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Cloudy Nights

July 3 2008 at 12:41 PM
TigerintheShadows 
from IP address 72.147.76.111

I figured that I'd post a Warriors oneshot here, since not everything here has to be about Histeria, correct me if I'm wrong.
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Cloudy Nights

Nightcloud watched her kit, Breezepaw, go into the apprentice’s den with Harepaw, and she felt pride prick at her pelt. He had just been made apprentice, and was already acting like a warrior.

He was not only her kit, but Crowfeather’s as well. He had already loved Feathertail and Leafpool. But Feathertail was dead, and had belonged to RiverClan, and Leafpool was the ThunderClan medicine cat. He must have found out he loved her.

Just as she collected all these thoughts, Crowfeather walked up to her and meowed, “Do you want to go hunting?”

When Nightcloud nodded her consent, Crowfeather led her out of camp. He took the lead, and, by the looks of it, seemed to quickly forget that she even existed...

Or that they were hunting.

He walked down a path on the territory, a path that Nightcloud knew all too well.

“This...this is the way to ThunderClan territory, isn’t it?” she meowed, praying that it wasn’t true.

She got no response. Her heart sank, knowing that, with no response, Crowfeather’s heart was in another place altogether.

And as she looked at him, she thought suddenly, *He’s just trying to use me to prove he’s loyal. He doesn’t care about me or Breezepaw…not while Leafpool’s still around.*

As much as she hated to admit it, she had to face the facts: *Crowfeather loved Leafpool.*

She knew her name was Nightcloud, and as she stared at Crowfeather, who was looking longingly at the ThunderClan border...

Her night felt cloudier than ever.
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Now, I understand that many people in the Warriors fandom go, "i hat3 n1ghtcl0ud sh3 st0l3 cr0wy fr0m l3afy! !@#4r3214#@!$11! But the fact is, Nightcloud...did...*nothing*. Crowfeather did all the crap to her! He loved Feathertail, then loved Leafpool, and still does! The only reason he mated with Nightcloud was to look loyal! Nightcloud may be arrogant and aggressive, but the truth is, she's jealous because her mate is really in love with someone else--and the ThunderClan medicine cat. And the warrior code states that medicine cats can't fall in love. So it's really "cr0wy an l3afy" who are at fault--not "m3an old n1ghtcl0ud."

 

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