Its ok Vix... You know sometimes you have to work thru the ugly
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to get to the true meaning of the story. No good author writes Goldilocks and Mother Goose all the time. Without the conflict you can have no resolution. IMHO I think this story is developing well and I am looking forward to the next installment.
Posted on Aug 14, 2000, 9:00 PM from IP address 216.93.69.181