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~NEW~ There you were chap 3 "cool whip and ice-cubes" feedback please

by (Login Nickys_Angel)

 
okay this officailly sux..no wonder it's 3:40 in the morning

Chapter 3

"Well" Shawn smiled

"Umm..."she forced a fake smile "You know what..I totally agree with the girls" Belle said changing the subject and praying for it to work

It did "What do you mean" he cutely scrunched up his face is confusion.

" You are a Big Wet Fishy Whale" she smiled

"Oh really" Shawn grinned

"Yup"

"And if I understood correctly I read somewhere that "Big white fishy whales are incredibly attractive" Shawn flirted

"Ha.ha ha ha ha" Belle laughed "No way...now that I think of it..your more along the lines of a ...beaver..no wait a goat..a Goat Beaver" (authors note: can't you just imagine what a goat and beaver would look like combined , a bucked tooth stick & clothes, chewing, dam making, kicking, goat beaver...sorry it's late and I'm hyper)

"EXCUSE ME" Shawn stood up "What an insult" he pretended to be mad and walked into the living room with the girls, and sat down on the couch "Can you believe that your mommy, just called me a "Goat Beaver?" he asked the girls

Amy and Ally stopped playing and started to laugh uncontrollably "Now Saun's a "Big Wet Fishy Goat Beaver Whale" Amy said into between giggles

"I couldn't of said that better myself" Belle said as she walked over and sat on the couch besides Shawn, who was pouting Belle put her arm around his shoulders, "it'll be alright..I'm sure you'll get through this" she bust out laughing

"That's it, you are so going to get it"Shawn said as he pounced on Belle and started tickling her, she couldn't stop laughing

"Shawn stop it...ha ha he he...Shawn....awww..that tickles ..." He kept tickling her ribs "Shawn no...thats the worse spot...oops"

"Ha ha now I know your weak spot..." he kept tickling

"Me tickled too"

"Me" ally said after Amy, but Shawn and Belle were in their own little world

the girls repeated themselves over and over again, but still got no reply.

"Wet's go" Ally said pulling her sister into the kitchen

"Shawn stop it..your going to make to pee in my shorts.."Belle was crying, it tickled so much

"MUH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA"

"SHAWN BRADY..Stop this..right now or..or"

"Or you'll what..." Shawn teased getting closer to her face

"I'll......I don't know...just let me up"

"Wrong answer"shawn simply said and continued his tickle torture

"This will work"Amy said following her sister back into the kitchen and over to the couch again.. This time with something in hand.

"UGH..Shawn"

"Na na na na na... na na na na na" Shawn taunted "NA NA NA n..." he felt something smushy .hit the side of his face..he quickly stopped and looked at the direction of the girls. Belle..also looked...surprized and a little disappointed that he had stopped. There were the girls, with an XL tube of cool whip..they had managed to get on the bottom shelf in the fridge...the had a spoon each.

"What are you doi...."before Shawn could get another word out another blob of cool whip hit him, directly on the nose

Belle and the girls were giggling "lit's turn him in a snowman too girls, than he would be a Big Wet Fishy Goat beaver snow-man wh..."Shawn had grabbed a big handful of coolwhip and splatted it in her face

"Ooohh no way" Belle said

"FOOD FIGHT" Shawn yelled as he and the girls were throwing whipped cream all over the place...Belle snuck out to the kitchen and grabbed some ice..

"Belle...hey where are you"he yelled he and the girls were in a full force whipped cream fight...he was standing up.

"Right here hon"Belle said behind him as she hauled his pants out from the back and threw some ice cubs down in his boxers"

Shawn screamed with shock

"He he Saun sweames like a woman" Ally yelled

"Ally sweetie, don't flatter him...he screams like a GIRL" Belle said sweetly

"Ha ha very funny Belle.." Shawn said "You are so going to get it" Belle took of running into the hall and Shawn followed!

tbc???



Posted on Aug 9, 2001, 11:10 PM

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