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The Tiger's story reviews

July 16 2008 at 2:47 PM
TigerintheShadows 
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From all I've read on this board.

Now, mind you, I'll have to do it by series rather than by story, or I'll be here for hours.

The 24 series: The origin of my favorite H! couple: Loud and Charity! Then there's Gene Burrows and William Shelton--the best villains since *The Lion King's* Scar (seriously, the only reason his plan didn't work was because he didn't tell the hyenas to bring back Simba's dead, bleeding broken body--but can we have something that violent in a Disney movie? Nooooooooooo--it's all about the sweet little animals with eyes as big as one of the moon's craters). Angst angst angst romance romance angst angst angst--robert, you're a genius. Add some comedy, though.

The 24 1/2 series: Just as good, but more comedic. And the ending is totally awesome--BB and friends are added!

Evil Histeria! series: If it took place in a different galaxy rather than a different universe (because I hate Stark's guts--you gotta be real desperate for action if you hate the guts of a fictional character).

R6's stories: They're hilarious. Seriously.

Disney's Jingle Heck series: Only two?

The H! Next Generation series: I love 'em. Seriously, write more. There are only, what, five? Write more!

Authors:

robert: Angst angst angst romance romance angst angst angst. You are a genius, and your comedy is good, too.

JusSonic: You're good, too--your grammar needs quite a bit of work, but your ideas are great, which evens it out. I really like the idea for "Loud to the Future." That would be so cool, for Loud to meet his future self and son and wife.

R6: Your ideas are great, you can write, and your slapstick is awesome--slapstick and political humor are what the cartoons today need to be funny, rather than the complete morons they use to create "humor."

JUSTIN: You started out well--but then you tried to get us to like couples that only you could think up--Frankencouples. Total thumbs down.

 

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