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The TOAST! Trailer

August 21 2001 at 7:51 PM
 
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(fade in....TO black?)

Pepper's voice: Toast? Can you hear me?

Smarty's voice: He's fine....but he hit his head pretty badly there. He's unconcious.

(QC to a LARGE, impressive lab. A goofy voice is heard talking to a scientist)

Voice: My show will finally air! And then I will hypnotize ALL the children who watch it! (pauses) Oh boy! And as a bonus, any parents watching it with thier kids will get to be hyptnotized too! Ha HAA!

Pule: So can I join you? Pleeeeaasse?

Toast: Sure, big guy! But first we gotta come up with a cool name for you!

(QC to Toast in pajamas by a bed. He has bandages on his head, and he is holding up a superhero costume in one hand)

Toast: I am....THE TOAST!

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I will try to make this humorous as well, though.
Yup-I'm back into fanfic writing....here's hoping this one goes well....

 
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Oops...

August 21 2001, 8:47 PM 

please insert this into reading the trailer, between the voice blabbing on how he hypnotizes children, and Pule speaking, add in a:

(QC to Pule and Toast in an alleyway that has crude implements of a home in it)

That's it; but I felt it was important...

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What do you guys think? Are you drooling with anticipation?

 
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