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Poor Vix, all alone...Hey, Cel...

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...Find out your nephew's unit for me; I'll see if we can't find him and show him around, if he just got here. I'm in 596 Signal, attached to 125th Forward Support Battalion; we're right across from the movie theater, down Brown St.

We're going to Dallas, leaving Thurs around noon, visiting some of Monk's friends(Monk's real name is John Lafontaine, btw)all day, then we're going to NERO at 6pm Fri(check in time). We'll be there pretty much the rest of the weekend. I love four days. And thank goodness for the "Bulldog Olympics" to get us out of two days of work...

BTW, I qualified at the rifle range yesterday! Now, if Alpha doesn't screw up my records again...

Well, thanks for all the compliments on the story. I have somewhere to be at 6:30, or I'd write another installment. Plus, I don't have my notes with me right now. Is it really okay? I know it could stand some improvement...

Speaking of stories: Just WHERE is the next part of "Full Circle", huh? Don't leave us hanging! :) Lovin' Vixen's story so far. Keep 'em comin'.

Wow, am I in a goofy mood suddenly. Must be Siva's fault. I don't know how, it just is. I got sent too many jokes at once, I think. You and another two friends of mine. Ya'll gonna kill me someday...

Hugs and blue m&ms for all, ABD

Posted on Sep 1, 1999, 3:49 PM
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Look me up while in Dallas!

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I live here AND Full Circle will be going up in just a couple of minutes. Have patience, RL has gotten rather hectic lately. I'll try to find out Mason's battalion etc. and let you know.

Email me and I'll give you the skinny on Dallas!(will you be staying at the Paramount Hotel downtown maybe?)

Posted on Sep 1, 1999, 5:11 PM
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Check e-mail! I'm in Texas now!

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At John's friend's. Details in mail. Respond quick, if you can!

ABD :)

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Anybody out there? Howdy! n/t

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8>)

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Salvation II

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His fingers left her lips and brushed her cheeck, and he smoothed back her wet hair, damply glistening in the sun, and soon his hand was cupping the back of her head, and their lips met. Her hands braced themselves on his shoulders, and he tried to convince himself that the hot wetness he felt from her face wasn't tears, but he could taste salt, and feel her shudder, fighting against sobs.

Methos wanted to believe this would make it right, but perhaps nothing would. He kept kissing her, and lay her back against the ground, and her hands no longer gripped his shoulders, but she was pulling him closer to her, and he covered her. She broke off their lips' embrace, and nestled her head against his neck. And he could still feel her tears.

He caressed her hair. "Shhh," he whispered trying to soothe her. And his hand cupped one of her breasts, and she seemed to lean harder against him. Her arms held him tighter, and she moved her legs that he might rest more comfortably--but then...


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Her breath was coming in gasps, almost gasps of pleasure--how could he know that as he moved against her she looked up at the sky, and it seemed to go on for miles, and she felt small and powerless? She looked at the clouds and felt she was seeing the emptiness of the heavens--the absence of gods and the indifference of fate. The warmth of Methos against her skin was all that tied her to reality, and then it struck her, a strange thing--

He was all she had. She had nothing. He had *saved* her...and she knew what that meant, and she breathed,

"Methos...stop....I beg you..."

"Anna," he responded, and his lips were against hers again, and was pushing him, trying to stop him. "Just let me..." But he couldn't finish what he was saying...and then he shuddered against her, and it was over.

He rested his head on her shoulder.

"Methos...I...want to go back..."

"Anath-Sin, you know better than anyone that you can not. You have nothing to go back to. You are dead."

She looked up at the sky again. So endless. So empty. She relaxed, accepting her situation, and then he continued,

"You have nothing but me."





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I thought I posted a bit...where did it go?n/t

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Ah, there it goes!n/t

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Salvation

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She barely seemed alive--she was mute, strange, distant, like a ghost. He rode on, heading toward the river. She was a mess, blood-covered and wide-eyed, and the best thing for her would be to get the blood and dirt off. She would be more herself then.

He thought to speak to her.

"Anath-Sin, you *will* be all right."

She slumped up against him, unable to stay upright. He looked over his shoulder. Her eyes had turned up in her head. This would never do. He stopped the horse, and dismounted. He pulled her down, roughly.

"Anath-Sin---Anna!!" he then called, sharply, and slapped her face.

She was gone.

And so he dragged her to the river. She was easily led, like a child. And when she was thrown in, she gasped, and he realized she would be fine. She was fighting him, and she began to curse. He held her head under the water as she kicked and struggled.

"Come back...damn...would you..." he gasped--himself now a bit put out.

He let her head come out of the water. She glared at him.

"Methos...I hate you."

"You do not," he answered, and ducked her head back under.

***********

He dragged her from the water, and they were close against each other. She clung to him, tightly, as if she did not dare to let go of him. She shivered, even in the heat, and he stopped, and his embrace grew tighter, and he felt her yield to him. She was also holding him tightly, and he realized how cold, how empty she must be.

"Come on, lay down, dry off," he murmured, and helped her down to the ground.

"I don't...hate you...Methos," she whispered, and her eyes were flooding with tears.

He let himself kneel in the sand beside her, and again was holding her. But she was so weak, so sad. He brushed his fingers over those lips, full, trembling, and was overcome.

He wanted her.


Posted on Aug 31, 1999, 12:07 AM
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ATTENTION MEMBERS OF THE DOBC!!

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Our mail list is down and cannot be found so I have created another mail list on listbot.com .

You need to go and subscribe to it there. It is a private list as the other was so we can have our own DOB conversations there.

I also need for each of you to contact me individually as I want to talk to you about something I have which you might be interested in seeing. VEG

and here is something I tried to send before I found out that the mail list was down.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO EIRAWEN AND STAR DANCING!!!!

May your days be happy and carefree with a lot of blue icing!

We lost Dunkie-Junkie off the mail list ladies. :-( Are we dying here? C'mon we can do better than this can't we??

OK Let me see if I can stir things up here...I confess I did a naughty thing yesterday. However, being DOB that I am I can truely say that I am not ashamed of myself although I should be.

Whatever am I talking about? Remember my last post to this mail list about VP in the film "Rowing In The Wind"? Well, I went and rented it then did some *certain* captures from it for those of us who might not be able to locate the movie.

AHEM....IF any of you DOB's want a copy of the captures just to see what's *there* email me privately and I'll send them out.

I know that this might be offensive to some of you but I only did it out of curiousity. And the movie is a bit strange too but VP doesn't do too bad in it as far as the acting goes.

Has anyone else seen this flick? OR has anyone seen "The Thomas Crown Affair" yet? I heard it's not bad but I'd like your opinions if you've seen it!

And who's going to be in chat tonight? I was there last weekend but no one else showed up. I'll be there if someone else will too, ok? Let me know.

Gotta run! Take care and have a great Sunday!

Posted on Aug 29, 1999, 9:44 AM
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DOBC Chat Info

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How about a reposting of the Chat Schedule and where one should go if interested... as for the screencaptures... some of us who have previously seen the film are delighted that the rest of you now have an opportunity to share in the 'vision.'

All smuttiness <eg> aside, I enjoyed "RWTW" on its own merits.

Posted on Aug 29, 1999, 3:59 PM
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I liked the movie too

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and I thought it was a tad odd in places but a fairly well acted film. It was interesting to see VP playing Shelly and as interesting to see him without Kronos' scar or attitude.

I could have done without the monster bit but I wish they had gone into a little more depth about both Shelly and Lord Byron's relationship. It was certainly a friendly rivalry, wasn't it?

Chat is held every Sunday evening from 9:00 CST to whenever we all leave.

here's the link <a href="http://forums.delphi.com/celedon/start/"> Highland Mists forum</a>and make sure you click on chat at the top of the page. The chat room takes a few minutes to load.

Posted on Aug 29, 1999, 6:34 PM
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I'm still here...........

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I'm just able to respond right away.

I just can't seem to get back on my feet and I'm starting not to really care anymore. The fatigue is overwhelming and some days I don't even wanna get out of bed. I guess it's just been a bad day for me. More like a bad year.

I'll stop whining now.

Take care,

DJ

Posted on Aug 29, 1999, 10:21 PM
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see my brain is fried.......

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It should have read, "I'm just NOT able to respond right away.

Posted on Aug 29, 1999, 10:23 PM
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geez!!! I WONDER WHY, DJ? *G*

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it's not like you have your hands full or anything! I mean 5 kids is a breeze--NOT! Sweetie, do come back to the mail list for me please? We all care about what is happening to you and we want to keep you in the fold of the DOBC!
I don't care how long it takes for you to respond--doesn't matter. What matters is YOU!

Have you thought about going to a counselor about the depression or whatever you want to call it? There's plenty of them that are on a sliding scale fee set-up and occasionally they provide child care.

Godzilla needs to help you out more!

Email me, please! Let's talk this out!

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Jerkzilla, he ain't no god...... : )

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Since I have been not feeling well thats what he's pretty much been a major jerk!

I did try to find counciling, but the person on the help line made me feel stupid so I just hung up on them. I'm in some major need of it, not just for my own good but also for my kids. They don't need a mom who is sad all of the time.

I also don't need that B@st@rd using it against me in court if I do get counciling. I can just see it now. " well your honor, my wife is not capable of caring for our kids cause she's a nut case!"
Of course he'll fail to mention that he's the one that made me one! Geez......life sucks don't it?!

PEACE,

DJ

Posted on Aug 30, 1999, 12:04 PM
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DJ listen to me

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call that shelter NOW! You cannot go on like this for eternity! YOu are wasting away your life by staying there. It's not good on the kids as you know to see you like this nor is that kind of environment good for them to grow up in.

Call another social service agency--there must be a lot out where you live. If one doesn't help, another might and do a heck of a better job of it. Don't just settle for things, Mari. Settle for much better things and stand your ground.

Like I said last year--you need to go and take the kids with you. The shelter will take you in!
CALL THEM!!

Please, for both you and the kids as well as me?

Let me know what happens.

I care.

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Connections 2: Flashback...

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1508, Northern Highlands, Scotland

Methos just barely managed to catch the sleeping child as both she and the woman who had been holding her slid off the horse. Colleen managed to stay upright as the petite woman fell against her. She was thin, and extremely pale. Obviously ill, she struggled to stay awake. Collen's hand came away from her back, covered in blood. Methos handed her the child and took chare of the woman.

Katherine MacCleary, besides being ill, had a knife wound in her lower left side. She looked up at Methos as he laid her on the rough bed in Colleen's cottage. "Donald's...dead...Brought the...girl...He's coming...to kill her..."

"Who, Katie? Who's coming for the child? Why?"

"She's...one of you...says she...must die...called her a...'wildling'...protect her-please!"

Methos swallowed. Donald and Katherine MacCleary were his friends; Donald for almost two hundred years now. Eight years ago, the couple had taken in a foundling infant, a newborn discovered in the woods the night of Beltain. They had named the child Alynore, and raised her as their own daughter. Methos had warned Donald; Immortals didn't have happy family lives. Now it looked as if someone had taken advantage of MacCleary's vulnerability. But why go after a child that wasn't even in the Game yet?

Wildling. He'd learned-the hard way, of course-what kind of Immortal that was years ago. Which could only mean...

The feel of another Immortal struck him. Colleen shushed the suddenly restless child in her arms. From the far end of the room, she watched him with her big, blue eyes, pleading with him. He cursed under his breath as a horse came to a sudden halt outside.

He grabbed his sword and went to the door. On a large black stallion, Miguel Talrizzio glared down at him. Once, he might have considered Talrizzio a riding partner, an ally. Maybe in his younger, wilder days. Now the ruthless man was someone who wanted his head, and the child's besides. He'd kill Katherine and Colleen to acheive his objective, since both mortals would fight to their dying breath to protect the girl, and each other.

Methos would not allow that.

"Step aside, old man; I only want one thing," Talrizzio snarled, jumping down off the horse. Rain began to fall, as the storm that had been threatening all day finally broke.

Methos said nothing; he simply raised his sword in unspoken challenge. 'I can't believe this; Donald managed to get me in one last troublesome situation, even from the grave...' All thoughts ceased when Talrizzio swung.

Instinct, and thousands of years experiance, took over. Parry, parry, jab, dodge, parry, slash, slash, parry. He fell into a rythm, a dance of blades and blood; the same he'd been fighting for forty-five hundred years. He was so tired of it.

Talrizzio over-extended, allowing Methos to slam his hilt into the man's back. Talrizzio hit the ground. Methos kicked his saber away, and swung for the neck as the younger Immortal stuggled to his knees.

The Quickening came with all its force, pain, and joy. The evening sky exploded in thunder and lightning as the power joined with that of the storm. Methos found himself on his knees in the mud as the rain pounded down and thunder rumbled in the distance. He shakily made it to his feet, retrieved his sword from where he'd dropped it, and went back to the cottage, thinking it was a very good thing Colleen lived away from Cameron Manor.

A blanket lay over the remains of Katherine MacCleary, and Colleen was singing a lullaby to the small, fragile-looking child in her arms. Methos took the body outside. He put both on Talrizzio's horse and took her to the manor, a half-hour's ride away. The priest took over from there.

He returned to the herbalist's cottage the next morning. Alynore shyly hid behind Colleen as he rode up.

"Good mornin', David. Everythin's taken care of?" She asked as he tied his mount.

"Katherine's funereal is being handled." He paused, then looked into those devastating eyes. "I'm leaving, Colleen. I'll return in a year or so...If any others of my kind are nearby, they'll know last night's storm was a bit...unusual. They might come for me." He put his hand aginst her cheek. Her eyes looked into his, holding back tears. "I don't want you to get hurt," he whispered.

He didn't want the Immortal living a few miles to the north knowing he was there; the man had a reputation as a headhunter. He was also afraid it would attract attention to the girl. He knew without asking that Colleen was keeping her; she knew the risks and consequences of loving an Immortal. More than anything else, Colleen wanted to be a mother; but if she married him, she would never have children. Alynore was hers now.

Methos stayed that day, and that night. by morning, he was saddling his horse when he heard a faint noise at the door of the little barn, felt the Pre-Immortal buzz. He turned and looked at Alynore.

She looked up, her brown eyes wide. "Yer goin' away?" She asked in her quiet little voice.

He ruffled her hair, still sleep-tangled. "Just for awhile, elfling. When I come back, I'll take you and Colleen with me to...wherever it is I'll be going."

The girl smiled shyly; the first he'd seen since her arrival. He looked her over carefully, in case he didn't come back soon; blonde hair, brown eyes, ears that looked just slightly, almost, pointed. She had a very slim frame, giving her that fragile appearance. He knew, however, this child was quite a bit more than she seemed, though many, including herself, wouldn't realize that for a long time.

Methos swung up on his horse and rode away, not looking back. He and Colleen had said their farewells-never good-bye-last night.

Three years would pass before he returned.

Posted on Aug 28, 1999, 2:47 PM
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Back for a few...

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...Spent all the time left writing... Okay. Well, Army stuff. Yuck. 'nuff said there. Josh has been sick all week, has CQ duty today, missing the Larp tonight(but I'm going! hehehe...). Company car wash this morning; fun. Not really, but y'know. Sgt Waters approved my mileage pass, so I can go to the NERO event in Texas next weekend. I'll explain Nero if anyone's interested. It'll be my first event, so I'm not all that clear. I'm having a hard time at work; Tuesday I go back to the range(hmmm; maybe we'll get our much-needed rain now...) and life has just been dull in general. Gotta go; learning center's ready to close. I might post later from Seaton Hall(Larp).

ABD

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where in Texas, Alicia?

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maybe I can meet you.

Also, my nephew is stationed there too at Ft. Riley. You might want to look him up--he's a great guy, former football player, good looking, and will be 22 in a couple of weeks! I can't remember what company he's with off the top of my head but his name is Sean Mason Clark--goes by the name of Mason. I love him to pieces; I'm also very proud of him. I think he's a private....

Check around and see if you can locate him, ok? :-)

I like your story and your writing style very much!

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i'm loving it deary...:) nt

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Full Circle Chapter 23 First half tonight, rest tomorrow!

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Greece

All throughout the long march south both armies played an intricate game of hide and go seek as one might see a child play. There was one big difference however: this was no game. People died during the skirmishes between both the Goths and Romans with death claiming both the innocent and the soldiers irregardless of who they might be.

The weather was hot and getting hotter the further south they went; the terrain rough and hard on the horses. It was a good place to hide and attack an unsuspecting group of soldiers who had been sent out to scout ahead of the approaching army. Darius put the terrain to good use hiding his men in the mountains or lying in wait for the Romans to come through a small pass before attacking.

The skirmishes were often brief but violent as blood spilled into the small streams and men fought and died upon their commander’s orders. Often Darius defied the odds and slipped away from the grasp of Stilicho before suffering any great loss of men, equipment and horses much to the Roman’s chagrin.

Stilicho had given him a nickname: Snake. And to his mind Darius was just that, a snake that needed to be wiped out forever providing he could catch him and destroy his army. He sighed as he looked around the stark yet beautiful landscape of Greece and remembering other battles that had been fought here, other men who had died, other losses of other general’s reputations and lives when they failed to win a great victory for Rome. Where did they go this time? he wondered as he shielded his eyes with one hand to look off into the distance. And how long would it take them to find them again? What he needed was an edge, an advantage to make sure that Darius would not slip away ever again without his knowing about where they intended to go and what their plans were.

He paced to and from, hands clasped behind his back as he thought. He knew that he needed someone to infiltrate their army, someone who would pass as a Goth—preferably someone with the fair hair many of the Goths seemed to possess. “Constantine!” he bellowed. “Assemble the men. I want to inspect them.”

Constantine’s brow knitted together in anger at the order; his mouth thinned while his eyes shot a killing blow if such a thing had been possible towards his co-commander. He jerked around the reins and went to assemble the men as he was ordered to do.

Alaric woke up, blinking and stared in the darkness towards his hand, which trembled violently. He rubbed at his eyes with his one good hand then sat up knowing what would be coming next. For some time he had experienced massive bouts of both dizziness and nausea that sickened him but in the time that they had been on the move towards Athens another symptom had arisen: seizures.

The tremors slowly crept up his arm as the muscles stiffened and cramped then followed across his shoulders until finally he fell to the earth and lay there as his body jerked violently in spasms and his eyes rolled back into his head so that only the whites showed. A small dribble of saliva dripped from one corner of his mouth and he grunted and uttered noises like a pig but he was unable to stop himself from doing it.

After a few minutes that seemed to have been stretched out into hours, his seizures slowed then ceased altogether and he lay gasping for breath. Never had he experienced such as one as this before and he hoped he never had to again. He shook his head to clear it but the dizziness and blurred vision remained with him.

Closing his eyes he reached out to feel around for the animal skin he used for a blanketand pulled it down upon him before curling up into a tight ball and drifting off to sleep. His last thoughts were bleary but he still knew of his goal: Athens.

And Athens was only a day's ride ahead--if they were lucky enough not to encounter Rome's armies one last time before reaching the city's gates.

That thought lulled him into a deep slumber which someone who saw him might have mistaken as one who might be a corpse. And in it's own way, it would have been a true assessment.

He was slowly dying.

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I wanted to pace myself--story won't let me--And Never Let Go VIII

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"Naram-Sin!" U'bad screamed. She could not find the boy...he had disappeared without a trace. She could already tell that he would be nothing but trouble. For a moment, a horror crossed her mind--the thing they were doing down by the tombs. She had to find him.

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He crouched in the stone doorway and made himself small, so as not to be seen. The crowd of people seemed so somber...not a mob, just people. His heart jumped when she was pushed into the center of them...and they said words like "traitor!" and "whore!" He wanted to run, to stop them, but he knew she wanted him to be brave. He stayed where he was, but watched intently. He couldn't tear his eyes away.

She seemed to to pace, to wander as if in a dream, and then the first stone his her. She turned, instinctively, and then covered her face. Another hit her, and she staggered, and nearly fell. And then, it was as if she knew it was no use. She flung her arms open, and let them pelt her head, her face. Her lips moved as if in a prayer before she was clipped in the jaw, and the light went out in her eyes, and she slumped face downwards on the ground. And still the rocks came, covering her.

He bit his hand, knowing he might scream, and then perhaps he would be found.

It was over. The people walked away. Some even seemed to smile. And still he watched her form, lifeless, blood-and-dirt-spattered, half-buried. There was nothing to be done. But then he thought he saw something like a shadow across the face of the sun.

Was the sun playing tricks? Was it a dream?

Time stood still. She stirred. Her head lifted, and she seemed like a blind old woman as she pulled herself up to her hands and knees. She crawled, like a beast might crawl, and spit came out of her mouth, and then, she was on her feet.
He wondered if such a thing could be.

******

She turned, weak, in pain, the taste of death and dust in her mouth as she felt the approach, and saw the figure on horseback bearing down in her direction. The sun and the sting of sweat and blood half-blinded her, and she could not make out his face, she only knew she must accept her fate.

Naram-Sin watched as the figure lifted her and bore her away, and was still watching the woman he thought of as his mother disappeared. So long as she lived, he would see her again, he was certain.

She would never let go.

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If anyone knows (or cares) about the method to my madness--

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I can't help this--the wretched thing has been chewing me up and doesn't have the grace to spit me out! (The story is only going to get darker from here... just wanted you to know.)

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(Oh, why not...) And Never Let Go VII

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Her own eyes went wide at the sound--it was no supposed to be this way, just she and the boy, and a few words...but then she realized that she had done it again--she simply hadn't thought. She went to the door, and had her sword drawn.

"Anna!" Naram-Sin shreiked. He knew what it was she carried--the thing she wouldn't let him see. She kept it beneath her bed, and when he tried to touch it once, she nearly whipped him. But he knew it to be a sword, and always wondered why she kept it hid--such a pretty thing...her sword. And now she had it ready to kill his father.

As he had hoped.

She tried to make her voice calm.

"Shhh, please, love, don't say anything, just...be still. I must speak with your father, and explain. Be brave--you told me you would?"

He bit his lips and stared at her dark form against the door. He could hardly see her--only the outline of her form and the glint off of the copper of her weapon--and then she cracked open the door, and held the point of the sword at the throat of Manishtusu. And then she began to walk him backwards, out of the room.

She was not to return.

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"So, you came here, knowing full well what it would mean to you," Manishtusu said, coldly. Two men were proceeding towards them...would she dare kill a Prince of the Realm before witnesses? Would that not mean her head? She lowered the blade.

"You stole him from me when I meant to give him up to you. You gave me no chance...not to say any parting words, or leave him with my love."

He snorted. "You? As if you were that child's true mother. We both know better."

The words stung like the blow of a whip. Her eyes flooded with tears. BUt she had to speak...she could not let that go unanswered.

"No? I have raised him, loved him these last seven years...where were you? Do you not know that when I was lonely, he was the light of my eyes? When he was frightened, when he had evil dreams--I was beside him in the night...and when I was afraid, he was beside me. You think I'm no mother to him? Look at his eyes, some time. And you'll see me in them!"

Manishtusu's face hardened. If what this whore was saying was the truth--could she really have--? And did that not call into question his own claim to the child? But his answer was the law--it would be as written.

He turned to the men.

"She will be stoned in the morning."

As he began to walk away, and the men seized her, she spoke her last words to Manishtusu--

"If you have any heart, you will not allow Naram-Sin to know of this--or he will hate you. He will hate you until the day you die, and even after your death. And I would not have him bear this sorrow of losing me twice-over..."

For she would survive the indignity of stones...and she could even bear the exile of another death...but she wondered what this sight might do to her child.

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acckkk...no not this, sigh.

by Isolde

oh no, you can't do this to her, its..inhuman I tell you, grrrrr. "g"

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And Never Let Go VI

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The horse was ridden by a woman possessed, and looked it...foam-flecked, nostrils flaring, and drops of spittle streaming from the poor beast. And as for the state of the rider--unspeakable. The half-naked creature rode, blood-red, sweat-soaked tangles falling to the waist, and eyes like the threat of a storm or the fury of a God.

She barely thought to pause, to water the horse, to feed herself...she did these things automatically, without thought, her mind had none. It was habit and instinct alone that guided her, now.





WHen the city of Uruk lay before her, she was reminded of the time of Gilgamesh...of the time of Dmuzzi. There was a time when this city lie, vulnerable, so easily wasted by a handful of men who possessed only the will to destroy. Now, in the time of Sargon, the cities stood strong--Uruk, Agade, even her own home of Nippur. Had she really helped to build this house? Yes.

And could she destroy it?

Yes.

She tied her horse to a fig tree and lay in the heat of the sun outside the walls of the city, and waited for night fall. She slept the sleep of the just. She dreamed of blood.

******

It was not so long, not so very long ago, that Sharrukkin had welcomed her into the palace, and they spoke as friends. Perhaps it was twenty years, surely not more. It stood now as it did then...a place of bricks...cold, forbidding, she always thought. Can people who sleep in such places know the gods?

She met with a guard. He died easily, his throat cut like that of a sacrifice. His blood ran out onto the ground...her offering to gain entrance. She scaled the wall, knowing exactly with chamber held her own. She slipped through the casement, soundlessly.

He was awake. His eyes were round, luminous in the moon-light.

"Anna? Is that you?"

She closed her eyes and felt her heart beat naturally for once.

"My love, I had to find you...I had to say 'good-bye'..."

But then she heard the sound at the door, and realized that this "good-bye" might be only too real.

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And Never Let Go V

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But as fate would have it, they would be taking seperate routes.



She awoke to the smell of flames, and the sound of women shreiking, and her eyes were already tearing up and her throat was full of the name of one man...

"Manishtusu!" she said, her voice hoarse. She bounded out of bed, knowing what this was, yet being powerless to stop it. Nanshe streaked past her, and grabbed at her arm--

"My lady! They have seized Naram-Sin! It is horror! They would not hear reason!"

She looked at the fright on the eyes of one of her women, and she could not feel her own fear--only anger, and rage. She had been willing to give up the child--why does he now try this outrage upon them? And she went back to her bed, and reached underneath for the bundle that had lay there, untouched for some fifteen years.

A sword, copper, carved with serpents, deadly as snake-bite, and unused for so long--but in this instance, its use was called for.

And then she felt the pain, an object cracking the back of her head, and warmth trickling down her neck, as everything went black and she sunk to the floor. Nanshe shreiked, and knelt, spreading out her arms to cover her lady, an\s the men went their way into the night.




"We thought you were dead," Ninsug said, as Anath-Sin's eyes fluttered open.

"How you lost so much blood and yet survived is a wondrous thing," Nanshe agreed.

But Anath-Sin barely heard them. Against their protests, she rose to her feet. They could not be far off...not carrying a small boy. She found her sword where it had clattered to the ground when she had fallen, and she held it. The feel was not unfamiliar, not unwelcome, and she knew what she had to do.

"Make ready my steed," she said.

"What would you mean to do?" the women spoke, almost in unison.

"What they have done must be avenged," she said, simply.

And they were afraid, for they had never seen her face so cold, and so full of madness.



Once she had mounted the horse, she leaned into the wind, and thrust her heels against its side, her sword strapped against her back and her breasts as bare as any slaves'. She knew no decorum or sense of place, only single-minded focus...

To find her child. They would head to Uruk. That was all she needed to know.

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OH NO!!!!!!

by Isolde

my goodness, this is an ugly thing. Wow, she is certainly someone I would not want to run into now. yikers.
Very cool vixen, this is getting me a little nervous, I think this is a really wonderful story you are twisting here. 'g'


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Full Circle chapter 22 second half

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Rome

Once more the great Roman armies lined up in front of the walls of Rome to protect her from the barbaric horde and once more, Greyson looked at them and laughed at the sight. Turning to his aide he said, “And now mighty Rome comes once more to beg for mercy from us.” His eyes shifted towards the cloud of dust that galloped towards them away from the gates of Rome and towards his army.

So Rome had sent an emissary to negotiate with him, he thought as he watched the small band of men fast approaching. He shifted his weight and flung back his sleeves so that his hands would be free to fight if the need arose. He carefully checked his weapons, adjusting them as needed for both comfort and accessibility, then glanced once more at the men on horseback to check on their progress. He noted that they were close; he nudged his horse forwards to meet them with his aides on either side of him.

Gandor, his most trusted aide, rode on his left. He had ridden with both Darius and Greyson for years and had proven himself to be a trustworthy and loyal man who knew how to follow any command no matter what it might be. He glanced at Greyson noting the hardness in his features and knew that the Romans were certainly not going to be granted any mercy by his lord. Crossing himself as well as making a sign against any evil that might befall them , he finally broke the silence that had gathered upon them. “Are we going to sack it?” he asked as one who knew he had the right to speak his mind around his lord and was respected for it by Greyson.

Greyson raised a hand; all three of them pulled to a stop as did the Romans who kept their distance. “Wait and see what happens, Gandor. It will be up to them.” He looked over the five men that Rome had sent out to talk with them, noting softly under his breath as he passed a glance over them one by one, ”Senator, soldier, soldier, priest.” He hawked and spat on the ground by the Senator then raised his eyes to meet the Roman’s own steady gaze. He smiled but the smile lacked any kind of warmth.

The man who Greyson had assessed correctly as being a senator spoke up after clearing his throat. “Why do you come to Rome’s gates?”

Greyson looked back at his swollen army of men before replying. “To feed ourselves, Senator. Why else?” His hand gripped the pommel of his sword; the senator’s eyes caught the movement and followed it with his eyes. Again the cold smile appeared on his face.

“You and your men are ordered to disband immediately by order of your emperor. You have broken ties with Rome; Rome however, is willing to forgive your killing of it’s citizens as well as this whole uprising if you disband.” The senator looked over the man who he was talking to, noting the unkempt hair, the dirty face as if he had ridden some distance, the powerful arms, the hawk-like face. He was disgusted to be near him and wished again that someone else had been chosen to try to negotiate with the barbarians.

Sneering, Greyson replied as he lifted his sword to throat level, “Disband? That’s not likely. I tell you what, senator whoever you are, you go tell the Emperor that the Goths do not take orders from him, nor do we accept Rome’s generosity.” He glanced to his left and right at his aides then started to laugh, making the Romans uneasy. Turning to his aides, he translated from the Latin as to what had been said to him causing his aides to join in the laughter. They exchanged glances between themselves as the Goths continued to laugh. Without warning, Greyson rode up between them and slashed outwards with his sword at the senator’s exposed neck then rode off to peer at his handiwork as the senator’s head went sailing to one side.

For what seemed to be an eternity, the body sat on the horse’s back as dual fountains of blood spurted upwards from the severed arteries and veins in the neck as the last few heartbeats extinguished themselves. The sweet yet acrid smell of blood filled the air causing the horse to become wild-eyed in fright; one of the other Roman soldiers still in shock, grabbed onto it’s reins to keep it from bolting. Slowly, it toppled to the ground and lay in a pool of crimson that slowly grew as it seeped from the body.

Greyson dismounted, walked over to the head and picked it up by the hair then stared at the now frozen expression on the senator’s face. He looked upwards at the the remaining soldiers who had done nothing nor had raised a weapon when the man they swore to protect had been killed. Shielding his eyes, he walked over to Gandor and held out his hand.

Immediately a slightly bowl shaped wooden shield with metal bosses on it was handed over to him and without looking, he unceremoniously plopped the head onto it before handing it over to the one soldier who seemed to be the one most likely in charge now. “You tell Theodonius that he has twenty-four hours to either give me a reason not to burn Rome to the ground or his head will be upon a platter like this. Do you understand?

The old soldier nodded and jutted his chin at the others to gather up the body. Once it had been slung over his horse, they rode off to tell the Emperor what the barbarian had said and of his ultimatum.

Greyson watched them depart before driving his sword into the ground, ever watchful of the mass of well-trained Legions that faced his own army. “Tonight we stay here. Give the orders.”

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IF no one is reading this story anymore on this board

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then I will move on over to my site where it is also located in a more edited and a little different version than what is seen here.

If anyone who is reading it wants me to keep posting it here, please let me know that. I'm not sure if it's still as good as some have said it is.

Could someone give me some more feedback on this story please so I can improve whatever writing I do?

thanks!

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I am!

by Bella Derby

This story is one of the main reasons I check this board! Please keep posting it here :-)

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Me, I'm reading it as well...

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Hi , I have been reading but have fallen several post behind in the past week or so. I have been very busy with family. Please keep it up, I love it. and promise to give feedback. ((BH))

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Please, Cel, do continue posting it here!

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It is a wonderful story, and I have not responded as I have been in fried-hard-drive hell--but I've been following it and do look forward to its developments!

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Your hard drive fried?

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ewwwwwwwwwwww....
You have my pity...it happened to me a few months ago.

How soon before you are fully functional again or are you now and was borrowing one before?

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Ten days or so before the shop returns my baby...

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or so they say...and currently...and for the last few days, I've been dependent on Hubby'd computer...but he works the Net as long as I'm wont to do--so I don't get my crack at it until the wee hours! And the last few nights...I've fallen asleep well before he gives it up. So my return on e-mails and the like has been seriously negilgent...ditto my posting my own story...and so on, and so on...Crud! I need my own computer!

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Needed Board Admin

by trollheart

No I'm not dumping ya'll. Here's the deal though. You got a years notice on this 'cause I wanna get someone in mind now and not worry later 'cause I got enough to worry about just to PLAN this thing.

I'm planning a vacation next June/July. I'll be gone for 3 weeks and will most likely be without a computer for that time, I might have one in PA but after that i prolly wont. I'll need someone to watch the board while I'm gone. You wont have to do anything other then deleting any meanie posts that might pop up at that time and jumping in in the event of a flame war.

I've got someone in mind to run the mail list and have already... uh... suggested it ;?) so now I need someone for the board. Who's willing?

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E-mail me

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I don't know anything about maintaining a board,but if you think you could teach me I would be willing to cover for you for a few weeks. I enjoy this board a lot. I do a lot of lurking, but don't have very much to say.

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(Posting while the posting's possible) And Never Let Go IV

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He had nothing to say to that, and simply turned. He wanted to try asking her again if she would come with him, after all, if she no longer had to look after the boy, why would she not join him this time? Wouldn't that be what she needed? She was growing soft. He left silently, and she watched him leave. Wasn't the first time, she imagined it wouldn't be the last time they parted like this. With nothing to say.

She turned, herself, and looked at Naram-Sin, and wondered if he knew or felt what was about to happen. And, the thought being more than she could bear, she knelt, placed her hand on the floor, and lowered herself. She sat there, her eyes tearing. The boy came to her.

"Anna, why do you look so sad?"

She reached her hand to his face. Oh, those eyes. They broke her heart, they always did--it was as if he knew her moods, her thoughts. It was as if he were wiser than a child should be, and maybe it was her fault. She brushed his dark hair back, and then the mother in her took over, and she pulled him to her lap and held him. He was not a baby, perhaps he was too old to be held this way, but what did it matter? She would soon find her arms empty of him...best hold him while she could.

"Anna?"

She let him call her that. She would never let him call her mother--that lie would be too great.

"My son, if we were...not to...see each other, for a long time, for a very long time, would you remember me?"

His eyes became so large with the horror of the thought that she hated herself for asking, and held him tight, and tried not to cry, but did. And then, she realized she had to fix this, somehow...and so she spoke, "I will try to prevent that. I don't want to ever go away from you, but perhaps I must....I want you to know I'll never let go..." It was no good.

So young, so small, so fragile. SHe wondered what he would be like as he grew, and this thought almost racked her anew...wasn't she supposed to be there? Shouldn't she get to see him grow to manhood? It was unbearable to her, that she should miss the best years of his life. BUt she gathered herself together, and released him from her rough grip, and let him leave her lap.

"You will be good, for your father, won't you?"

He nodded, but his eyes were down-cast.

"And you will be brave, for me?"

And she knew he always would.

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Continuation--you know how it is...

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She smiled at him, and rose to her feet. There was much to plan, but it would be easy, now. Manishtusu, in his own, hard-headed way, in insisting she bring the boy to Uruk, had made life simpler for her...for did not Uruk lie to the south, away from Eshnunna? Though it was then a doubling-back to go from thence to Akkad, she certainly felt more of a comfort heading away from the direction Akkasur would come.

If anything was to be easy about this.



She knew what was happening in her heart, and didn't like it. She was beginning to pull away, beginning to move on in her own mind. Maybe it was all she knew to do--love, move on. Moving on was an Immortal's way of life, after all.

Holding on, loving, torturing herself--how mortal. How *human*. She grit her teeth and steeled herself against it...no use. A pain hit her in the chest...almost like dying that small death...only self-inflicted. Her nails bit into her palms, and drew blood. And she let herself *feel* it, as if the physical pain drove out the pain in her heart.

The next morning, they would go to Uruk.

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And Never Let Go III

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She cared from him, but was well aware that there was no one on this earth who could irritate her more. This thought occured to her when she realized just *how* he had found out that Akkasur was still after her.

"So just *how* did you find that Akkasur was as close as Eshnunna, and just *why* would you be close enough to know what he intended?" she demanded, at length.Methos looked down, sheepishly. A mere boy not yet a thousand, he scarcely knew all there was to know about dealing with creatures like Akkasur.

"Do not bother answering!" she then snapped, holding up a hand as he was about to make some excuse. Then, she softened. "You were thinking of me, weren't you?"

He nodded.

"Don't. You can't fight my battles for ...."

"And you *won't* fight them for yourself!" he fumed. "You brought this on yourself, and you won't let me..." A look crossed his face, and he asked, suddenly,"Why didn't you just take his head?"

Anath-Sin paused. It was a different time, a different place, a different code of justice they knew then.

"It wasn't his head that offended me," she answered, simply.

He couldn't stand anymore of her talk. "You simply did what occured to you--you never think!"

"Lower your voice," she hissed, nodding in the direction of the boy. She would not have him hear a harsh word spoken to her in front of him...he was a child, but strangely protective of her.

"You never think," Methos whispered, and his eyes were more sad than furious, and he placed his hand on her face and brushed back her hair. "You were angry when you ordered it done. You do these things...like adopt this boy, and then you pay the price. And then you wonder why."

It was true, and she knew it, but didn't like it, and responded--

"We all have a price to pay for what we do...maybe not *you*, Methos, who will probably live forever...I hope you do!" she spat. "But don't you see? Now, what you've done...you met with him, spoke with him..."

"I said you were headed to Taurus."

"And then you headed here. To find me. And he would have followed you."

Methos grew pale at the realization.

"At the schools, they call it *galam-hurum*--so smart that it's foolish. Does this not describe what you've done? Methos, perhaps the best way for you to help me, is not to help me at all."

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Full Circle Chapter 22 first half

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Paris The orange glow of the cigarette’s embers split the night for a moment before fading as the smoke from it was inhaled deeply then exhaled into the chilly night air. The man who smoked it was tall, blonde, and had an almost gaunt appearance about him. He leaned upon a lamppost that stood in a small park that was situated across from the small church that was St. Juliens and watched the comings and goings of parishioners along the narrow streets and sidewalks that surrounded it.

The people scurried about as they left the last remaining Mass of the evening and headed back to the warmth of their homes. They walked past the small bistros and newsstands, past the small kiosk that rented skates for those who wished to use them during the day and the many other businesses that lined the streets surrounding the church. Many took no notice of the man who watched them with narrowed eyes and who flicked the cigarette butt down to the ground to join all of the rest that lay at his feet but went straight past the park without a glance at him.

The door of the church opened; a lone figure came out, dressed in the drab brown habit of a monk and took a look around at the weather before beginning to head back indoors. He paused for a moment as his eyes darted about as he tried to peer into the darkness, past the pools of light from the old lampposts and into the night but he saw nothing and went back inside. Once inside he closed the door and stood silently with his back against the it. He leaned his head against the wood as he closed his eyes while whispering one word, “Greyson.”

At the sight of the monk the man who had been watching the church, straightened while his posture stiffened. His eyes tracked every move the monk made and when the monk returned inside, he laughed bitterly. He turned away from the church and his eyes watched the glittering lights of Paris by night while his face turned cold and as brittle as his laughter.

He lit up another cigarette then he said, “Well, Father, I’ve finally come back to see you but you don’t seem to be in the mood for vistiors.” He laughed again as he elegantly flicked the still lit cigarette away from him, shoved his hands in his pockets and walked away. “I will be back, old man. You can’t hide forever,” he whispered as he left. “Once I complete my business with your other students, I’ll be back for you!”

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The latest Tale is up on the web for your reading pleasure...

by Cherna

Word of Warning: This story features violence and or material of a sexually explicit nature. If this isn't what you like to read or you are under legal age in your country, do not read it. Only Us Left Now

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Hey Cherna,

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have you heard back from Ann Fountain yet about that email?

Just wondering, haven't heard anymore about it from anyone.

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Yep, I did

by Cherna

I sent a reply to both you and Honor. Ann said it was also posted to alt.tv.highlander.creative and that she was going to ignore it.

That's what I decided to do as well. I'm not giving my permission, and I doubt there will be a problem.

*g*

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(Why not more?) And Never Let Go II

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"Anna, with whom did you speak?" the boy asked.

"It was the prince, your father, with whom I spoke. He desires to have you go with him, and I have allowed it. You will go at first to Uruk, and then to Akkad. You will know the city of your fathers. And I shall take you there," she answered, trying to make her voice bright, even though she wanted to weep.

"There I shall meet the mighty Sargon, my grandfather?" he asked, his eyes like stars. He knew of Sharrukkin, even though he had not met him. She had seen to that. "Will I be like him? Shall I be a conqueror? Will I be a king?"

Let him play with these notions, she thought to herself.

"Yes, you shall be a king, and your empire will outstrip even that of Sharrukkin. Will you not run forth, and even now find some corner of the earth to win?" And so he ran from her, his child's mind full of play at the idea of conquest. She smiled at his whim, the smile of one who has done battle, seeing a child who is innocent of shedding blood. And then she felt it, as she had not in these seven years.

The signature of another Immortal.

She rose, and went in the direction of the sensation--

It was only Methos. But his ace was grim, and she knew it was that same old story--Akkasur. She had hoped he would have been discouraged by the "welcoming party" she threw him some years back--but he would prove resolute.

"It is Akkasur," she breathed.

"It is...and I would have you come with me," he said, desperately. How long had she languished here, playing nursemaid and mother and whore and all these foolish games? Methos knew her true nature, why didn't she?

"I would," she replied, knowing it was time. She had been at this temple many years, and tongues were beginning to wag. "But there is unfinished business. Between you and myself. Between me and the boy."

And she motioned him aside, as she would not have the child see this man...his appearance wild and strange. He would not understand the type of man Methos was, anymore than he would understand what she had been.

"Methos, I have lost him," she said, her voice full of pain.

Methos closed his eyes. Better she should. Why would she cling to anything that weighed her down--that made her an easier mark? Why cling to this child and this life here, when it meant being easily found? But he said nothing, and simply listened. This was the easiest thing to do.

And she unburdened herself, as she was wont to do. For she would tell Methos anything.

No matter what he had ever done, she did care for him.

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acck! Akkasur I had forgotten him..

by Isolde

grrrrr..I don't like him, but I understand his anger.
Oooh 8 years old, sigh, he must have been so damn cute. ((BH))
Paint a picture will ya, please, hehee.
I know, that's sick. 'g'

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I assure you, he's more interesting--

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as he gets older--but,anyhow--I posted a bit focusing on the boy...(Some adult Naram-Sin to come, honest!)

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And Never Let Go

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Her eyes smouldered a deeper blue like wet reeds from the riverbed set to smoke out the vermin on a hot summer's day, and for a moment, even Manishtusu forgot his bombast. She was stiff-necked, but he would make her see reason. Why would she not simply let go? This was what they had agreed upon, after all--the child was his. He had been raised among women long enough...it was time he saw his inheritance. It was time he saw what he was--a son of kings.

But Anath-Sin saw another story--his foolishness. What made him believe that any should know better than herself what should be done with the boy? He had attained seven years of age, and was still learning--everything he did delighted her. Who was the Prince, but her pawn? He was not the boy's true father--even Manishtusu, for his ignorant ways, should be able to see that! HOw then, was the boy so pale, and eyes as light as her own...there was nothing to compare!

"And you see that Sharrukkin his grandfather does love you both," Manishtusu went on, but she half-listened. Of course Sharrukkin would love the child for her sake. She went on bended knee before him and spilled the story out to him, Sharrukkin, who alone knew her own secret! What king could have been more certain of the Goddess' favor than Sharrukkin, who had her very ear! And when she told him of how she found Naram-Sin, he roared with laughter--was this not the self-same fiction she had invented to cover up his shame, as the son of a temple whore? There was the pity...that a real man like Sharrukkin should begin to fail, and such unworthies as Rimush and Manishtusu should take his place. Even now they strove over the land--and the King not yet dead.

"And, in his love for us both, does he not care for the child--how he is to learn? How he is to be brought up?" she asked. Manishtusu rolled his eyes heaven-ward-- would the Gods not spare him this? The child was to be his heir...so long as he was brought up loyal to Agade, what did it matter? Sharrukkin was dying, and the dynasty must go on.

"He has always honored his word to you--even by your appointment, even though your family is unknown, he favored you in this, Anath-Sin," Manishtusu answered. "Now it is your turn to honor an agreement. Surrender the boy to me."

Her face colored. This impudent whelp could not begin to know the favors that went behind her appointment here...she had given plenty to the kingdom. Her knowledge, her experience...her arm in conquering, her voice in counsel. He could not know what she was.

BUt all Manishtusu saw was a stiff-necked fox-b---h that should know by now that she was beat.

"You know the penalty for denying me."

She did. It was as written.

Death.

She hung her head. It was over...she must allow him the boy. She was certain of one thing, however...this was not the end of it.

"I know," she said, then, slowly. "I know the penalty. You shall have him, to raise in your house. And you may believe he will forget me--I tell you he won't! I will bring him myself to Uruk, and there you will show him your palace, your temples even to rival these at Nippur...but I will know, and he will know...and I will let you know, Manishtusu--he is still mine."

And with that, she rose and left him there, his mouth agape. And she descended down the steps into the lower chamber, to see the light of her eyes, Naram-Sin.

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Ahh, so the time has come.

by Isolde

ooh this just keeps getting better and better.
Glad to see that the hard-drive troubles, obviously an act of god, sigh, have not stoped you vixen. 'g'

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Connections: Part 1

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Note first: I only accept honest critiscms, so tell me if it sucks, or if it's decent, whatever. Josh, due to past relationships, is not a reliable source of objectivity(Apparently, he gave wonderful artist an honest opinion when she asked; Josh, unfortunately, doesn't have much tact, and is the brutally-honest-type. Now I can't get his thoughts 'cause he won't make that "mistake" again). Chris, Mrs J, and the few others who've seen it liked it. I'm trusting the Methos/Highlander experts to be honest with me. :)
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Methos sat on the balcony, sipping tea and watching the lights of Buenos Aires. It had been a great idea to come visit his old friend Gisela Krueger, especially after the hell he'd gone through in Paris. His brow furrowed as he briefly thought about it; Duncan's wild fantasy, the odd incidents, Richie's headless body, the constant echo of Kronos' and Horton's combined laughter in the back of his mind...

He shook his head to clear the fog, and focused on relaxing. He'd think of it later, a hundred years or so from now, when the memory was dulled, when the thought of Duncan MacLeod going insane didn't burn.

Gisela came out onto the penthouse's balcony, her modest green pajamas and robe setting off her auburn hair and grey eyes perfectly. She sat across from him, and poured herself a cup. He was glad he still had her friendship after almost five hundred years. Her teacher, Gunter Lehmann, had been an old friend, and Gisela's sweet, gentle nature had quickly won Methos. The younger German woman had that 'little sister' quality to her that the time-worn Immortal found very charming-and very safe. He could trust Gis; she could help him find himself again, figure out where to go and what to do now.

She cleared her throat. "Adam, we have to talk. It's not safe for you here. I've...I've talked to Alynore-"

"Aly?" Methos was suddenly alert. "Where is she? Why isn't it-"

"Adam, please! She called to say that Andre North is on the rampage again; he's begun killing her friends. She's afraid for me, and asked if I could find you. Adam, you now how he is-"

"How do you know him?"

"I...Made a mistake a few years ago. I thought I could trust him...I was wrong."

"Gis, those friends; were they only Aly's or yours, too?"

"He's after both of us. It ties together neatly, you see. His kind is so concerned about neatness..."

"You know? About him and Aly?"

"Not until it was too late. Adam, please, I'm almost positive he's on his way here now. You have to go. Alynore will never forgive me if anything happened to you."

"She'll hate me more if anything happens to you, little girl."

Gisela smiled, almost indulgently. "She doesn't hate you, Adam; far from it. She's just stubborn and full of pride. You taught her well."

"I'm not the only one responsible for her-" Methos froze as he felt the familiar buzz. He almost groaned aloud. North always had been know for his impecable timing.

"We're too late," Gisela whispered, standing. Her sword was in the living room. Methos drew his. Gisela was almost there when the door was busted in, two men carrying Desert Eagles entering and aiming at the Immortals' heads. Methos and Gisela froze.

A sandy-haired youth entered the apartment next. Methos didn't recognize him. But he knew the man who followed. Andre North could have been any age between twenty-five and fifty if he desired, though he was actually about five hundred fifty. He had neatly trimmed white hair, and piercing, dark blue eyes that glared at anything they saw. He was devestatingly handsome, and extremely dangerous. Gisela was terrified. Methos, knowing better how to cope with Immortals like Andre, blocked out any fears he might have had. Andre fixed his wicked grin on the ancient.

"Well, Methos, fancy finding you here. That just makes my job easier."

"Methos? Adam, what's he talking about? He can't mean..." Gisela's voice trailed as she watched his impassive face, the truth sinking in. Methos felt sorry, but couldn't express it. Gisela had trusted him with everything; he knew her worst secrets. She thought he trusted her. Now that had been broken, and he'd probably never get to make it up to her.

Andre's laugh filled the room. The man had always been too loud. "He's a crafty old fox, my dear, though when I'm his age, I probably will be too. Boys, take the lady to the roof. I'll take care of this problem now. As for you, old man...Jordan, I'd like to test your considerable skills in a practical test. It'll also, if you suceed, gain you a great deal of power. Take him down." Andre walked out as the youth pulled his sword. "And in case you have any doubts, Methos, let me assure you that my son can more than take care of himself." The white-haired man left. Jordan grinned wickedly.

Methos backed away, his own blade up, ready to parry. "He's using you, you know," Methos said. "If you kill me, he'll kill you, because that means you're stronger, a liability. Andre doesn't like anyone better than him-"

"Shut up!" Jordan snarled, rushing him. They knocked furniture, lamps, and knick-knacks out of the way as they fought. Mehtos found himself slightly worried. Andre hadn't made an idle boast(but then, he never did); the boy was a natural, and well trained. In a few years, he could give the MacLeods and a few others Methos knew a run for their money. Now, the ancient would just have to concentrate on keeping his footing...

As they made their way out to the balcony, lightning exploded from the rooftop. Energy bounced off power lines, shattered windows, set off alarms. The electricity in the immediate vicinity fluctuated briefly. Methos felt his heart break at the thought of another one gone, a beautiful life ended. He felt rage and pain and gathered his strength. Jordan had been distracted for a second. That was all he needed. He flung himself at the younger man, getting in under his guard, using the sword for defense while his knife slipped in between the boy's ribs. Jordan's eyes widened in shock and pain as Methos shoved him down onto the table, knocking the delicate tea set onto the floor, shattering into hundreds of pieces.

"Where's Alynore?" He demanded. He'd be damned if Andre would execute her like he had Gisela, not if he could help it. Too many young ones dying recently...

"Why should I tell you?" The boy rasped. He was frightened; this was probably the first time he'd died since his change, and it could very well be the last.

"If you do, I'll let you live," Methos answered darkly. The boy's green eyes widened at the ferocity he saw in the ancient eyes looking back at him. He swallowed hard.

"Seacouver, Washington...Mt Hope Brethren in Christ...The parsonage...Under the name Britania..." The kid was fading fast. "My dad...Is going to kill you..."

"He's not your father; he's a snake." Methos answered, withdrawing the knife and stabbing it through his heart. Jordan died, but would wake soon enough, extremely angry. And of course, Andre was on his way back down.

Methos leaped up onto the wide stone railing and looked at the dizzying drop. Cars and people moved on the street far below, regardless of the late hour.

Back to Seacouver, then. He wondered just how long she'd been hiding there; had she been waiting for him to find her? Brendon wouldn't have let her play those kinds of games, would he? He was definately going to have to pay his errant student a visit-hopefully before Andre North and his misbegotten 'son' did.

As Andre and his two goons re-entered the apartment, Methos fell. North watched impassively at the stir his landing caused.

"Should we retrieve the body, boss?" One of the men asked.

"No. I know where he's going. Get Jordan and let's go; we've got a plane to catch."

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More to follw, if you guys like it.

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Nicely done, Alicia!! Makes you want more!

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gor for it, girlfriend!

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sigh......i love it..more more more more...hehe..nt

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"Like it?" (Very good...does draw one in, descriptive and intense--

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like it! Yes!) But for heaven's sake...more!

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Thanks. Maybe this afternoon....

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...I'll try to get back down here to write more. Now I gots to go to lunch and make sure my gear is ready for inspection. Fun. Hmm...Josh should be home by now; maybe a little cuddle time will make me feel better... :)

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(Alicia! Old Soul! Nice seein' youse!) /Beloved by the Moon VIII

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Prince Manishtusu looked into the appealing eyes of Anath-Sin, and appreciated how very badly this woman always lied. These fields had been plowed many a time, and did not bear fruit--who didn't know that? And even if this was not well known--those hips never had a child pass through them, and that waist had never swollen like the moon. He wondered just which one of her girls she was protecting. But he pretended to believe, for it was as his father, Sharrukkin, had told him--some women's lies are better than the truth. And it was even so with this one's lies.


For the child was obviously his. After all, his visits to this temple were most frequent some time back--and, he imagined, justly productive. He would let the child bide here for a time, until it was weaned, and then, he would allow it into his home in Agade, and out of the hands of these scheming women.

Looking into the eyes of Prince Manishtusu, Anath-Sin was well-pleased. Perhaps he did not believe her completely, but even believing only part would get the child accepted. Was it not a lucky thing that men believe what pleases them best!

The House of Agade. To be accepted as the grandson of Sharrukkin himself--what king was greater! And perhaps Naram-Sin would become a king, himself! She wondered at the thought.

Familiar with the ways of men, it was a shame, then, that Anath-Sin was not more familiar with the ways of kings.

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Uh-Oh; Is the little one heading for some trouble...

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...And I'm just wondering, Vix, does this little boy grow up to be someone we know? :)

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Hmm...I guess the best way to answer that is--

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all my stories interconnect. So the answer might well be "yes," and "yes."

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And the plot thickens.

by Isolde

ooh house of a king..yoysa, not bad for the little guy.
I hope he stays safe there, (worry)

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Hello hello hello! anyone remember me????

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snerk you all better!!! LOL
boy have I missed out in my HL world :-( :-( I'm dieing for the cruise so perhaps some sanity can come back to my life (no HL for 4 months makes me go insane!!! as anyone would) but then again maybe I should reverse that and say I'm becoming sane without any HL insanity??? whichever way I am hurting BAD! none the less I am working overtime to make it to this cruise and pay for my brothers wedding presents so I am never online :-( but I had to drop by and say hello..I do get to check my email about 3 times a week so you guys can always email me ;-)

hugs to all of you!

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you poor poor thing....let meefie help you out a bit

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shoot shoot shooot

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extreme fruage

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Finally back from the field...

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...Josh and I hit a rough spot in our relationship while out there, but we quickly smoothed it back out again.

Love the story, Cel. I really need to start writing again, but the Army life seems to stilt my creativity. Vix, I'm trying to find the time to read yours, but it's been rough lately.

Anyhows, I gotta go. Supposed to be gaming tonight. Just thought I'd stop and say hi.

Alicia

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:) helloooooooo

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i'm glad you two smoothed it out :) come bye and visit more often...there's always a blowl of frosting ready to umm.....attack..hehe..e

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Prayer Meetin' for Gypsy

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In case some of you don't know, Gypsy MacNut MacChat, from the old Dwarflander site, is seriously ill. Although the exact date for surgery hasn't been set, sometime in early (we hope!) September she'll either have a complete liver transplant or she'll be receiving a portion of a liver donated by her son.

Tomorrow evening (Saturday, June 14th)the MacChat's and *Friends of Gypsy* will be gathering in spirit to offer prayers, good thoughts, and/or blessings on her behalf. If possible, join us at 8 p.m. Eastern, 7 p.m. Central, and 5 p.m. Pacific and help us Storm the Gates of Heaven!

Thanks and blessings in advance,
Cait MacChat

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Beloven by the Moon VII

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She held him, rocked him, and wondered. She had held mortal children in her arms and been half-afraid, but here there was no fear--it was as if she could sense even now he would be strong, even for their kind--live as long even as herself. But she stayed deep in thought as to what would transpire--after all, he could not be as those poor fatherless ones, who were taken by the houses of others, and never saw their mothers, their sires. She must find him a home.

The bastards of temple heterae were known to be mad...half the children of the God...half the children of the basest of men. And they knew what their mothers were-why should they not despair?

But Anath-Sin had known no shame since she slew her first man in a long-ago plain, where the Taurians drew their swords against man and child, and graves were dug for the brave--yeah, for the the very brave! Why should she not carry this child forth, as being her own? Why should she not scheme, even she?

And so when she heard the trump soundeth, and the march of feet, and the sound of women speaking, and knew it was Prince Manishtusu..she gathered close her women.

"Has the Prince known of me lo these many days?"

"Nay, lady," they answered. A year had passed, since she lay in his arms. "He knew not your state--your condition.

"Good ladies, could he not be a father?" she asked, and knew they would join the intrigue.

What father would not want such a son?



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oooh..she is so..

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sneeky. I love that.
So the child will have a father, hmm, I hope he is worthy?
Thanks vixen these last two felt so good to read. I missed a few days and felt it. 'g'

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So she knows how to trick him, but

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can she fake breastfeeding? *g* Maybe she won't have to if he doesn't stay with them every minute.
Sad to see Methos leave, but you'll talk about him some more, right?


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Full Circle Chapter 21

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Chapter 21

Outside of Rome

It was indeed beautiful here in the gently rolling hills that surrounded Rome, Greyson thought to himself as his eyes tracked the movement of a hawk who screamed as it dove for its’ prey. He smiled in satisfaction as he watched the brief struggle on the ground between captor and prey knowing full well what the outcome would be and who the victor would be. He paused and turned around to look behind him at the sprawling mass of men and horses the spread out across the landscape trudging forward, always forward at his behest. It gave him an exhilarated thrill to listen to their singing the battle songs of gods, of prior victories, of camaraderie and know that finally this was his army, his command and he was coming into his own without Darius around.

Frowning at the thought of him, Greyson wondered how they were faring in Greece. The lines of communication were nearly non-existent between the two armies—each was working independently of the other but with the same goal in mind--Rome’s downfall, and Darius’ ascension to power. He looked away from his army to the golden horizon of the dawn that was breaking as he thought about it. It wasn’t that he didn’t want the power himself or the control that he would always seemingly be behind Darius. The fact was was that Greyson was a realist.

Darius was the better of the two of them; he had the diplomatic skill necessary to manipulate others by words before deeds were necessary unlike Greyson who preferred action to words. He also was far more charismatic and a born leader and men without question followed him to do whatever his bidding—Greyson counted himself among those who would willingly give his life for him—if he could die like others could.

In Greyson’s fantasies, he could see the two of them carrying on the old Roman empire and yet continuing to conquer and bring in more land, more plunder, more slaves more of everything his heart could imagine. He also imagined that Darius would reign for a thousand years or more with his help. He had always seen himself as the second man, never wanting to be the head but work behind and in support of his father.

It was true that they had their differences, but his faith and admiration of his teacher now adopted father had never wavered. Even when it got him killed on occasion, he had always awakened with a sense of awe that it had happened again and that the person who had done the killing, was also the person who he most wanted to emulate. And in a perhaps twisted small way, be loved by in whatever way he could get it. He sighed deeply, shook his head and galloped forward as he topped the last mound and looked down upon the sprawling mass of the city of Rome.

His face twisted into a wry smile as he gazed down on the buildings and homes that had represented civilization for centuries, watching as occasional people came in and out of the gates as they began their morning like other mornings unaware that the wolf was at their doorstep. ”And I am the wolf!” he shouted to the city below him in Latin, as he raised a sword above him to signal his army to halt in plain view of Roman sentries that were nestled in and around the hills.

This time, there would be no limit of a hundred men brought into Rome’s gates. This time, things were going to be quite different and the Romans would have to play by his rules and his way. There would be no other alternative. ”My way or die,” he softly said to the first of the signal fires that had finally sprang up at the sight of his army. ”There will be no alternative.”

Sparta

Methos’ finger drew a small map into the dried earth, then placed his fingertip upon the largest square. “This is the armory. I will need two of you to destroy it—burn it down.” His eyes swept over the fifteen men who encircled him then chose two. “You and you. This will be your goal. It’s guarded so be prepared for a fight.”

One of the men chosen craned his head down for a better look, then spoke up. “How do you know it’s guarded?”

Methos smiled. “I’ve been here many times in my life for many different reasons. Trust me, it’s guarded.”

Another of the men pointed to the crude map. “What is this here and here?”

“Each of those represent guard posts along the wall; the circles are the ones by the gates. Those are the most important ones to take out because that is how we can get back out alive—if we are successful.” Again he scanned his men, a few who looked skeptical about the success of his plan. “I’ve done this thousands of time, you have to trust me. We have the element of surprise on our hands—the entire city is sleeping as is Rome’s army. This will be something to tell your grandchildren about and will be recorded in the songs or whatever you do to tell of heroes.” He rubbed his chin, nodded then stood.

His men looked less skeptical than before he noted as he scooped up a handful of ashes and began slathering it all over his nude body, changing the paleness of it to darkness. His men followed suit and the job was soon finished. He added a few strokes of charcoal to his face for good measure as his mind flashed images of Kronos at him. “Never again, “he whispered to the night air. “Never like that again.”

Turning towards his men, his eyebrows raised in a questioning look he asked, “Ready?” When they all nodded, he nodded also in affirmation. “Good, let’s go!”

Smoke

Heat.

Stilicho's nostrils curled at the smell of something burning as he bolted upwards from his bed where he had been sleeping. He wiped the trickle of sweat that seeped by his eyes and he shoved himself out of bed and to the tent flap.

Pulling it back, he caught his breath as he took in the vast orange glow the sky held over the city of Sparta and saw the flames within as they licked upwards to the stars. "My God!" he said in awe at the sight, despite having seen it several times over in the time he had been a soldier.

His army was in a state of confusion he saw, as he scanned around with his eyes for any sign of Constantine. Men ran about gathering weapons as they jostled about helter skelter in the melee as they tried to prepare themselves for whatever was to happen next.

The horses had been released by someone and were stampeding in a frightened state through the camp at the smell and sight of the fire. It was eerie to watch all of this; he was drawn out into the middle of it all by the nerve of the general on the Goth side. He couldn't help but to admire such a plan's audacity and skill in carrying it out under their nose--quite successfully it looked like.

Darius. He must be quite a man and was certainly a worthy opponent, he thought to himself. And the next time they encountered him, he would not underestimate him.

Constantine galloped up to him and threw himself off the horse, panting as he caught his breath. "They're gone." He gulped the cinder-laden air and stared at his co-commander all the while thinking that this outcome would have been different had he been fully in charge. Glancing back at the burning city, he continued. "There's a steady stream of people who have escaped the inferno and are coming into camp begging for food and water as well as asking for our protection from the Goths."

Stilicho's eyes narrowed as he thought about the problems he faced. There wasn't enough for all the refugees in terms of food or water and they would certainly impede the army's chance of catching the barbarians in the morning. He shouted for his aide, hoping that he was somewhere close by. "Antoninius!"

He looked back at the other general knowing what he must be thinking since he would probably be thinking the same thing if he were in the same position. "They can stay here for the night but in the morning when the fires are out they must return to the city. We have no room for them nor supplies. Antoninius!" He walked away, hands on hips as he thought it out. "How do you know they are gone?"

Constantine stayed silent for a moment as he tried to decide whether to tell him that he had ridden close enough to where the Goths had camped to feel the other Immortal's presence but had neither seen or felt him. He had slowly paced his horse though the camp, noting the still glowing embers in the firepits, the turned up earth from where the horses had been tethered before being ridden away, the lack of any kind of tent or shelter anywhere.

Where had they gone to in the middle of the night? What direction? He had sighed then, knowing that the answers to his questions would have to wait until morning when the light of day would reveal what he wanted to know.

"I've seen it up close. They have moved everything but only the light of the new day will tell us more."

Stilicho's brow knitted together in anger. "You were there? What about the risk to you?"

"I never said I was there< General," his voice dipping saracasm as he said the title. "I said I was close and, if you recall, risk is part of being a soldier. It's a part of my job--and of yours."

Furious at the slight, Stilicho came up to him until they were eye to eye and stared at him before storming off back into his tent as Constantine looked on.

His aide came up moments later and looked at the remaining general in confusion. "What am I needed for?"

Constantine loked over the man then ordered him to dispatch back to Rome a letter telling them that Sparta had been lost to the Goths and that they were to be in pursuit of them in the morning. "Do it now and be prepared to ride out in the morning. Understand?"

The aide nodded and left; Constantine surveyed the camp's confused state and shook his head. There was much to be done, and much to prepare for.

It was going to be a long night indeed.

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Good descriptions and details...

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You really give the reader a lot of background with the story line. I can even see the night and the feel of battle.

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Beloved by the Moon VI

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He would go, but not before knowing her again.

Was this not the way between them, ever? That one wanted blood, and the other peace? And this time it was herself who wanted peace, and he could live for a moment as if he was not himself a war-like man. But in his mind, he was thinking of returning to the mountain, to be among the Goutis, and to plan another raid. And she thought of the future, and of the child, and what she might desire of the future. And they loved each other, absently, but there was no flash, no heat..only two bodies moving against one another. They made the most of it, but each knew the other too well. Their loving was no more.


"Lord Seker...Methos...could you not give me one promise?" she breathed, and her eyes were as they ever were...even as a language of the men before the flood.

"Anna..." he called her, as she would sometimes be called. "What would you have?"

"Could you swear to me you would return? That if I had need of you...you would come? If I sent a messenger, if you heard my voice as if in a dream...if you thought of me, would you come?"

"I make no promises, Lady," he answered, for once truthfully.

"But you would."

"I always would." But his voice was doubtful. "But I...why is it like this? You demand too much of me!"

She lay her head back. It seemed so simple to ask, that a man would return to her. That two people could rely on each other, that they not let go. But he was only Methos, and he did not have the fire. She let this pass.

"Would you make me another promise?"

He would not speak, or turn his eyes, such golden eyes, in her direction.

"I mean to raise this child, and if you would not teach him, would you spare him? In all things, came he across your path, I would you do not kill him."

"This," he answered, relieved, for what was this child to him? A mere babe-in-arms, to be raised by a whore! "This I would swear. I will not kill your boy. His head is for another."

And she relaxed, and lay against him, again happy. In her mind, this was as good as done, it only remained for her to convince him further. Why should he not return to her? Why would he not love what she loved?



But in the morning, he had left, and there was no trace of where he might have gone to. And she called for her women to bring her the child, and she clutched him tight. In all the world, this was what she had--her head, her women, her child. And she was afraid.

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Awww, such sweet agony!

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Until the next installment. :-)

I have to say, she weilds a lot of power. But she has reason to be afraid. It seems anything we have, can be taken away.

Thanks~

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man, how could he?

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After that..just leave. Well he made her a promise, sigh, this was sad.

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Beloved by the Moon V

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She could feel his thoughts, as she always could. He thought the worst of her, it was ever thus. He knew what she was. And they were so recently in each other arms, and it was always this way between them. They fought, they loved, they fought again.

So she changed the subject.

"My lord, do you intend to tarry, or do you ride?"

He looked at her long. How many nights might a man lie in these arms before he suffered a fate worse than that of Akkasur? Was she not the woman who made him...who taught him to turn the rivers red with blood, and did she not wear bones on her girdle when first he saw her flame-haired form moving through the world like a storm? If he stayed, she would eat him alive.

"I mean to go at once, I came only to tell you of Akkasur's approach, and to know you."

At this, her eyes became as clay. She was unreadable, like the stelae of the time before the Flood, in a language known but to a few. And then he felt it coming--her rage, as she was always wrathful beneath the surface. The light gathered, and the thunder. She spoke--

"Methos, I would have you never change."

And he knew from her voice she was charging him to a fate, and he dispaired, for he knew of her ways.

So he hoped to turn her heart again towards him, and made his voice sweet. "I will stay this one night, and no more. I must ride. Why will you not ride with me?" For he remembered this was her element. She would never resist this temptation in all the time he knew her. She was a reaver, and a destroyer. She knew cities as she knew men, and drove either to their destruction.

But her face was downcast, and she chose her words so that he lost not his faith in her.

"I no longer ride. Uta-Nammu...made me human again. Made me feel as a woman, not a destroyer. And I will not kill. I will not be by your side, Methos."

He did not know this woman. She spoke as a coward. She spoke as a mere woman. What was she?

"I can love you, but I can not be as you are," she said finally.

He had no use for her. He would go.



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Oh, what a thing to say...

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I bow to your talent. *g* You can weave a story first one way, then another.

It would be cool to glimpse a flashback showing how they both rode together.

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