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A new story idea

August 7 2002 at 7:18 AM
 
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I have a story idea that's is great as our (mine and robert's) 24 1/2 Hours saga. I called it "Histeria: Metal Madness" (a sort-of parody of Sonic & Knuckles: Mecha Madness) In it, Loud faced off three deadly opponents...one of them is a robot version of himself! Check these out!

Metal Loud (Voiced by: Cody Ruegger)
This is, of course, the metal version of Loud, but evil. He was created for one purpose: the destruction of Loud Kiddington. Like Loud, he also yells but it caused more destruction to everything rather than ears.

Christopher Zarret (Voiced by: Christopher Walken)
Now here's a man who's crazy. A long time ago, he was Gene Burrows's friend and partner while in college. However, Gene double-crossed him and took all the credit for the work they did. Zarret was furious by this and vow vengeance on Gene. He decided on doing that by doing one thing: destroying the one foe Gene was unable to kill, Loud Kiddington.

Ricky Needs (Voiced by: Adam Sandler)
Once a thief on the streets, Zarret hired this guy to steal stuff for him. What role he will played in this story? We may find out!

So guys, what do you think of this story idea?

 
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Re: A new story idea

August 7 2002, 8:49 AM 

What time period would this fic be taking place, in our time? Also, it would be pretty strange in the long run to have left out this character of Gene's ex partner in all our bios of him. Although Gene stealing his ideas sounds very Gene like and it appears that, unlike other villains, Zarret really did have the best of intentions at the start, to get Gene, until he went to evil[but why didn't he go after him in all those years between college and Gene's first death?] Anyway, it sounds like if this goes through, you'll have given yourself and me two open targets for satire with our first Christopher Walken villain in our series[sure there was Wally Faust but he was from another show], and it'll be easy to find jokes for Adam Sandler's character.

 
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Answers and comments

August 7 2002, 9:10 AM 

1.Yes, in our time. Besides, where else can it begin?

2.It isn't new to me. I got this idea from seeing the sequel to Swan Princess. In the first one, the main villain didn't mentioned having a former partner. That's where this idea come in.

3.Well, he's sorta like Gene. He doesn't want to kill him and become a murderer. He figured he might ruined Gene's reputation by doing the one thing he never able to do: kill Loud.

4.What do you mean by "you'll have given yourself and me two open targets for satire with our first Christopher Walken villain in our series"? I wasn't cleared on that.

5.I bet you guys want to see how Adam Sandler's character in this story turned out!

 
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Re: Answers and comments

August 7 2002, 9:23 AM 

For the answer to no.4, I was trying to say that it'll be easy and fun to write for the characters voiced by Walken and Sandler, while also mentioning this is the first time we created a villain for Walken, though I've already written stuff with Wally Faust and Nikola Tesla. And Sandler, with his goofiness and his doing the same act for most of his movies except with different, goody voices, is an easy satirical target.

 
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