419}

Morre: Don't worry, my potential new best friend for all time. Your 25 year itch for payback will not end in vain much longer. I have better ways to put that, but I have to meet someone now, so we'll talk about it later.

{Morre closes the door and walks down the hall where after a while, he meets Loud and Drawford}

Drawford: I don't think any introduction is needed here. Therefore I'll go back upstairs and wait for your package to get here, Vincent.

Morre: By all means, do that right away.{Drawford walks off}

Loud: Listen, I think I know how to start this off well. You and I are alike in a way different from the obvious reasons. We've both been blamed for sins that we were in no way responsible for.

Morre: You don't say. However, you were directly involved in your "sin" while I was just an innocent bystander far far away and then unable to understand what I did to deserve having such a "bad man" as a dad for years.

Loud: There is one nice thing I can say about your father, which is one more than those accusors have. He gained the sympathy of the most heartless man who ever lived, so therefore he must have been able to do something right. Even though together they did the wrongest things.

Morre: I don't remember much about him, I was only about 6 or 7 when it happened, and so was my sister. But I do know he wasn't a ranting, raving looney tune, at least not around us. He had responsibilities to bear that the events before Febuary 19'th didn't make easier to do. In that way except for those events he was just like all of us.

Loud: That is how it always starts. I'm not going to defend your dad or villify him since I helped do that for 25 years. But do you realize the the average percentage of people who turn evil because of their dad's actions and end is really, really high? So far you're defying those odds by joining the most good organziation there is, and proving that you're nothing close to you know who. And I want to make sure you don't stumble at the finish line, that's all.

Morre: That's the best you could come up with?

Loud: Well I'm 35, that's about the age where you can start spouting out fortune cookie like wisdom, isn't it?

Morre: Sounds right, I suppose. Um, would you excuse me for a second, I have to make a phone call and then we can get right to work.

{Morre walks away from Loud and when he's far enough, he dials his cell phone furiously}

Voice: Hello?

Morre:{Very harsh whisper}When the **** is my package getting here?! Do you realize that I have to spend actual time with that *** that doesn't involve my revenge?!! If I have to spend any more seconds doing that than I have to, someone's gonna get some extra payback, maybe you!

{We now see the one on the other line is the man from earlier}

Man: And you forget sir, that I am in an alliance with a metal gentleman who can make sure that doesn't happen very very quickly and painfully, as he can prove to you personally.

Morre: I have no time for threats that aren't coming from me, just get here with my stuff now!!!{He hangs up}
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Coming up: the package and plan unfold, I suppose.

(A few minutes later, a big box appeared in the lounge of the FBI building. It is bought in by another guy in sunglasses who looks like a hit man, only he is bigger. Loud, Drawford, Livingson, and Morre are there)

Morre: There it is. The thing that can help make the world a better place.

Livingson: Well, we still need to check just to make sure they aren't program for evil.

Morre: Don't you worry.

Drawford: Who is this person?

Man: I am the Metal Bodyguard. I just delivered a package and also a bodyguard.

Morre: I hired him for my protection.

Loud: Wait, if you hired him, why are you a FBI agent?

Morre: Err, I might need a partner.

Loud: Oh, okay.

Drawford: Let's bring these robots in to the laboratory.

(Loud, Drawford, and Livingson left while some helpers are carrying the package to the laboratory. Morre stay behind with the Metal Bodyguard. Morre then speak with the big man)

Morre: You got my real package?

(TMB (Short for The Metal Bodyguard) nodded and shows Morre's real package. He hands him a walkie talkie)

Morre: Good, now the fun begins.

(QC to the laboratory. The package is now opened and the robots are out. Loud looked them over)

Loud: They looked like the spider-ninjas I encountered in my early days.

(Morre came in)

Morre: Yes, they are. A sort of redemption for them, I say.

Livingson: I still need to check them.

Morre: Of course, of course. Go ahead.

(While no one is looking, Morre talked quietly into his walkie talkie)

Morre: (quietly) Now!

(QC to another part of the FBI building. TMB is near some sort of circuit box. He got Morre's message and turned off the power switch. Immediately, everywhere in the FBI building, the building went black. QC to the lab. Everyone (except Morre who is pretending to be surprise) is surprised)

Drawford: What the...? I thought I told those people to put in new circuits!

Loud: WHAT IS GOING ON? Great, I am yelling again.

Livingson: Nothing new. Then again, what is?

(QC to the prisoners hall. TMB is walking down. For some strange reason, he appears to be going down without any problem. He then made it to Prison Cell #419. He reaches over to the door. QC to TMB's POV. His POV appears to be strange. QC to inside the cell. The door opened up and TMB came in. The prisoner doesn't look surprised.)

Voice: Well, well. What do we have here?

TMB: The Metal Bodyguard is here to rescue you.

(He gives something to The Metal Bodyguard.)

TMB: Put this on.

(The Metal Bodyguard goes to the back of the room. He puts something on the wall.)

TMB: That should do it.

(He then walked out of the cell and closed the door...and somehow locked it. A few minutes later, the power went back on. We are now back in the lab. Drawford is talking to someone on his cellphone)

Drawford: The power back on? Good. Check the cells and make sure the prisoners didn't use this opportunity to escape. (Hangs up) I don't know how it happened. She says that the circuits are fine.

Livingson: Must be temporary.

Morre: If you people don't need me, I wish to go home.

Loud: Huh? We just started!

Morre: I want to call my sister and tell her thanks for the robot she sent.

Drawford: I guess so. You can go, Morre.

(Morre nodded and left. No one noticed the evil look on his face. QC to the security room of the FBI building. Loud, Drawford, and Livingson are checking the security cameras.)

Loud: Well, so far no one escaped.

Drawford: I better check in Prison Cell #419 so he is still there. Geez, wouldn't you believe I been keeping tabs on this guy since I was an agent? I was working for Danny Shelton before I came here!

Loud: Danny Shelton? Is he related to William Shelton?

Drawford: Yes, and before you say anything, I didn't mentioned this when you work for me because I don't like dwelling in the past.

Loud: I understand. (Thought to himself) Geez, I been encountering everyone's son today. First Morre, now I find out one of my allies' son is the one who almost destroy the U.S.

Drawford: Well, he is still there.

Livingson: You must think but something tells me something is wrong.

(QC to Vincent Morre II's house. Morre is in there with TMB and the man from earlier. They are looking at someone.)

Morre: Well, I am glad that your friend is able to help me...Shane Muldoon.

Muldoon: If you don't might, I rathered to be called Muldoon. After all, that's what my uncle is called, right?

TMB: That's right. My friend wants to be called Muldoon, and blast it, he will be called that. The Metal Bodyguard says do it!

Morre: All right, I will called him Muldoon! (Turns to the unseen guest) Now then, I must say how I am glad to have you...Mr. Berry.

(We finally see who he is talking to. It is the memory and the real name of Dr. Gene Burrows, Slim Berry)

Slim: Thank you. I told Drawford what would happened. And it did!
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Time for the next part. I want to see the other H! cast members here, including the kids. And let's not forget Lydia Karaoke people.

{Later on in the day, Loud enters his house and is greeted by Charity and BB}

Charity: So, how'd your way past retirement assignment go, dear? You may want to answer quickly since your son will want more in depth details and I can't control his excitement that much longer.

Loud: Except for a strange blackout, nothing happened.

BB: That's it? Didn't you fight any villains or monsters?

Loud: Heh, I might have if they actually escaped and if there was more than one bad guy alive that would want the chance.

BB: Okay, let me guess which one that is. Burrows is dead, Morre's dead, the other Dad is gone, the other Mom is dead, who am I missing?

Charity: Someone you'll never have the great honor to know, dear, so there's no need to worry. Now get your homework done quickly, we have lots of guests coming over soon.

BB: The first part wasn't very appealing, but I like that other part, so off I go!{He runs upstairs}

Loud: Well, now that I think about it, it is pretty convient that we're having all our old co stars and friends come over tonight, isn't it?

Charity: The timing has gotten noteworthy, but the things that made it so are under control enough, I think.

Loud: Yep, BB loves hearing about us and Morre Jr doesn't seem that bitter, so all systems are go for all worries to disappear,

Charity: I never would have pictured it.

Loud: What, you liked worring so much you couldn't picture living without it?

Charity: No, I mean all this. 30 years ago we had the most exciting and un normal life you could think of. Now here we are, heading into middle age, financially secure with odd jobs and whatnot, raising a bright young boy, and best of all, no monsters, human or anything else, trying to kill us. Like I said, normally that sets the worst up, but I think we're past that not.

Loud: Well, it is hard to believe what we all are now. The former Kid Chorus pushing 40 and the adults pushing their early to mid 50's, now that would be hard to picture.

{He takes out a picture of the H! gang from 2002. Then the picture is taken out of view and now we are looking at the H! cast from 2026 or 2027 or whenever we are. It is now nightime and they are all out back, plus BB is getting ready to snap a Poloroid photo of them}

BB: Is this right, Dad?

Loud: Yes, now wait for us to say cheese and then-[a flash is then seen]Um, why don't you wait until all of us say cheese and then press it, can you do that this time?

BB: What if one of you forgets to say it, should I still press the button or wait until next time?

WOW: Come on, can we do this before the next centuiry starts or before my knee gives out?

Loud: Everyone smile and say, well, that word and we will.

Everyone: Cheese!!{The picture is taken and then the adults seperates, while the rest of the kids come towards BB}

Cinnamon: Heh, way to handle an unclear job, dude! I mean, I would have thought adults would explain things better and make sure we're not so confused instead of leaving you hanging like that.

{Pepper then walks into the scene holding a cell phone}

Pepper: I hope a certain mom of yours isn't fit to be included in that not explains things better catagory, dear.

Cinammon: Yes Mom.

Pepper: Okay then, just checking. Now go play with your friends while I explain things to an adult that does fit that bill.{Talks on her phone}Now listen Jonathan, I don't care if that big star is taking a vacation on a deserted island, you're going there and making sure he becomes my new client chop chop! No, I think I pay you just about enough for you to pay for the boat yourself. Well borrow some then and don't call back until the job's done!{Hangs up}Assistants, I wonder if they're born clueless?

{Nearby, we see an older Chit talking to Smiling Kelley}

Chit: You see, the theory is that salesmen or women are born, not made, and I'd like to prove that wrong. Perhaps you would like to be the one to make that happen with the lessons I'm willing to give.

Cho-Cho:{Entering the scene}But her Mom and Dad are salespeople and children get their personality from their parents, so wouldn't you say she's born with it already? That wouldn't quite get you the credit you want.

Chit: Times like this I wish the theory that people get dumber with age was proven right.

Smiling Kelly: But then wouldn't you get dumber too?

Chit: Why do I continue to try, would someone like to eagerly and without mercy answer that one?!

{Nearby, Sammy and Bill are talking with Toast and Lucky Bob}

Sammy: You're part of the all important target demographic, so tell me, what would be a great idea for a hit movie?

Bill: Look eevn if he gives you something, it won't be enough to beat my company with all the bombs Warners has released this year.

Sammy: Oh, you think you and your mouse club at Disney are so great? Well I didn't hear the audience that saw Lilo and Stitch 7 thinking that way!

Toast: Ha, now that's funny Sam, I mean, you can't see people thinking unless you got those big cartoon balloons over their heads, like, duh!

Lucky Bob: He's right now, we're not in a cartoon and we haven't been for 30 years, so that would be harder to do now.

Bill: Sam-man, you're lucky he made such a good point or the angry responses to your comment would be flying, my friend.

Toast: Ha, you're funny too, words can't fly, mouse and alien loving dude!

{Loud and Charity now come into view}

Loud: Well, everytime we look at them we can't believe these are our old friends, but when we hear them, the doubt goes away quick. Tonight the streak continues.

Charity: I'll celebrate that by getting out more snacks which set us back hundreds of bucks.

{As the two walk away, we go far away to see someone watching this party from afar. We then see that this watcher is Shane Muldoon}

Muldoon:{Talking on his own cell}They're pretty much all there. Now will I be alone in watching this much longer?

{Cut back to Morre's house as Morre is talking on his cell with TMB and Slim nearby}

Morre: Hopefully not for long, we'll try to be there soon.{He hangs up}Excuse me, Mr Berry, I've been rude. I've been waiting all this time for good, juicy payback and I haven't gotten any suggestions from you yet. Although I've been waiting pretty much my whole life for it and for you it's just been 25 years.

Slim: You spend 25 years in a cell and then tell me what you think about that, because if you make one wrong move the powers that be will make that happen very, very quickly.

Morre: Only after they suffer will I be willing to do that. Now, who has any ideas on how we'll make that happen?
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I think a talk between the villains should be next to sort of get Slim back in form before he does his damage, plus I don't think Morre's role in this should be exposed to the world until later, since I'd imagine Slim would use Morre's position in the FBI for some kind of advantage.

(We QC to the factory seen early. Slim, Morre, and TMB is going through the factory.)

Slim: To tell you the truth, I liked this way of team-ups. My first two ones didn't go out too well.

Morre: Oh yeah. Your team-ups with Slasho A.K.A. Louis Richardson and Danny Shelton A.K.A. William Shelton's dad.

Slim: I heard my real self teamed up with his boy. Heh, another fact proven right.

(Natalie Morre appeared)

Natalie: Oh hello, brother. I didn't know you were coming by.

Morre: Well, I like surprise visits. After all, when the last time I been with my sister?

Natalie: I guess. Who are your friends?

Morre: This is the Metal Bodyguard and the other one...

(He noticed that Slim is looking at Natalie in a weird way. He frowned and shooked him out of it.)

Slim: Huh? Oh right. My name is, uh, Jim Tarry!

Natalie: (giggling) It is nice to meet you Jim. You looked kinda cute, you know that?

(Slim blushed at this. Morre try not to look annoyed)

Morre: Excuse me, sis. Do you got a override for the robots you sent me?

Natalie: Why yes. I made a override just in case they fallen in evil hands. I got a control in my office.

Morre: Thank you. May I see it?

(Natalie looked puzzled)

Natalie: Did your robots got stolen?

Morre: No. I just want to see them.

Natalie: Oh, okay. Follow me.

(Natalie led Morre, Slim, and TMB to her office, unknowing what is going to happened. QC to the security room at the FBI building. Livingson is looking at one of the screens which shows Slim's cell. It appears that Slim is still in there. Livingson still looks suspicious.)

Livingson: Strange how a blackout occured just as Morre's package appeared at the strange time. Hmmm, I wonder...

(He types in something in the panel of the security room's cameras)

Livingson: Okay, switch to x-ray vision.

(The screen of Slim's cells turned to x-ray vision. Livingson then looks surprised at what he is seeing. There appeared to be weird statics where "Slim" is now standing...if Slim is even there at all)

Livingson: Wait a minute...that shouldn't happened. (he realized) There was a escape! I got to warned the Histerians!

(QC to the lab where the robots are kept. They appeared to be deactived. Then one by one, they activated. The spider-ninjas, as well as some robots we never seen before, begin to take their master's orders)
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Okay, in this story there are two romances. One is Slim and Natalie, while the other is BB and Smiling Kelly. Also, I want some of the robots to have shields like the spiders from "Another 24 Hours". You got all that?

{Cut back to the party at Loud's. Now Aka and Froggo are talking with none other than Lydia Karaoke}

Aka: Look Lyds, you've already come on my show 16 times to get all your messages across, what makes you think a 17'th try will be any better?

Lydia: We'll never know that answer until we try, will we? You know and I know that TV gets worse with every passing year, and someone has to say something.

Froggo: It's almost shocking they've let you stay as censor for so long, but if they decide that's something they have to fix, at least you've made sure my wife's show is a solid backup plan for your ranting.

Lydia: This is not the time for nonsense talk, the time for fixing the pushing R rated content of TV is now!{A phone is heard ringing}Hold on.{She gets out a phone and answers it}Hello? No, she hasn't agreed yet, dear. No I don't think telling her you're hurt will get much sympathy. Yes, once I get home I'll try to heal you the way you like it. Hello?{Pause}Why must that husband of mine pass out everytime I say something remotely suggestive, you'd think John would be tired of it by now.

{Nearby, BB is pacing the floor muttering to himself}

BB: Hi Kelly. No. Nice night out, eh Kellster? No, not even close. Hey, how's it going, Kelly? Well, there's goes that theory about a third time.

{Leon, Toadster, and Cinnamon come over}

Toadster:{To Leon and Cinnamon}Okay, which one of you two wants to handle this of our friends here starting to come close to freaking out?

Leon: Ooh, it's my turn, let me! Hey BB, what's with the pacing and all the times you've said Kelly's name?

BB: What? Oh, hi there, didn't see you, heh heh.

Cinnamon: I don't think any of that was a good enough answer to his question dude.

Toadster: Okay, it's none of my business, but I'll get this out quickly so we can end this quickly and get back to having fun. Do you like Kelly, and I don't mean as a friend.

BB: Well, um, you see...

Leon: Come on, you told us your dad had a hard time telling your mom he liked her because that Gene guy wanted to kill him. No one wants to kill you, so that lets out a lot of pressure, doesn't it?

BB: Well, I suppose it's just enough. Okay, I do like her, there, I said it, now tell me admitting it to you is the easy part!

Cinnamon: How would we know, you're the first one of us to fall in l-o-v-e, we can't give you any personal advice.

Toadster: Okay, I'll say one final thing and then we can get back to the party. If you're thinking of telling her how you feel, don't you think tonight would be the perfect night to start thinking?

BB: In theory I guess. Great, now I have even more reason to pace and talk to myself! So since I have that on my shoulders, you'll excuse me if I go somewhere private to make a hole on the ground.{He leaves}

Cinnamon: Hah, you got to admire someone that can be funny at a time like that, I didn't see anything on his shoulders at all, hence, the funniness!

{Fade back to the factory. Slim is now staring at all the technology being made below him}

Slim: Yes. This will all prove to be the perfect help for someone with my, unique talent. But hopefully the 25 year waiting list to get into payback-ville decides to stop and let me in before I need it.

Voice: Need what?{Slim jumps and sees Natalie nearby}

Slim: Ah! Oh, hello. Perhaps next time you could stand to say that when my attention span isn't so cluttered.

Natalie: Why, what cluttered it up so much?

Slim: Um, shouldn't you be with your brother and his friend?

Natalie: He's still working on that overide system, which is a good idea on his part. It ranks right up there with having them built to help the FBI as one of his best choices. I'm sure glad about that since somtimes I thought he wouldn't make such good choices one day.

Slim: How so? I mean, I just met him and I've been away from this town for quite some time, but I have time to hear any sob stories you might have.

Natalie: You know about our Dad, right? Well, for Vincent, having a dad who did the things he did and having a name like famous actors didn't exactly give him fun times. Sometimes I heard him complain about those Histeria people that stopped Dad, but I knew it wasn't their doing. Call it stereotypical that the man was be so quick to judge and the woman wasn't if you must, but remember, it was Dad that made the choice to be evil, not those guys.

Slim: I don;t think he thought he was evil. I've learned from research and movies and other stuff I wouldn't like to go into that there are two kinds of villains. Those who know they're evil, and those who don't. Those who don't are a lot more fascinating, because they think they're doing what's right.

Natalie: But Dad so clearly wasn't, everyone knows that.

Slim: Yes, but from what Vincent tells me, he was pushed to what he did by bad events. Your Dad obviously thought he was righting a wrong, he thought life would be better without those people. And he sympathized with someone like this Burrows fellow when no one else did, and from what I'm told that required a lot of kindness. I don't think your Dad was evil, I just think he thought he was doing good in his way, so therefore he must have had some goodness left.

Natalie: Well, he wasn't mean or evil to us before it happened, so that's something else to support that. Still, he could have just as easily done good as he could have done bad. I'm kind of ashamed to say this, but my Dad's last days are an example of how not to live life to me, so that's how I've carried on.

Slim: And it seems you've done that very well. Then again, evil people could build all this just as well, but you doing it for good sounds a little bit more noteworthy.

Natalie: I was kinda going for that, so thanks for noticing.{Morre then enters into the scene}

Morre: Jim, could you come here for a moment, we have a situation.

Slim: What? Oh, oh right, very well then, I guess I should go and help out with that.{He leaves}

Natalie:{To Morre}Where did you find this guy anyway, he said he was out of town for a long time.

Morre: And there's a chance he might just come back out later on, so I'd advise you not to enjoy talking to him too much, all right?{He leaves}

Natalie: Hmph, you're welcome for all your support.

{Back at the FBI building, Livingson is running down the stiars to the ground floor}

Livingson: Got to get to my car and drive to Loud's to warn him quick!{He then stops and sees a nearby pay phone}Or I could take a break from excercising and give them a more heads up warning.

{He runs to the pay phone and starts dialing}

Livingson: Come on, must dial faster, must dial faster. Wait, I probably would have heard if Slim had gotten there so maybe I don't need that much hurry.{He then finishes dialing, picks up the phone: and then sees that the cord has been cut off}I usually hate being wrong, but this has now become record setting hate.

{The sounds of many metal things walking are now heard and Livingson takes this chance to run off and head for the doors: until a laser blast shoots right past him. He then turns to see the owner of the blast, which is one of the spiders}
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Carry on, Jus.

Spider Ninja: Don't move or our next blast won't miss.

Livingson: I knew it was too good to be true. Don't tell me, Slim got a hold of some override invention that controls you, right?

Spider-Ninja: We aren't permitted to answer. Surrender or die.

(Livingson pulls out a gun like the one in "24 Days")

Livingson: How about you die?

(Another spider-ninja, that looks bigger and nasty as the Destroyer droid from "Star Wars" come out in front, preparing to await Livingson's shot. Livingson shoots a laser from his gun and to his surprise, the laser blast didn't seem to hit him.)

Livingson: Oh great. Shields. I should have known he would finally do something like that.

Spider-Ninja: You just witnesses the Destroyer Ninja. Now surrender or die.

Livingson: You got to catch me first!

(Livingson quickly ran across the hall to another door of the FBI building. The Destroyer Ninja shoots a missile after him and into the door he came in. The room exploded. All is silence)

Spider-Ninja: That took care of him. Come, men. We shall carry out our master's orders to captured his foes.

(The robots left the building. When they did, Livingson came out of the room that exploded. He is okay)

Livingson: Good thing I put on a device that equips a shield that protects me from the missile. Now I got to get to Loud's house, and hope those robots haven't gotten there yet.

(He quietly left the FBI building. QC to Loud's house. Pule and Susanna are talking to Miss Information and Mr. Smartypants)

Miss Info: So, Pule, how is your new movie going?

Pule: It's okay, I guess. But I am glad I am here to spent time with our son.

Susanna: I said. Being an actor is okay, but being away from family is the worst. But enough about this. We heard you got back together with Mr. Smartypants.

Mr. Smartypants: Uh, actually we never broken up.

Pule: You mean...

Miss Info: People started that rumor because I was rights person. But I still speak with my honey, right?

Smartypants: Uh, sure.

Susanna: when are you two getting marry?

Miss Info: Don't rush us. We hadn't decided on a date.

(QC to where BB is pacing around, trying to reveal his feelings for Kelly. Loud came in and noticed this)

Loud: Hey, sport.

BB: Oh, hi dad.

Loud: What are you doing?

BB: Thinking.

Loud: About what?

BB: It's about Smiling Kelly.

Loud: Ah, I think I know. You love her, right?

BB: I do, but I am afraid.

Loud: Don't worry. There is no one out to kill you. Just tell her how you feeled before you miss your chance.

BB: You and mom had it easy.

Loud: Tell me about it.

(QC to outside the house. Muldoon is still watching the house. The robots then arrived)

Muldoon: It's about time! (Talks into his cell phone) They are here.

(QC to the room where Slim is controlling the robots. Morre and TMB are there also

Morre: Good. Are they any reports?

Muldoon (V/O): All of them are still there. Riping for the picking.

Morre: Yes, anything else?

Muldoon (V/O): The former kid chorus seem to have...kids.

(Morre looked mad at this point)

Morre: So, the devil had spawned a son.

Slim: Hey, I am supposed to be the main bad guy here.

Morre: Does that give you the right to say what I say?

Slim: I thought...

Morre: Listen, you will kill them when you get your chance. Now, do what you usually do.

Slim: Okay. (talks through the speaker that connects to the robots) Okay, listen up. Capture the Histerians, but kill the kids! That's an order!

Spider-Ninja (V/O): Yes, sir.

TMB: The Metal Bodyguard say this will all go well.

Slim: Are you related to the Rock, or what?

Morre: No WWE references. Not now, please.
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For the next one, I want only the adults to be captured. The kids must not be captured, because I want Livingson to assisted. That way, it would be like the future version of the H! kids and Harry team-up. You got all that?

{Back at the party, BB walks up to Kelly[of course he finally did this just before trouble showed up]}

BB: So....some party, eh?

Kelly: Certainly a large one, there's no question about that. I'm shocked your parents had a big enough backyard to fit us all.

BB: Okay, the introduction seems completed, um, maybe we should get to the point of my visit. Well, we've known each other a long time, right?

Kelly: Pretty much our whole lives, the only thing we never did is talk to each other when we were little babies like that old cartoon.

BB: That barely fits in to what I'm gonna say, but the idea behind the joke is true, we have a history. In fact, there's just about enough of it to justify saying what I'm gonna say.

Kelly: Which is?

Voice: Prepare to die.

Kelly: Now what kind of punchline was that, you hyped things up and now that comes out of your...wait, unless you're a mind reader, you didn't just talk without moving your mouth, did you?

Voice: Good job, spawn of a friend of Satan, now let me get the word across. ATTENTION EVERYONE!!!

{The whole cast then notices the voice}

Chit: What was that? We're not too old that we can start hearing voices, right?

WOW: No, despite the fact there are some you'd rather not hear from.

Voice: Don't worry, your screaming will be too loud to hear talking ever again.

{Just then several nets shoot out of the bushes in the yard and cover many of the adults. Once they do, the spider army leaps out of various places}

Cinnamon: Whoh! Narly, somewhat scary metal things!

Loud:{Who's not in a net} Narly scary metal things of death, you mean! How'd you get here to bring us back into scenes like this?!

Destroyer: Our master sent us, and don't waste time asking who it is since you'll be finding out real soon.

Loud: Even if I didn't know, I wouldn't be ready to take you on that off-{He's intterupted as a spider from behind him shoots a net and covers him in it}

Destroyer: Way not to wait for him to stop talking to get him, ninja.

Loud: Charity, get the kids!

Destroyer: That's exactly what we came here to do, only more bloodshed is involved in our way. Kill the kids and capture the adults like the master said!

{The only adults left are Charity, Lydia, Miss Info, Smartypants, Pule, Aka, and Toast, and they grab the kids and head into the house just as half the spider army chases after them}

Charity: Find something large and metal to drive through them!

Miss Info: But what if they have shields on them like the ones in Washington did?

Smartypants: You know, sometimes being smart enough to know that stuff is a drawback, since now knowing it makes me sadder that I didn't bring a computer with me to give them any viruses.

Miss Info: That's not smarts, it's just good memory, like the fact that the spiders are right there!

{The adults turn to see the spiders, who then blast them with nets and cover them all inside}

Pule: Ha ha, stupid robots. They counted on everything but the power of buffed up humanity, like so!

{Pule tries to pull the net apart, but he has no success}

Lydia: Ah, it took villains 30 years, but they finally thought of everything.

Aka: I'd rather think about getitng our kids out of here! Whatcha standing around for kids, do that now!

{The kids turn to do that, but the spiders block their way}

Toast: Um, even I think warning the spiders like that was stupid Aka, now doesn't that say something to you?

Cinnamon: Um, I think you have bigger things to worry about, Dad, like say, this whole kids in jeopardy issue thing here?

Destroyer: Don't worry, your jeopardy is about to end perminantly as your captured parents shall see.

Leon: Oh no, that means we're gonna die! Good thing I'm smart enough to know that so I can get a nice life flashing before my eyes montage going!

Kelly: Hold that thought since it's not your last!{She runs up in front of the captured parents}

Spider ninja: Stand still for death, little one.

Kelly: I would if one of you hadn't said you wanted us dead and our Moms and Dads just to be captured. You kill us, you'll have to kill them too, and that isn't what you want.

Miss Info: Well well, to think before this I thought I was glad Cho-Cho's not here, now I almost wish she was to see her kid at work and to see...us being lifted away?

{One of the spiders is now lifting the net and taking it to the backyard as the parents are protesting and yelling for their children at the same time}

Destroyer: There, threat over. The destruction may proceed now.

{The robots aim their guns at the kids: until the sound of a car screeching is then heard, followed by the loud voice of Livingson}

Livingson: Attention Loud and friends! The spider robots have escaped and Slim Berry is controlling them somehow! Get out before they arrive!

Destroyer: Show him why he's too late now.

{The robots fire their weapons and create a hold in the wall, then they fire again at Livingson, who can now be seen outside. However, he runs away from the blasts and then disappears}

Destroyer: He must be headed towards the backyard. Robots in back, take the adults away while we take the kids away from life!

BB:{V.O}Catch us first and we'll see about that!

{The robots now see that the kids have gotten away while they were distracted and are headed for the backyard}

Destroyer: Kill everyone not inside a net now!!

{While that order is said, the kids get to the backyard to see the adults being taken away by the destroyer and some other robots}

BB: MOM, DAD!!!

Loud: BB!!! DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME, I'M NOT THE ONE WHO'S NEVER BEEN THROUGH THIS!! GET TO SAFETY NOW!!

{The words fade slightly away as the Histerians are taken away from sight. Their children barely have time to cry as 5 remaining spider ninjas come towards them}

Ninja: Now, let's try this again with more deadlyness.

{Livingson then runs into views, dives, and grabs the kids before a laser blast hits them}

Livingson: You'll have to catch us first!

Toadster: I hope you live up to that phrase more than BB just did, strange man.

Livingson:{Noticing the house next door to the Kiddington's}I believe I just did.

{Livingson, while still holding on to the kids, jumps the nearby fence and heads into the backyard next door. Of course the robots just crash through the fence a second later}

Livingson: Oops, I was wrong, there's nowhere for me to go now, guess you can charge after me to make sure I don't keep running away from you.

Leon: What are you talking about, we have lots of-

Kelly:{Grabbing Leon's mouth}Hold the complaning until the end, please.

{The robots then run after the group, but then they dive away again- and, only too late, the robots realize Livingson was standing in front of an in ground pool, which they then all fall into, Soon after, they all short circit, which gives the adult and kids time to catch their breath}

Leon: Okay, can I complain now about something else. Where are our parents, and who's this guy?!

Livingson: There'll be plently of time to explain on the way, so let's get started on that quickly.

BB: Where are we going?

Livingson: If my hunch is right, to rescue your folks and stop two madmen while doing it. Now let's go prove me right!
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Jus, you're on.

(QC to inside of Natalie Morre's factory. We are in the office of the factory. The robots came in and released the captives. However, they still hold them at gunpoint)

Father Time: Great, where are we?

Aka: Just what we don't need. Us being in office of a villain.

Voice: Well, this is an office, but not of a villain.

Toast: Dude, who is that?

(Slim appeared)

Slim: Hello, Histerians. Miss me?

Histerians: Slim Berry?!

Slim: Yes.

Chit: You here?! But how?!

Slim: One at a time. First, someone I hadn't seened in years.

(He looked at the captives, until he chuckles with glee that Loud with along them)

Slim: Hello Loud. I knew you'd show up for your big, painful ending sooner or later.

Loud: Try later.

Slim: No way! I want you dead now!

Charity: Not while we are here your not.

Slim: Well, look who else is here. I heard you and your friends encountered me a while back.

Charity: Yes, unforunately.

Lucky Bob: What is he talking about?

Slim: And I thought Miss Info is the only dumb person here. I am, of course, Gene Burrows' real name and his memory.

Lucky Bob: Oh.

Slim: And I also heard you encountered the son of my former partner a while back too.

Aka: If you mean Shelton, yes unforunately.

Loud: Enough with the talking. How did you escaped?!

Another voice: Because I helped him!

(Morre appeared with TMB and Muldoon)

Loud: MORRE! I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN YOU WAS BEHIND THIS!

Morre: What do you know, the loud idiot got it right.

Pepper: Let me guess, this is revenge because you think we killed your dad, right?

Morre: Look like another idiot got it right, also.

Toast: Hey, don't talk that way about my wife, Morre dude.

WOW: (noticed Muldoon) Say who are you?

Muldoon: My name is Shane Muldoon.

(A pause in the room)

Muldoon: You know, Muldoon?

(Another pause)

Muldoon: Sigh I am related to Robert Muldoon who was killed in the Washington attack.

Smartypants: Oh, that Muldoon!

Charity: Don't tell me you want revenge!

Muldoon: Nah. I am not stupid to judge people. I am just in this for the money. Me and my partner here.

TMB: The Metal Bodyguard said we want to get pay.

Pepper: Is that The Rock?!

Morre: Enough! It time for you all to pay for my father's death and the pain and suffering I had when I was a child!

(Natalie then came in. She is shocked to see what is going on)

Natalie: Vincent! What is this?!

Morre: Ah, Natalie. Good, you are here. Now, it's the time to prove you wrong.

Natalie: What?!

Morre: Simple. When these fools died, you will see that it is their fault that dad died.

Natalie: What is this all about?

Morre: All about?! All about?! (Screamed angrily) I will tell you that this is all about. These Histerians killed our dad. Because I was named after dad, no one, not even my classmates, liked me. They hated me because I was named after a man who helped a monster almost destroyed the only hope for America! And worst of all, mom died of a broken heart!!!

Natalie: She never blame the Histerians, never!

Morre: I don't care! They are repsonsible for my life being ruined, and our parents won't rest in peace until their killers are brought to justice!!

Slim: Hey, Morre. Don't talk to her like that.

(Morre looked at Slim now)

Morre: Oh, I am sorry. I thought you were Gene Burrows.

Slim: I am! But I don't want you to talk to her like that!

Morre: What, you have a crush on her or something?

Slim: (trying to cover it up) Uh, no. But, I liked you to lay off her, okay?

Morre: Fine! This is both of our revenge, after all!

(He turned to the robots)

Morre: Take them to the room where they will meet their fate!

(The robots carry the Histerians off. Natalie looked pity at Slim. QC to outside the factory. Livingson and the kids had arrived)

Livingson: We are here. I hope I got our message to Drawford about his robots.

Cinnamon: Dudes, I hoped our parents are okay! (Laugh maniacally)

Toadster: Well, if whoever is responsible hurts my parents, they will answer to me!

Leon: Can I have some action please?

Livingson: Okay, we are going in.

(They had left, except for BB and Smiling Kelly. Before BB can followed, Kelly stop him)

Smiling Kelly: Hey, BB.

BB: Uh, what?

Smiling Kelly: Listen, before we go in, I have something to tell you. In case we never got out alive.

BB: Sure, what is it?

(Smiling Kelly looked at her shoes, then looked up at BB)

Smiling Kelly: I love you.

(BB looked surprised)

BB: Really?

Smiling Kelly: Yes. I did all my life. I am just afraid...

BB: Of what I would say? I felt the same thing. I love you too.

Smiling Kelly: Really?

BB: Yep.

(They looked at each other. Then, they did the unexpected...they kiss. They were interrupted)

Toadster: Hey you two. Come on!

(The two stop kissing and followed after their friends. QC to the override room. The main villains, including Natalie who isn't a villain, are in there. A alarm went off)

Morre: What is that?!

Muldoon: The alarm went off.

Morre: I know that! Why did it went off?!

Slim: Someone is trying to get in?

Muldoon: You might be right. Yo, Metal Bodyguard. Take care of that, willya buddy?

TMB: The Metal Bodyguard said, I will crush the intruders!
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In the next part, TMB's secret will be revealed. I got four words: 24 Days robot transformation.

You said TMB's role in this would be revealed next. Am I supposd to reveal that since it's technically my turn to write a part, or do you want to do that? Since TMB is your character, the end message sounded like you were going to reveal stuff about him, but am I supposed to since it's my turn to write?
Oh, and overall story wise, I think Slim and Natlaie should have one more big conersation, and when my part does come I want to write it, so I request you don't have anything major between those two in your next part, if you're writing the next part. After all, Slim's been evil for about 30 years, and if it turns out that we're going to have him renounce his bad ways at the end, it would seem unlikely that he'd give up his 30 year pursuit for someone he only really spoke to once.

Yes. Let's just say, he got a metally secret. In other words, he was once a human who was turned into a robot, but willingly like Shelton in "24 Days".
Okay, you can do it if you want. After all, you are the expert. If that okay to you?

{Cut to Livingson and the kids trudging through the building}

Leon: Um, Mr Livingson, other than our strength and stuff, what are we gonna beat those robots and bad guys with?

Livingson: Hey, if weapons and that kind of stuff really meant everything, would you guys be alive today?

Cinnamon: How should we know, this hasn't happened enough for us to!

BB: He means our parents survived all their adventures without much more than their smarts and wit, and so will we.

Voice: Guess who says the exact opposite.

{TMB then jumps out of the shadows in front of the group}

Livingson: Okay, who are you supposed to be?

TMB: Your killer should suffice.

Livingson:{Pulling out his gun from earlier}Look pal, I'm not a fan of killing, so don't make me one overnight, okay?

TMB: Trust me, you're missing a lot of fun. And either you give up now or it'll be fun time for me.

{Livingson strikes TMB on the head with his gun and TMB goes down}

Kelly: That was easy. Can we go see if saving our Moms and Dads will be any easier now?

Toadster: There's no more reasons for us not to.{TMB then rises up from the ground}I've never hated being wrong more.

{Livingson then grabs TMB: and then just as quickly backs away}

Livingson: Somehow this should have seemed less surprising to me.

{Now we see a large amount of human skin gone on the spot on the head where Livingson hit TMB: skin which has been replaced by metal}

Leon: Where'd that metal come from?

TMB: First I'll say my name is The Metal Bodyguard. Hopefully you don't need any more clues as to your answer.

BB: You're a robot?

TMB: Correct. Don't worry, going from human to robot didn't hurt none, that Muldoon fellow paid me a good sum to do it, a lot more than my bosses at the wrestling matches did. He needed a partner for his doings, and I wanted to be a cut above all those pantsies at the rival wrestling organizations, so it worked out fine. But when I got too good for my profession, this new one as a hired gun proved to be a great alternative. Well, not for people like you, but it served me well.

Cinnamon: Um, why would we be worried if the whole thing hurt, we don't like you enough to do that.

TMB: Good. Then I have less sympathy for acts like this.

{TMB's hand then turns into a gun and he aims it at the group}

Leon: What do we do now?

Livingson: What do you say about getting some much, MUCH needed exercise?

{The group runs away as TMB starts firing. Cut back to the room with Natalie and the villains}

Muldoon: Well, I assume by now my big friend is finishing off our last remaining problems.

Morre: Excellent. But you know, a part of me almost wishes they make it, after all, I'm sure their parents don't want us to be the last people they see before they die.

Natalie: They don't want to see you, eh? Guess what? They're not exactly alone.{She runs off}

Morre: Natalie, come back! You of all people have to see this, it's important you see our parents vindication! God, the thanks you get for rebuilding your family. Slim, I'm sure you won't mind getting her back in here so I can reassure her.

Slim: Why not, you're not letting me do much else around here.

Morre: And that's a fine way to thank the man who's forfilling your quarter century old dreams of revenge.

Slim: Shouldn't that say something to you about who should really be in control?!

Morre: Tell you what, bring Natalie back here and then we can have a nice, long talk about it. Now get going so we can do that sooner.

{Slim growls, but walks away and soon finds a shaken Natalie nearby}

Natalie: Forgive me, but if you want to cheer me up keep in mind the fact you're a murderer won't help.

Slim: Look, your brother wants you to see us do this, so don't make him madder than he is.{Pause}Okay, we'll try this then. You shouldn't mind this so much because after tonight, there's no need for us to be evil anymore. The only reason he's like this is because he wants them dead, if he does away with them, he has no reasons left to be evil and he can start life good as new again. So why stand in the way of him purging away what evil he has?

Natalie: Because it's there to start with.

Slim: Oh come on, you've proven yourself to be too smart to fall into this stereotyped role! What's really so appealing about those Histerians that would make the world a worse place for them being gone?!

Natalie: And what's so special about them that you wasted 30 years wishing they were gone?!

Slim: They have to die. It can't end like this for me, do you understand?! You're right, I wasted 30 years for this, and that's too long for me to be satisfied if they don't go!

Natalie: Again, that sure says a lot about how valuable your life has been, doesn't it?

{Slim pauses for a second until Morre enters the scene}

Morre: Hey guys, how are things going? I've got an idea, why don't we go see our captors and your answer can keep them busy for a little while.

Natalie: Well, okay, at least to make it more obvious that I've truly lost my brother.

Morre: Once again, the thanks you get for righting wrongs. Come with me now, I think the time has just about come to end this whole farce and I need witnesses to it.
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Continue the various battles from here.

(QC to a room in the building where Livingson and kids are running into. Livingson closes the door and locked. However, TMB's fist through the door, meaning he punched right through it. TMB knocked the door open and changed into hands into hammers. He approached the heroes maniacally)

TMB: The Metal Bodyguard said...

Livingson: Enough already!

(He jumped and kicked TMB in the face. TMB gets push back a little. Livingson quickly grabbed a metal blade and swiped at TMB with it. TMB gets cut by the blade and parts of the his body comes off, showing more parts of TMB's robot self. He gets keep coming.)

TMB: This has been fun, but time to go!

(Toadster notices a lever nearby and quickly pulled it. We heard a big noise above TMB. He looks up...and is crushed by one of those machines like the one in Star Wars Episode II. He didn't die, but is trapped)

Leon: Good move, Toadster!

Cinnamon: Dudes, let's go before that guy gets back up!

(Livingson and the kids ran off as TMB struggles to escape. QC to where the adults are held captived. They are being held at gunpoint by the robots. Muldoon is there as well. Morre, Natalie, and Slim begin to arrive. Slim walked over to Loud.)

Slim: Well, Loud. It has been fun, but I think it's time for you to go now.

Loud: You make threats like that all that time and they never come true!

Slim: Yeah, well, at least this time it will come true!

Morre: Enough with the struggling already! Time we take them to the stadium room!

Pule: Stadium room?

Natalie: (sigh) Yes, I built it because the employees like to play "BattleGeniuses" but with robots.

Morre: Thank you sis for using my line without asking. Slim, tell them what I told you.

Slim: I thought I come up with the best lines!

Morre: Just do it!

Slim: (mumbling) Jerk. (Speaking up) You are to be killed by the Mutate Droids, robots that looked like mutant monsters. Now take that to the bank and cash it!

Aka: Yo, we can't even if we can.

Slim: Do me a favor and shut up.

Cho-Cho: What a creep.

Lucky Bob: Yes now!
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Continue on, robert.

{Back nearby, Livingson and the kids are still wandering around the building}

Toadster: I hope all this walking around will get us to somewhere important, like where our Moms and Dads are eventually.

Livingson: Well we've gone through most of this place, so by a process of elimination we'll get to where they are soon. Granted, it's taken us long enough to do that to assume they're in graver danger, but this is no time for thinking negatively.

Cinnamon:{Now next to a nearby door marked "Battlecage"}Say scientist dude, did we already go through this door? I mean, we've gone through so many it's hard to keep track, isn't it?

Livingson: Not really, a fact which just came in handy. Kids, lets go save your parents.

{The kids cheer as they and Livngson enter the room, but they soon stop when they see what's inside. Inside is a giant, 40 foot cage with a door in front, and in back there is a tunnel in the middle of that section which is now closed. Also, all the Histerians happen to be inside. Above the cage to it's right is a balcony with a ladder below, a ladder which the 4 other people inside this building happen to be coming down}

Morre: Ah, welcome to the most fun and twisted game ever made since Thunderball, Battle Geniuses. And you're just in time to see a terrific variation on the game, the addition of human beings who likely won't live to recognize their achievement.

Livingson: I hope you like being proved wrong often, Morre, cause it's all over. Drawford and his army of cops will be here any minute to finish you.

Toast: All right, Loud's threat to Slim was deadly accurate, narly!

Bill: Yes, nicely said except for the d word in that.

Slim: Then that's all the more reason to get this game over with sooner. But I think we still have time to introduce ourselves to our new players. Where's BB?

BB: Um, right here Mr, um, which evil monster are you again?

Slim: Slim Berry, you little....I mean, yes, that's true, and so's something you may not know. Did you know your Dad ruined my life?

Morre: He ruined my life even more, in fact, aside from you kids and each other your parents have ruined every life they've ever met.

Muldoon: Yes, and let's not forget my father's death at their battle with Gene's hand, although I'm not influenced by my tragedy like these people are at theirs.

BB: You know something? My parents explained that every villain they met came up with a speech to defend themselves and saying that they were doing the right thing. And out of all of those, yours is the worst I've ever heard.

Leon: All right, way to stick it to him like a true action hero!

Morre: Oh, having fun, eh? Well, let's put an end to that by introducing your parents latest foes.

{The tunnel in the cage opens and what comes out is just what Slim told us earlier: they are several various robots that look rather deformed and mutant like}

Morre: Introducing the products that give my sisters employees plently of entertainment, and will soon do the same thing for us. The fine if not freaky robots of Battle Geniuses!

Natalie: Are you sure?

Morre: Oh, what now, I was just getting on a roll.

Natalie: Look, if you have to do this, you should make sure these robots are in good enough shape and that there aren't any weaknesses. But I'm willing to do that for you, so if you'll open the cage I'll do that.

{Morre goes over and opens the door to the cage and Natalie enters. She then examines the robots nearby while signaling the Histerians to come nearby}

Natalie: Well Histerians, as you can see there are no big weaknesses to these things, so why don't you get thoughts of escape out of your heads-[Whispers]Go for the legs-[Normal]and notice that their large size is quite a clue that there are lots of weapons inside them-[Whispers]Try to make them blast each other-[Normal]So, our means for destroying you seem aboslutly perfect.[Whispers]Remember, go for the legs and they'll fall faster.

{This last bit of info is now heard again, only louder. Natalie turns and sees that what she has just said has been replayed from a speaker coming out of one of the robots}

Muldoon: Geez, what did you do to get a sister who won't stop nagging, Vince?

Morre: She doesn't give up quickly, so in that area she's still like me. But I still want us to share this moment and she can't do that perfectly if she still has the chance to argue. One of you bots take her out of that cage and hold her down!

{One of the bots then picks up Natalie and takes her out of the cage}

Morre: Hold her and make sure she doesn't escape or complain until the fight is over!{The robot then covers her mouth and sits down holding her, despite her struggles}

Slim: Are you sure that's nessecary, I mean, since the cops are already coming she couldn't blab to them and I'm sure she's run out of complaints by now.

Morre: She has to see and learn the truth, it's that simple.

Slim: Yes, but, well, I simply can't have any distractions while we watch our foes die, and she's already too big of a problem. Just let her go and I can concentrate on my revenge easier.

Morre: First, no. Second, this isn't so much your revenge since this and everything else so far has been my idea.

Slim: And who's fault has that been, huh?! I've done what you say and it isn't making me enjoy their demises more! I'm fixing that by letting her go and then we can enjoy our payback without any trouble, got it?!

{He heads over to Natalie, but then stops just as we hear a gunshot. Slim then falls to his knees as we see Morre holding a recently fired gun. The kids cower a bit at this sight}

Slim: That does it. I'm killing them AND you, Morre!!{He trys to get up but the pain brings him back down. Morre then comes towards him and Slim trys to get up again, but Muldoon restrains him}

Morre: You and my sister have something in common after all. You both don't get facts through your heads. Like the fact that I really could have done this without you and it would end with success, but I wanted to work with you and I wanted us to share our mutual revenge. Right now the revenge part is the only reason you're still here. That's the only wish you have left in life, I know, but I can just as easily make it your final wish as I can make it come true. Please don't give me any more excuses to be a wish destroyer, okay?

Slim:{Almost pathetically}No, I won't do that. We'll share their deaths first and then I'll take care of you.

Morre: We'll leave that one open for discussion. Muldoon, take him up to the balcony and treat his wounds, I have one more piece of business left to do. Just to make the battle more exciting.{He opens the door to the cage}Kids, adult, get in and greet your parents for the last time!

Cinnamon: Um, that'll be easier for us without the killer mutant freaks around, dude.

Morre: Did I say this was open for discussion, I think not! Get in there now!{He fires his gun in the air and the group then heads inside}

Livingson: Don't worry, we'll be saved soon, or at least we'd better be saved soon.{He says this as the kids run to their parents}

Leon: Oh Dad, it was horrible, though it shouldn't be since the villain got shot!

Pule: That's certainly true, and he won't be the first one when we're done here!

Charity: Everyone okay otherwise?

BB: Yeah, except for the fact that I've gone from thinking about love to having my parents captured to finding love to now being forced to find death alll in one night!

Loud: Don't worry, in 25 years you and Kelly will think of it as a mere bump in the road.

Cho-Cho: What name did you just mention?

Morre:{From the balcony above}All right, I've allowed hellos and goodbyes to go on long enough. Let the battle and these various families final activity together begin!
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Yes, let the battle begin!

(Three robots come in the cage. One of them looks like rhino, the second looks like a praying mantis, and the third one looks like the Tasmanian Devil. They all roared)

Morre (V/O): Only three in the cage at a time, or more if I allow it! Attack!

(The creatures approached the heroes intending on killing them)

Loud: Remember to aim at the legs!

Toast: Oh yeah, thanks for reminding us, Loud dude!

(The rhino bot attack BB and Smiling Kelly tripped and felled. The rhino bot is about to stomp on her)

BB: GET AWAY FROM MY GIRLFRIEND, YOU FREAK OF NATURE!!!

(The rhino bot is stunned from the blast. It is enough for Smiling Kelly to escaped)

Smiling Kelly: Thanks, BB.

BB: Your welcome.

(The praying mantis bot is trying to shred Father Time to pieces with its blades. Sammy managed to pull Father Time out of the way)

Father Time: Thanks, Sammy.

Sammy: As your friend, I don’t let anything happened to my friends.

Bill: You however tortured me when you have WOW as my co-host for those Eyewitness To History stories!

WOW: I kinda enjoyed those!

(Bill groaned. Meanwhile, the Taz bot is slashing at Charity, who managed on jumping on the cage and climbing. The Taz bot is trying to jumped and grabbed her, but she’s too high. Meanwhile at the balcony)

Morre: Now, now. We’ll have none of that! Get in there, you robots!

(The Spider Ninjas and Destroyer Ninjas got in the cage and started out shooting. The Histerians got out of the way of the shots)

Toast: Dude, that’s against the rules!

Aka: What do you expected, homey? Morre doesn’t go by the rules!

Lucky Bob: Yes now!

(Back to the balcony. Morre is enjoying this)

Morre: Finally, the tide is turned in our favor!

Slim: I thought it already is.

Morre: Shut up. I am enjoying this!

(Natalie, while the others were distracted, managed to break free from the robot’s grips and knock the robot down. She quickly makes her escape. Slim notices this)

Slim: Hey, come back, Natalie!

Morre: Forget her! If she tries to help my foes, she will be shot at!

Slim: That isn’t fair, you know!

Morre: Get used to it.

(An explosion was heard off screen. Drawford and his agents came in running. Drawford sees Morre and Slim on the balcony)

Drawford: Morre! I shoulda known! You are under arrest for releasing a FBI criminal and stealing federal property!

Morre: First, I ordered those robots and therefore they are mine. And second, who cares?

Drawford: I do. Surrender, Morre. This party is over.

Muldoon: What, your Mace Windu all of the sudden?

Drawford: I just like that line, that’s all.

Morre: Wrong. Turn around now and you’ll see that you are wrong!

(Drawford and the agents did so and known more robots has shown up. The robots shot at some of the agents, killing them)

Drawford: Get in that cage!

(Drawford and the agents managed to do so, though not all survived being hit by the robots. The robots got in the cage and join in the battle.)

Morre: Good, all this and I get to destroyed the head of the FBI.

Muldoon: I thought you don’t have a grudge against him.

Morre: Anyone who assists Satan is an enemy of mine!

Muldoon: I just thought I mentioned it.

(Inside the cage, the battle is getting uglier. Fortunately, some robots went down and the heroes grab some of the weapons. However, they are having trouble with the Destroyer Ninjas because of their shields as Pule found out while trying to pound it.)

Pule: You know, these robots’ shields are getting on my nerves.

Susaana: Your telling me. I hadn’t been in a tougher battle since our first movie!

(Then, another roar is heard. TMB has appeared and it looks like he lost more skin than usual. He looks angry at Livingson)

TMB: The Metal Bodyguard said I pounded you, you replacement! Then I am going after the useless frog.

(Livingson looks angry)

Livingson: First of all, my name is Jeff Livingson. And second, enough with the replacement crack!!!

(He got in battle with TMB. He managed to get some hits in, knocking more of his skin. Now TMB looks even more like a robot. However, the hit robot knocks Livingson down. Livingson notices an abandoned robot gun nearby. Before TMB can kill him, Livingson grabs the gun and blast at TMB. TMB exploded and his robot parts scattered on the ground. QC to the villains who were watching this)

Morre: Your friend was destroyed! Don’t you want revenge for that, Muldoon?!

Muldoon: Nah. As long as they don’t throw those robot parts in the melting pot like they did with Shelton’s, I am fine with that. Besides, he is still alive.

Slim: Now who’s smart?

(Back in the battle. Eventually, it looks like the good guys were losing, as more agents got killed. Livingson thought of something and grab his computer. Miss Information and Mr. Smartypants notices this)

Miss Information: What you all doing?

Livingson: I am going to do what you guys did with Slim and Gene’s robots.

Smartypants: You mean…oh, I get it!

(Smartypants ran over to help Livingson. Meanwhile, Froggo and Aka managed to bring down the praying mantis bot by shooting at its’ legs, It went down hard. The Taz bot was distracted by this. Charity used this to her advantage by jumping down and knocking down the Taz bot by grabbing its leg and pulled it off. It too went down hard. Meanwhile, the rhino bot is trying to ram the children who keep running outta the way. Of course, it destroyed more robots than anyone else while doing so. However, it then turned down and it is getting angry. But then, someone blast at its’ legs and it went down.)

Leon: Okay, who did that?

(Bill showed up, carrying a robot gun)

Bill: I did. I gotta a hold of a weapon.

Cinnamon: Oh, well thanks anyway, Mr. Bill dude.

Bill: Your welcome.

(Then, without warning, the robots stop attacking and went stiff. The surviving heroes is puzzled)

Pepper: Okay, what happened?

Livingson: I will explain. I use my computer to transfer virus in the robots, making them useless.

Chit: Ooh, can I…

Everyone (but Chit): NO, CHIT!!!

Chit: Geez, what a bunch of grouches.

BB: HEY, THAT’S MY DAD’S LINES! WHAT A NUT!

Toadster: He is really his dad’s son.

(QC to the balcony. Morre is angry at this)

Morre: Blast! They survived!

Slim: So now what?

Morre: (really angry) Now what?! Now what?! You are supposed to be Gene! You think of something!

Slim: Okay, I, uh, think of a backup plan.

Morre: And I got it for you. We’ll see if you still want to grow up or not!.

Slim: Uh, okay?

(The villains escaped while the heroes got out of the cage)

Drawford: Quickly, split up. They couldn’t go very far!

(Everyone agreed to this. QC to another room of the building. The Histerians (and their children) are in there. They are looking for Morre and Muldoon)

Toast: Dude, where are those two jerks?!

(Suddenly, another door of the room is knocked down. A robot came in. We don’t see what it is at first)

Toadster: What the…?! Who or what is that?!

(Loud quickly recognized it and gasped)

Loud: OH NO. NOT HERE, NOT NOW!!

(We finally see who or what it is. It is…)

Slim: Guess who?

(Indeed. Slim, or Gene in this case, is reborn)

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Okay, this is getting good. Here are two things I want to see in the next part. Anyone seen the Anakin/Obi-Wan vs. Count Dooku battle in Episode II? Well, I want to see a certain hero gets his hand cut off by Slim. You know who I am talking about, right? And second, I want to see Natalie showing up to stop Slim. Four words: Love is the key. Okay?

For my next part, am I going to write the entire final battle or should I write up to a certain point? And if we're spoofing Episode II, which other good guy should fight with Loud? Question 3, it seems we're going to write Slim's redemption, but he could still die in the process. Should Morre kill him, or whatever fate Slim will have, should I write it or will you when I'm done? Plus if I'm writing the whole battle, should Morre and Muldoon die, or should one or both of them live?

1.You answer write it up to a certain point of the story. 2.Plus, I think you should use almost everyone who has battle experiences, or in this case, you use whatever you want. 3.I want Slim to live, including Natalie since she's a part of his redemption (hint, hint!). You can write the redemption if you want. And 4.I want Muldoon to lived since he is only being paid to do what he is doing, but as for Morre, I will deal with him in my own way (if you know what I mean). I got to go. See ya!

BB: Hey Dad, I thought they got rid of all the robots, and where's that Slim guy?

Loud; That is Slim, or at least Slim after he got into one of those machines thta turns you into a robot!

BB: Cool, can I see?{BB runs but Slim blocks his way}

Slim: First, the name's Gene. Second, I need all of you to stand still so I can kill you and get it over with quicker.

Charity: We haven't done that for 30 years, you think we're in the mood to start now?!

{Just then two swords come flying out fo nowhere and land next to Loud and Charity}

Loud: Good job Morre, you missed us and you gave us weapons that'll make you feel a tiny bit sorry about crossing us!

Leon: Um, hey guys, what's wrong with that robot's hands?{We now see that both of Slim's hands are now swords}

Charity: Oh, I get it, he wants a big sword fight to wrap us up.

Loud: Well I don't think we have much of a choice to disappoint him!

{They pick up their swords just as Slim swings at them with his. Now that everyone has a sword, the fight begins. Slim fights Loud with one sword, and blocks Charity's attempts to get him with the other. The combatants all are able to dive or spin away whenever a sword gets too close}

BB:{To the others}What are we doing watching this for?! We can get that guy while he's fighting Mom and Dad, let's go!

Cinnamon: It's just me, but I think the possibility of being close to that aword thing would be a tiny bit distracting, but that's me dude.

Chit: All right, I got someone that thinks my kind of thoughts at last!

{Back at the battle, the duel is getting more and more tense as the contestants are getting closer and closer to striking their opponants. Just then Loud and Charity get an extra burst of energy and their strikes put Slim on the defensive}

Loud: Give up Burrows, you're finished!

Slim: Right statement.{Just then his left hand turns from a sword into a hand again and he punches Charity hard, which distracts Loud}Wrong name!

{Slim then cuts Loud's right hand off with his remaining sword. Loud yells and drops to the ground in pain. At that the other Histerians gasp in horror and then finally head for Slim, but he points his sword at them and they back away. Just then Morre comes out of the shadows nearby}

Morre: Perfect form, my partner. Now finish him and ease all our pain!

Loud:{Gaspiing for breath}You...can't do this. You know when...you're done Morre will probbaly...kill you!

Slim: Maybe, but I don't want to go alone!

Voice: Wait, stop!!{Natalie then runs towards Slim until he sees that he's a robot now and gasps}

Slim: What are you doing here, I wouldn't have thought you wanted to see me do this.

Natalie: Vincent, what did you do to him?!

Morre: Nothing he didn't want to do for the price of finally getting revenge. Speaking of which, you should do it quickly before he gets a second wind.

Natalie: You gave up your humanity for this nonsense?!

Slim: It's nothing I haven't done before, now stand back!

Natalie: No! You kill him, you're gonna have to kill me too! If that's the only way to get you to stop this madness, then I'm willing to do it all the more!

Morre: Will you listen to yourself?! Dont you realize that the role you're trying to play of the saintly female who redeems people with love is the most idiotic, annoying cliche in all of clichedom?! No one in my family shall lower themselves to a mere stereotype while I'm here!

Natalie: Well since you're a walking stereotype yourself, I guess you detected my role quite easily.

Morre: Okay, that's it!{Morre heads for Natalie, but she punches him first. But Morre responds by grabbing her rather harshly on the wrists}I don't want to hurt you, but if it will shut your whining mouth up for good, then I'm willing to do it all the more!

{Slim's anger at this sight is starting to boil, but before he acts on it, Morre is tripped and he falls down. He then sees Loud next to him, who grabs him with his remaining hand. Morre gets away from Loud's grip quickly, but Loud then kicks him in the stomach, and punches him in the face three times before he is knocked down. Loud then goes over to Natalie}

Loud: Are you all right? Hopefully we both don't need first aid when this is done.

Slim: Wait wait wait, back up a bit. You saved her? You actually saved someone related to your new enemy? You could have used her as a bargining chip on the off chance he still had feelings for her, but you saved her just like that?

Loud: It's what I do. That seems to be the only thing you don't know about me. And I think that for the first time ever, you're happy with something that I did.

Slim: Well....yes, I am actually. But...

Natalie: But you're about to kill a good guy, and from what I know, when you started out you did it because you thought you were killing bad guys. You thought you were doing good by ridding the world of them, but if one of them can do something like save a good person, then they're not bad enough that you should waste half your life and your humanity to kill them, right?

Slim: I, I, I....I don't know anymore, I....I don't know.

Loud: And if you're not sure, there's no reason to do it at all.

{Slim drops to his knees deep in thought and in a bit of sadness. Natalie then joins him}

Natalie: Come with me. We'll make you a human again and we can walk out of here, then we can start rebuilding in a spritual sense.

Voice: What did I tell you?{Just then Slim jerks forward before we see the tip of a sword come through his stomach}Is she bland or what?

{Morre is now seen holding the sword that driving through Slim's stomach, and he then moves it up through his body, until the top half of his body, including the head, is spilt in two, though it's still connected to the rest of him. Morre then pushes Slim out of the way and he lands hard on the wall nearby, broken and deactivated}

Natalie: SLIM!!! What have you done?!!!

Morre:{Noticing Charity waking up from her punch}Ah Charity, welcome back, you just missed a heck of a show. And now that the traitor has been disposed of, we can move on to the last act.

Loud:{Picking up his sword}You got that right, Peter Lorre.

Morre: IT'S MORRE!! And those misunderstandings as well as you in general shall end right now!!
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I know you said Slim should live, but he can be rebuilt later on or you could have him wake up somehow in your next part to save the day, so he's not dead. Continue from here.

(Morre angrily hits Charity knocking her down. Loud tries to hit Morre, but the villain use his sword to deflect his hit)

Morre: Do you wish to lose your other hand too?!

(Morre kick Loud down. He then point his sword at the down Charity.)

Morre: Well, this is fun but it’s time to end this!

BB: DON’T YOU DARE!!!

(BB rammed Morre from behind. Morre turns around and looked angrily at BB)

Morre: So the son of Satan wishes to fight me?

BB: FIRST OF ALL, MY DAD ISN’T SATAN! YOU ARE ONLY SAYING THAT BECAUSE YOUR DAD WAS KILLED.

Morre: That dad of yours killed him!

BB: IT WAS THE ARMY WHO SHOT HIM!

Morre: And who cause them to do that?!

BB: ENOUGH WITH THAT! YOU ARE GOING DOWN!

Morre: Fine, prepare to die first!

(Morre swings at BB, but he got out of the way. Morre got really angry now and is trying to hit BB again. But the boy managed to grab a metal pipe from nearby and use it to block his shot)

Cinnamon: Dude, how often a metal pipe can be found nearby?

Livingson: Okay, it is just me or these metal objects keep appearing in your adventures?

Miss Info: Maybe it is just you, but then again who knows?

(Morre swings at BB again who jumps out of the way. For those who seen the Yoda vs. Darth Tyranus fight from Episode II, it is sorta like that. Anyway, a few minutes later in the battle, Morre is getting tired)

BB: HEH, NOT BAD FOR “A SON OF SATAN”..

(Bad move, as Morre knocks BB’s metal pipe from him. He then points his sword at BB’s throat. BB gulped)

BB: WELL, AT LEAST I GET TO BE IN MY DAD’S SHOES FOR A WHILE.

Morre: Let me disagree with you. I hoped you are watching this, Loud, because you are going to see your son died before your eyes!

(Before Morre can do that, he was once again rammed from behind.)

Morre: What?!

(He sees who rammed him now. It is the other kids)

Leon: You leave him alone!

Toadster: We are getting tired of watching. Time for action!

Smiling Kelly: And since I don’t fear you, I am not afraid to say that you are not going to kill my boyfriend!

Morre: Oh, your boyfriend, huh? Well, I am going to do what my dad and the original Gene did years ago. Kill you so your boyfriend will feel bad!

(He swings his sword up high. Then he was shot. He dropped the sword and held his hand in pain. We see who shot him. It was a FBI agent. Drawford and the agents had arrived)

Drawford: Glad we made it. Okay, Morre, surrender. It is over!

Morre: It isn’t over yet! Not by a long shot!

Drawford: Don’t shoot or I will shoot!

(Morre tries to run away. Drawford quickly shot his gun. It missed, but hit a heavy object that’s above the room. He quickly fired again. This time it hit Morre in the legs and he felled. Morre is in pain now)

Morre: Great, now I had been shot in the legs. What’s next?!

(We then heard a noise and Morre looked up. The object that was hit earlier is felling on him. Morre looked at us)

Morre: Why do I feel a sudden case of déjà vu?

(He closes his eyes as the object landed on him. Only his hand is now seen. Finally, it went limb and stop moving)

Livingson: Okay, who had seen that one coming?

Drawford: Uh, at this point, I wasn’t trying to kill him. That object just fell on him.

Lydia: I am sure it wasn't a murder, Mr. Drawford.

Drawford: I hope so.
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Your turn, robert! I will write the cast list when you are done.

{A little while later, the battle areas are being cleaned up by the FBI and Morre's body is being taken away. Also, Natalie, Livingson, and Drawford are taking a look at the broken Slim}

Natalie: You have to fix him, he doesn't deserve this kind of death.

Drawford: If not for what you told me about him, you wouldn't hear the end of my disagreeing. But we can fix him, right Livingson?

Livingson: We can fix him, and then we can take that machine that made him metal and reverse it to make him human again. I mean, on the off chance he is still evil afterwards, why give him the massive technology to demonstrate it?

{Next to this scene, Loud and Charity are treating their injuries, with Loud having a towel wrapped around what remains of his missing hand. BB is with them}

BB: Hey Dad, did I do good? I mean, compare me with your first battle, was I as good as you when you started?

Loud: If you had one remotely like my first battle you wouldn't be smiling so much.

Voice: I don't think smiling would be appropriate right now.

{Muldoon then shows up out of nowhere pointing a gun}

Muldoon: You may have beaten everyone else, but I've been waiting in back trying to think of how to get my money's worth for all this mess, and just doing away with all of you now should it.

Loud:{Bored}Sigh, all right then, But first, why don't you have a look at what Slim gave me earlier.{Begins taking the towel off of his stump}Seriously, does this look really bad to you?

{We don't see what Muldoon sees, but it is enough to make him look sick}

Muldoon: AGH!! Mother of pearl, that's ugly!{Drops his gun}Oh good grief, I'll have nightmares for days!

{Muldoon continues to groan so much that he doesn't notice he is being cuffed by FBI men and led away}

Drawford: Okay, now that's almost everything, just got a few more things left. I want that metal bodyguard's parts melted away on the double, I want the machine they used to turn Slim into a robot taken away, and I want Slim rebuilt immediatly. Oh, and get Loud a new hand, if that's not too much trouble.

Loud: All right then. Well, I guess that's my cue to go away for a while. Guys, would you mind taking the kids home?

Sammy: Why not, I need something to think about other than the fact we almost got killed.

Bill: You're losing lots of money to my company.

Sammy: Thanks Bill, that's gonna keep me up worse than this!

Bill: Hey, what are friends for?

Charity: BB, you be good while we're gone, and don't get into too much mischief with your new, um, "friend".

Cho-Cho: That reminds me, should I expect too much, um, mischief, from them?

Kelly: If he's anything like you said his Dad was, you'd probably want to keep me on a leash!

Loud: You I like. Okay then, we'd better go.

BB: Not before one last tear jerking scene, of course.{Hugs Loud}I love you, Dad.

Loud: Same here, son. Enjoy what enjoyable memories you have from this, since if I have any say, you won;t have to deal with anything like this again.

BB: But isn't it only fair that I have as many fights as you?

Loud: Fair yes. Logical, not one shot. Okay, now we're off. Come on Charity, and thanks for your help, my older friends!

Toast: No problemo, it was cool to be back in the trenches again! Well, except for the parts where I thought I was gonna die, of course.

Cinnamon: Cool, I thought the same thing, that's narly!

Toadster: Well I'd rather not be in any more fights that narly again.

Leon: I'll take fake movie action over this kind of action any day too.{These last phrases are said as the gang walks out of the room with everyone else}

{Fade to the FBI headquarters. A caption reads "5 Days Later" Inside, Loud, Natalie, Livingson, and Drawford are walking the halls of the prisoners from earlier. The only difference with Loud from before is that he's wearing a brand new, prothestic hand}

Livingson: Now it's fair to warn you that we got a few surprises when we finished with old Slim, and I say old for a very, very good reason. Remember the experiment that made him unable to age? Well, seems like we kinda made that stop when we made him human again.

Drawford: And now he's just a normal, early 40's prisoner instead of a perminantly bratty kid.

Natalie: Um, he's not going to be a "brat" anymore, not after we meet with him.

Drawford: Oh, then by all means, don't let me stop you from seeing him. And Livingson, I almost forgot. Harry Norman called earlier and he wanted to extend his congrats to you for your actions earlier this week.

Livingson: That's the kind of obligatory action I like to hear. Well, better go call him back to get my praises personally, see you later, hopefully not because we're targeted for death!

{Livingson and Drawford leave as Loud and Natalie come near Slim's old cell and look through the bars}

Natalie: Oh my....Slim, that is you right?

{We now are able to see an early 40's man inside the cell. This is, indeed, Slim Berry}

Slim: I know. It blows your mind, doesn't it? I should be an expert on that since I tried to blow minds away literaly so many times.

Loud: That's kinda what we wanted to talk to you about.

Slim: Wait! Something else is strange. I see you over there and yet, well, I should be enfuriated that Morre didn't kill you and be ready to plan another attempt on your life....but strangly, those thoughts aren't coming through.

Natalie: Maybe your body wasn't the only thing that was fixed up, perhaps it was also your mind.

Slim: Of course my mind was fixed, they had to do that before I could be made human again.{Pause}Oh, you mean fixed as in spiritual, right, I should know you enough to recognize that by now.

Loud: So now that the need to kill me is gone, what are you gonna do next?

Slim: Let me tell you something, Loud. I still hate you. The fact that you gave me so much pain and the memories of all our battles is easy to remember. Movies and TV really make redemption too easy, you can't just go from hating someone to liking them in 1 second flat, it takes a while. And....well, I can't say I'll be successful in trying to do that, but I can promise that, well, I'll try to try.{Looks at Natalie}If I get the right help, that is.

Natalie: Consider it done.

Loud: That's good to get resolved. So, I guess I'd better get going, you two have got a lot of work to do and I've got a wife and a kid in love to meet up with.

Natalie: Okay. And Loud, I never did thank you for saving me from my ex brother.

Slim: You know what? Neither did I. Hey, that was a excellent first step right there!{Pause}Anyway, so long Kiddington.

Loud: So long Slim, I'll drop by from time to time to make sure you don't get out of line and that the prison rehabilitaiton groups are safe if you do.

Slim: I wouldn't have it any other way, boy.

{Loud walks away as Slim and Natalie start talking. Cut to a peaceful park outside, where Loud and Charity are sitting on a bench while BB and Kelly are playing}

Charity: It's so weird that it's surreal. Baically staring at ourselves from 30 years ago, that is.

Loud: Was it that long ago? It seems more like 2 years than 30 sometimes. And it sure is a reminder of how far we've come, that's for sure.

Charity: I know. We've fought our fights, out beaten the villains, and saved day after day, and it's so easy to forget we started as mostly unpopular cartoon characters. Now, well, looking at those little ones, I think we just started passing the torch. And I don't think we could have found two better candidates to do it.

Loud: And I don't think I could have found anyone better to help me do that.

Charity: Ooh, old age hasn't taken away certain old habits quite yet, has it?

Loud: I'm not sure. You tell me.{Gives Charity a rather long kiss}

Charity: Are you sure we didn't just make the kids sick by doing that?

Loud: If that's my son out there, then he's made her really appreciate stuff like this.

Charity: I can sure relate to that.

{Loud and Charity start kissing again and again and again. Now we go to a room full of mad looking people in a group, which includes Slim as well}

Man: This meeting of recovering evil maniacs will now come to order. Let's start things off with our new member who shall introduce himself.

{Slim gets up as we see Natalie looking at the scene with the nearby door open a crack}

Slim: Hello. My name is Slim, and...I'm an evil maniac.

{As he finishes saying that, the very smallest of smiles breaks out on his face. We see this from Natalie's P.O.V until we see the door to the room being closed as we FTB}

THE END

Cast list
Jim Carrey: Slim Berry/Gene Burrows
Edward Norton: Loud Kiddington
Laraine Newman: Charity Bazaar, Miss Information
Frank Welker: Vincent Morre II, Father Time, Leon Houser
Tress MacNeille: Toast, Pepper Mills, Cho-Cho, World's Oldest Woman, Cinnamon, Smiling Kelly
Natalie Portman: Natalie Morre
Jeff Goldblum: Jeff Livingson
Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson: The Metal Bodyguard
Scott Glenn: Scott Drawford
Lance Henriksen: Froggo
John Goodman: Pule Houser
Hynden Walsh: Susanna Squashanna
Cody Ruegger: BB Kiddington
Nathan Ruegger: Toadster
Cree Summer: Aka Pella
Jeff Glen Bennett: Lucky Bob
Rob Paulsen: Mr. Smartypants, Sammy Melman, Shane Muldoon
Billy West: Chit Chatterson
James Wickline: Bill Straitman
Nora Dunn: Lydia Karaoke
Maurice LaMarche: Joseph Stalin

And so ends the 24 1/2 Hours saga. I hope you guys remember to read and review it.

(better make it another topic since I want this to have the same 24 responses robert's "24 Days" story did) Got to splitville, baby!