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But even she knew love was not enough--had love been enough to keep Akkasur from murdering Uta-nammu even though he was a weak old man? He went to protect her; she had erred. She never told him what she was--that she was a snake, and shed her skin, and stayed forever young. He lived watching himself fail, and herself thrive, and never spoke a word. And he went to his death--how could she believe it was not at her hands? That it was as much her own responsibility as anyone else's? And she knew what Methos was--better she not try to love him. He was too free. He was as the wind.
But then there was this child. Maybe she could hope for some kind of mainstay in her life, when ought else failed. Could she not raise this boy, and have something she could call her own?
Eventually, Methos spoke, and it was a question she dreaded, but knew she should answer truthfully. Methos was a natural liar, and thus was expert at discerning lies.
"Why would you wish to do this thing, when Akkasur dogs your tail? And why does this man dog your tail? Why is he after you, after you even through these many years?"
She fixed him in her eye, lapis set in bleached chalcedony. "He was one of my servants," she began.
"I did not care for him, but he cared for me. And so, one day, he wished to show me of his cares. He, with force, twisted mine arm, and slapped my face, and tried to shame me with cruel words.
"But had I not come into this world some centuries before? Had I not known glory in battle? Was my arm weak? Nay, not before such a one as this. So I subdued him with my strength, and bid the guard come in."
And here she paused as Methos lie on her bed, and her eye gleamed most evilly. "He was then...had you spoke of eunuchs? Well, then, he was made an eunuch for the Kingdom of Heaven. And so he is, even now, for all his Immortal life."
Methos gasped, and stared. He had heard nothing like this before. He knew she had once been cruell, and then he saw how she smiled at this statement.
"And so you speak of such things before one who has just shared your bed?"
"Methos, I would speak with you about anything."
In a state of unquiet he sat. What would this Anath-Sin not speak of? Had she not taught him of Uta-napishtim, and the jewel of Methuselah, and of Inkhnaton, her own teacher? He knew more of the old ones because of her...was that not why he wanted to be free of her? For she was old, and she would try to rule him? She might speak of love, but he knew what she was.
A lion. A devourer.
He wondered what she might do with a child.
Posted on Aug 9, 1999, 10:22 PM from IP address 216.164.251.22
Ah, this is becoming more and more intriguing.
So a pre-immie can be...altered in a way he might not like. But they why let him live as well? Why does she not end his life? Is there going to be a big show down? :-)
Questions, questions...okay, I'll stop here. *g*
Posted on Aug 10, 1999, 11:15 AM from IP address 208.253.216.232
well my machine went down for an upgrade. Well when I first got reconnected IM worked fine except my buddy list wasn't backed up. Now it wont accept my password for my IM name *sigh* So I had to get a new one.
If you wanna IM me i'm now macduck98
Posted on Aug 9, 1999, 1:09 PM from IP address 209.179.141.135
I just updated my Methos gallery by adding several new pictures (24 actually with more to come!)bringing the gallery up to 24 pages total as of now. I still have more to add!
Please do drop by and see what's there! YOU'll find it here!
Their lips met, and then, she felt the touch of his hand caressing her hindquarters, and then she knew she would have to bring him into her chamber...she could never resist Methos, no matter how she might try to content herself with the usual arguments...he was a liar, he was a libertine, he was...just like herself, as a matter of fact.
And in her chamber, after she had lit myrhh incense and lit a few candles...they began to make love, and she revelled in his body, so young and lean, when many of the men she had were not so well-proportioned. He was in all things, beautiful, and she could adore him without feeling anything more abiding than the merest friendship they enjoyed.
And he enjoyed her as well, fathoming the depths of her experience, and her wisdom, yet still appreciating what she was, a gifted piece of @ss. Her body was so white, her breasts so round and firm and so her stomach...lucky was she to die as she did, young enough to be forever beautiful.
He spoke..."Were you not a whore..."
And she answered.."My cheifest assests would be a-wasting...shut up and love me, Methos..."
And so they continued, until their love-making came to its conclusion.
"So you would raise him among these women, and make a eunuch of him?" Methos asked.
"And so, my Lord Methos, didst thou feel thou wert an eunuch when you lived as a prince, with a harem of women about you?"
He colored, but then continued, trying to prove his point.
"*No*, but then, I was their master...and how shall he fare being fatherless?"
"You have been fatherless, and it has dishonoured you not," Anath-Sin answered, gauging his reaction most carefully. "I may be both father and mother to this child, may I not? Who knows more than I?"
Methos shook his head. He knew even now better than to argue with a determined woman. "Perhaps such as yourself... perhaps even you, Anath-Sin."
She smiled to herself. She valued the counsel of this young one, feeling he was such as would live long on this Earth...but she could be wrong. She was taken with him, and there was nothing so stirring to her as being taken by a man.
"If I had need of a man? If I had need of a man to teach him?"
But at this, Methos shook his head. And Anath-Sin despaired. If there were any she would have as the teacher of her "son", it would be Methos. Who better to teach him the ways of blood-lusting men...and hard-loving men, and the ways of men who could think, and yet act? She despaired, because, of all things, she loved him, in her own, reserved way.
Posted on Aug 8, 1999, 12:12 AM from IP address 209.122.217.147
She will eventually find moments when the child will be with Methos to learn from him. I don't know where this is really going, *g* but it could go many different ways. I like that in a story.
Posted on Aug 9, 1999, 10:52 AM from IP address 208.253.216.191
I saw it just the other day and emailed the lady who posts it and suddenly poof it's gone. It had some gorgeous screen captures of Noah's Ark, all 6 episodes, I wanted to share with the HL Forum--PW all romantic and smoochy!!*BG*
They'd all fall off their chairs, I know I did. Can anybody help???Please and thank you!
Any friend of the ROG...*BG*
Blessings
Friend of Methos
Posted on Aug 6, 1999, 3:54 PM from IP address 199.76.193.90
Liked all the episodes of Highlander with him in it. Loved all the pictures of him that everone frued. I need more Methos. I hope PW will be on the cruise this year, plan on making him some Chocolate Chip Cookies to be him.
Posted on Aug 6, 1999, 3:20 PM from IP address 32.101.83.135
Luckily, there's tons of frus and fanfic on the net, so we won't 'starve' completely! In fact, it's more than enough to feed an obsession! (Even a greedy one like mine...)
Hmpf
Posted on Aug 6, 1999, 4:06 PM from IP address 62.104.64.67
"What is this? What have you done, now, Anath-Sin?" they asked. What this woman would not bring into the temple. A lion cub. A wounded bird. Now a child.
"I have lain by the side of a demon and got myself with a demon-child," she said mischeivously, and shot a wicked look at Methos, who looked away. "By the Holy! We found him by the Euphrates...he fusses so you would think it had been the Tigris...see how he squirms! The little snake!" She handed him off to one out-reaching crone, and gazed after him as the women clucked and cooed, and offered suggestions about what must be done next...who had recently delivered of a child and might nurse...where could such a child have come from.
Methos drew Anath-Sin aside.
"You know what he is. What he will be."
"Then who better to bring him up than myself!"
Methos shook his head. "Akkasur is not far. He still hungers after your head. You know there is only one way for this to end."
Her hands flew to her face, and she sighed, collecting her thoughts. She was a woman who felt, when she thought...it only wearied her.
"First he kills my sweet old man, and now he will not be content until he has bested me. I hate no thing on this earth as I hate him." Her hands dropped to her sides, and she stood, the pain on her face apparent.
"You *could* end it in the usual way."
Typical Methos. If there was a problem, the answer was to call it out and kill it. Blood-thirsty, vicious-minded, and deceitful to the last...she hoped he would never change...but then, she had.
"I grew tired of the killing. It all grows old. Some people believe this Game has an end...but I see no end, only more killing." She smiled at him. "I would rather have love."
He reached and wrapped a tendril of her hair about his fingers. It looked as if dyed by blood. He remember how she was...
"*Love* you call it..."
"Call it what you will."
Posted on Aug 5, 1999, 5:58 PM from IP address 216.164.250.204
well that was very surprising, I almsot spilled my drink.
Saved it but, lost the mouthful I was about to swallow. Methos hmm????
More..more..more..oooh, and please don't forget us office girls on Monday (((vixen))) Our morning coffee is turning into a nice little time. *wink*
Posted on Aug 7, 1999, 9:09 PM from IP address 24.4.252.47
The three rode on before, and she lagged behind. The air was hot and dry, and she was in the dream. The stars had shown her it was near the time...she would need to move on again before Akkasur found her again, but there was unfinished business. She could feel it, almost taste it on the winds. A sudden breeze had picked up, brushing her hair from her face, and she thought...she pulled up short. A dove in the sky. It was not a voice, merely a bird.
"Look! Anath-Sin, come and see!" Ninsug cried.
They had found a basket among the reeds. Anath-Sin's heart froze. This could not be what she thought.
"A child!" Ninsug continued. "Wonderful things abound!"
She dismounted, and approached, marvelling. The other women cooed and made much of the child's eyes, which looked as if they were made of the same fabric as the sky, and lusty cries.
"A strong one...how came he here?"
Anath-Sin said nothing, only reached out to hold the child. In her arms, his crying ceased, and he looked up at her.
"Yes, beautiful one, you are a favored child, that we found you..." she whispered. The other women reached out their hands, hoping to touch the child, but Anath-Sin held him tight. They paused, but did not wonder. In her years among them, she had known many a man as *lukur*, and she had never beared. It was thought she could not.
"Shall he be known as 'Naram-Sin'?"
She wandered in thought. Was this something she read in the stars? Was this the thing she could not see clearly?
"He shall be known as many things. He shall make a name for himself," she said, finally.
The other women could not feel what she did, for they were common women. They did not know that even now, his little soul called out to her, for they were the same kind.
She unlaced her garment, and nestled him close to her bosom. The women helped her fasten him tight to herself, and she remounted the horse. "He must be brought back to Nippur...she must be famished."
As the horse trotted back, she looked down at the baby, who almost seemed to smile.
She laughed to herself...*Good that you like to ride, little one. You will have plenty of that in *your* future."
Posted on Aug 4, 1999, 6:36 PM from IP address 216.164.250.32
From a half-mile away, he could tell that it was she...in the land of the black-headed people, she had hair like a flame, and she let it flow free down her back and fly about in the breeze. She rode as men ride, but then, she did many things like a man. He lowered himself to sit on the temple steps, and looked in silence as she approached him.
"Seker..." she began, smiling wickedly. "Lord of the Unquenchable Appetite...drinker from my wine-flask, visitor of the odd hour..."
Teasing him gave her especial pleasure. He might cut the throat of any man and take the head of any Immortal he ran across, but he tolerated her ribbing out of respect for her years and numerous favors she had done him.
They *understood* one another.
"Can you not merely call me 'Methos'?" And then he noticed the *thing* she had tied in her robe. "What have you there?"
She had been reaching to undo the tie...but paused. Bemused, she gave him a very innocent look.
"It is a baby. People start out that way."
His face grew stern. "Must everything be a joke with you?"
"When you are my age, you will find humor in everything, mark my words." With that, she walked past him and entered the temple, and he followed.
Posted on Aug 4, 1999, 6:59 PM from IP address 216.164.250.32
I like the way this story begins. Now I get to read the rest.
I've been rewriting with the help of a beta reader, so I haven't been here all week. I always look forward to reading your fiction, vixen. *g*
Posted on Aug 9, 1999, 10:45 AM from IP address 208.253.216.191
Vote for the ROG as the Sexiest Male Character/Actor in a TV Show at:
http://www.freevote.com/booth/malechartv
Poor Methos only has 15 votes and he's feeling slighted.
Posted on Aug 3, 1999, 8:59 AM from IP address 169.132.112.31
Did you go to this booth, he way up there. So go here to vote:
http://www.freevote.com/booth/sexiestactor,or is it the same one. Because he it up over 1100 in votes there. Unless you get there, hes not there he will be lower(I don't count the lower count), if you continue to go the sexiest actor booth until you see the over 1100 one.
Posted on Aug 6, 1999, 3:26 PM from IP address 32.101.83.135
Their Lady knew no happiness. She seemed to be waiting. She waited as a maiden waits for a lover, or as an old woman waits for death. She no longer danced. She accepted the offerings of cakes and barleywine, and performed the rites, but they brought her no joy. It was as if her life had ended.
When they found her in the Nile, they thought that the goddess had changed the water to blood.
But no, it was only that her throat had been cut.
After my second Jim Beam and Coke, I was beginning to feel more myself, for the first time in a long time. Methos can be charming when he wants to be, and he was...he was wonderful, actually. He even took me home, and good thing, too, because I'd have gotten myself killed with the condition I was in.
At my door, he did the strangest thing. He touched my face, and told me, "You *will* be all right."
I believed him completely. I would be just fine, and I'd get over it and all that happy horsecrap. It was just something that got into my blood, was all.
But I would survive, because that is what we do.
Posted on Aug 1, 1999, 7:13 PM from IP address 216.164.249.25
it almost feels like a rush (a case of "post or die" disorder, I guess). I'm thinking of giving my narrator a little break, because she...uh...well, she could use some R'n'R. She says things "got too dark," whatever that's supposed to mean. Maybe I'll do some more "flash-back" stuff. But that could take awhile--so here--a little something to tide you all over--
Brazen Serpent
by J. D. McSloy
Turning,
turning in all your coils,
feel God is fire
and know
the way up is the way down.
To deny motion is death.
These things happen
to the best of us.
And it is a hard thing
to drown by this anchor,
to be cast aside
by these deaf stones,
to take on the weight
of so much dust.
And you were always
the best of us.
Turning,
bitterness fills your mouth,
but here is sweetness.
There is no way that is not,
you would understand.
It shall be
as written.
But it will be hard
for the rest of us.
And you will not be broken,
not you, stronger vessel,
not broken though pierced,
again by the spike,
again by the thorns,
again by the arrows,
and shot with light.
And darkness fell
across the best of us.
When it is finished,
dying is finished,
but emotion is eternal
and can not be denied.
I have remembered you of old
and my heel still
stings.
Return to your Lady,
with the face of a lion,
and the voice
of a dove.
Posted on Aug 1, 1999, 7:28 PM from IP address 216.164.249.25
You do have to wade through a lot of Duncan, Joe, watcher, and a new character, and Amanda to find all the good ROG/Methos scenes. I have a couple of scenes not posted on the web site yet if you want to read those sometime. The story is called The Truth In Justice.
Once again you have written a wonderful Tale. I am so glad that you decided to share it with us. I look forward to seeing what further inspiration bestows upon you and what you choose to present to us.
Posted on Aug 2, 1999, 11:51 AM from IP address 209.18.29.148
"It is well, then, that my people are reverent to the neters...they would not come here to search you out," she commented, with a bemused look.
"A tomb? We would embrace here?"
She laughed. "You can not tell me, brave Kronos, that even you are afraid to disturb their rest? Common men believe the gods will curse them with plagues if they dishonor the dead...but I am a preistess, and I do not fear the gods. I know something about the gods that few people do."
Kronos clasped his hand on her shoulder as a chill ran through him. This place was unbelieveable...the treasure they left with the departed, when most living men scraped by for their bread.
"What do you know about the gods?" he whispered in her ear, although he could care less about the gods at the moment.
Her eyes met his, and she looked softly on him.
"We are also gods. You. I." She laughed again. "But you seem to know that. You carry yourself like a very god. Even were you not as you are, I think you would be more god than man. That is why I chose you, I think. Why I came out to find you..." At this she bit her lip in thought. Perhaps that was it.
"The god would like you stripped bare," he smiled.
"Yes. And that other reason..."
They made love. She taught him the Words. They lay in each other's arms. And she could almost imagine that all would be well.
But when morning came, she awoke to his voice asking her what she had done, and, moments later, the door had opened, and Akhmose and the guards were entering to seize her lover. She did not know why his look darted from her to Akhmose, as if he believe she had arranged this thing, nor did she know why Akhmose began to smile as he did.
All she knew was that she hated it.
"For the love of all that is holy, have him brought down!" she pleaded with Akhmose.
"Perhaps I will do that, Lady," he finally said, and drew his sword.
"What do you mean to do with that?" Sekhmet cried. "Are you mad?"
His look was cruel as he grabbed her wrist and twisted it. "You shall see," he hissed. "You would be his whore rather than a preistess of this Kingdom...now you will see how he dies."
"You..." Enraged, she made her hand into a claw, and raked the side of his face, and was amazed to see how the blood stopped flowing. It became clear. They had been of the same blood, Akhmose and Kronos. He knew what Kronos was, and still he carried out this deed, on one of his own kind.
And now her lord writhed out there in the sun without comfort, believing she had betrayed him.
"Guards!" she shreiked, and at once, her men appeared.
"He has made the error of touching the Preistess of Sekhmet. I desire that you bind him tight and bury him deep, that the dogs have not an easy time of finding his carcass."
And so it was done.
Posted on Aug 1, 1999, 6:49 PM from IP address 216.164.249.25
...I was SSgt Summa's driver last week; I don't know what I'll be doing this coming week or next week; back to driving, or back to work. No more mailroom b/c of my MOS. Everything's going pretty well...I'm still a little depressed every now and then, and Josh realized he's got some hard decisions to make before he goes home-if he goes home, which is the most likely thing that'll happen. We have 8 months before it becomes final. I really want him to stay; I love him a lot, but I also want him to be happy. We're working through it all.
Well, I'm gonna read Cel's latest chapter, then go. Don't know when I'll be back.
Alicia
Posted on Aug 1, 1999, 6:12 PM from IP address 208.15.234.135
Night fell, the great bonfires were lit in both opposing camps, the wounded gathered off the battlefield then tended to, the men ate and drank thier fill of thier spare rations as they spoke in hushed tones of what had transpired on the battlefield today and what was to transpire tomorrow in the same bloodstained place.
Alaric and Darius stood hunched over a map which lay on a low table. Several torches about the tent they were in lit the interior while throwing wildly dancing shadows on the floor and walls.
Alaric's finger traced a line on the chart then looked upwards at Darius. "Athens?" he asked to which Darius nodded in answer.
"Athens. We have not lost Sparta, my--" He paused, nearly choking on the next word, "lord. We still have the element of surprise on our side." Darius began to pace but stopped to look up as a hand drew back the tent entrance and Methos entered. "Where have you been?" he roughly asked.
Methos glanced from one to the other before replying, "Out about the camp. How else does one find things out?" He moved over and tore off a hunk of bread, never bowing to Alaric or showing any deference to him or his position. He then sliced off some pungent cheese and begin to eat, unmindful of both sets of eyes on him.
Alaric rubbed at his temples again. He was tired, and felt weakened by the effort of the day yet they still had to try and find a way through the Roman legions which lay between themselves and Sparta's gates.
Methos' continued insolence was a constant irritation to him, one that he would not tolerate for much longer. But for now he felt too ill to do anything about it. He rubbed at his temples then sat down heavily. "About Sparta--" he began. "How do we get through thier lines?"
Darius' clear eyes glittered in the torchlight as he noted Alaric's visible signs of weakness. "We slip past them."
Methos paused his eating then looked directly at Darius. "Brilliant!"
Darius grinned and shrugged then looked back at the map.
"Explain to me how you intend to do that, Darius!" Alaric demanded. "What, are we going to turn invisible and vanish into thin air?"
Darius loudly laughed at the thought, then turned to his king. "We are at that--but not before we leave Rome something to remember us by." He smiled and rubbed his hands together. "Methos, collect a few men together, have them strip themselves and carry only the barest minimum of weapons."
Methos smiled and the shadows caught themselves in his dimples. "And then gather ashes and cover themselves, of course."
Darius nodded and glanced back at Alaric. "What we are going to do is something that will leave them talking for many years. A handful of men shall scale Sparta's walls when the moon--" he looked upwards at where the sky would be if he could see it. "When the moon is under cover of the clouds. Then they shall burn Sparta down from within and throw open her gates."
Alaric's eyes grew wide as he finally understood the implications of the action. "And this will create a massive diversion so that the army can slip away."
"That's correct." Methos interjected. "There is one slight flaw in the reasoning though. Should it rain, we will be in a very bad situation indeed."
"There have been worse situations that my men have gone through and won, Methos," Darius said with an edge to his voice. "This is no different to them. They will obey and do whatever I--"
Alaric angrily interrupted him. "You? It is my army, my men!"
"They follow me. And they do as I command," Darius calmly stated the facts to his king. "You lead us, true. But I command them." He shifted his eyes to Methos. "Go prepare the men."
Methos laconically stood and stretched, then slowly walked past Alaric. "Watch him, Alaric. He'll kill you," he whispered to him as he went by.
Darius eyed him suspiciously as he left. "He'll need to be watched more carefully and I don't trust him," he thought to himself. "He could prove to be my undoing yet!"
And Methos wasn't worth the risk, Darius had decided. No one was going to ruin his dreams of an empire.
Especially not a former slave.
Posted on Jul 31, 1999, 11:38 PM from IP address 207.136.48.42
This is very absorbing..and excellent in its historical imaging.
by Isolde
Thank you Celedon, and thanks for the link to your fiction.
I am rather embarrassed to say, that I have read some of your work before, just couldn't remember, no that's the wrong word, associate the name with the work. I now know both. "g" I especially liked "Seasons" and "In Search of Sanctuary" Both very different and very wonderfully enjoyable.
I have not had a chance to read anything else, yet, but will and will let you know what I thought. 'g'
This particular story is very interesting, I enjoy the historical accuracy that you are writing here. I also enjoy the inter-play between the characters, very well done.
Posted on Aug 2, 1999, 4:58 PM from IP address 24.4.252.47
I cleared the table and stretched myself acroos it to get a little rest, but instead of closing my eyes, I gazed at the ceiling. A bunch of bloody historians bother to shell out the bucks for a nice lab like this--for carbon-dating. For measuring the C-14 in some camel-dung, or whatever it is historians do. It was far nicer than the lab at school, all that while back.
I felt the presence, and didn't even bother looking in its direction.
"So, you've found out what it is?"
Methos. I felt wretched and uncompanionable, so of course it would be Methos.
"What does it matter?" I said. "It could be h. pylori, out to give the world tricky tummies. It could be cat-scratch-freaking-fever for all I care." I launched a test tube against the wall, and it exploded.
"You got the DNA results."
I couldn't really speak. I looked him in the eyes and nodded. This was what had set me off.
"Inconclusive. It was inconclusive. Telomerase catalyst....some traces of an acid bath--they must have had such a small sample to work from, and no clue how to replicate it, so they did what they could. They cultivated it. BUt the catalyst, the generations...mutated the DNA. It's still Immortal, but can't be traced."
I sat up. "I hoped it would be his DNA, his code. I hoped it was his and I hoped it wasn't his."
"I know," Methos said, but this didn't sound right to me.
"*You know*. Tell me this, Methos, seriously...you rode with him for over a thousand years, off and on. You lived with him, fought with him, bled with him. You knew him...I knew him scarcely a year...and only such brief meetings...why do I dream of him? Why am I torn apart by this, and you...you feel nothing?"
He didn't bother ofering up some lame lie about thinking of him--even if it was half-true.
"Maybe it isn't so much how you knew him, but *when*," he explained.
When. I didn't want to think about that, so I changed the subject. My history with Kronos was only a source of pain. What I was, then, a source of shame.
"You know what I could use?" I asked, suddenly.
He shook his head.
"A drink. I want to drink until I can't see."
"I know a place that won't even card you," Methos replied, in deference to my youthful appearance.
I would get blind drunk. Well, you can't say I've never had a sense of purpose.
Posted on Jul 30, 1999, 8:32 PM from IP address 216.164.249.45
Well, first I couldn't find this place when you all moved, then I couldn't get in, then I got in but it kicked me out ... let's see if I can post this message without getting booted.
Hi, guys ... I've been really, really busy. Missed you all. Glad the DOBC list has been more active lately, at least I know you all are still alive.
StarD (hoping this works and that I make it back again!)
Posted on Jul 30, 1999, 6:34 PM from IP address 209.240.200.104
They kissed and it was fire. Holding him in her her arms again, though, she was reminded of what she must do. Would he be ready for this rite?
"Beloved, I want to show you more of the secret, but for this, you must trust me," she said, and her eyes locked with his.
"If this is like the lesson of the serpents, you may consider me ready," he said, his face full of mischief as he cupped a breast in his hand. His other arm drew her closer, and they kissed again, and this time she nearly lost her nerve. She thought she could not do this thing. But she steadied herself, and drew out the dagger.
"It is the Rite of the Two Serpents again, only this lesson is not pleasure, but pain." And with that, she placed the blade against her wrist, and drew the blood. She sliced shallowly below the palm; a cut such as might barely leave a scar, but would yet draw much blood. "Your hand?" she asked, and he gave it reluctantly.
She was pleased at the look of shock on his face as she cut him, and their blood mingled, but then...
"Your blood does not wish to blend with mine, Lord?" she asked, uncertain. And then she saw his wrist had healed without a scar.
"I knew you were a lord among men, but I did not know you were a god!" She stepped back, for once uncertain. This was a wonder she had not seen before. Surely the Goddess had bestowed him with such a healing gift.
"I am a man," he said simply, and gathered her to himself.
He was a man, but if he was as this, how could he endure what lie ahead? Would this not be terrible? They were as one now, and would be drawn together through eternity. "Kronos, if Sekhmet is the Beginning of Time, you must be the End. When we are one, we encompass all things," she said, her voice wavering.
She could feel his breath against her hair. She could not let this happen. Perhaps in some other time, some other place, they would be happy.
"Go!" she then cried, drawing back. "Leave Thebes, do not return! You do not know what lay in store for you here...it is death!"
"I am hard to kill, Lady."
Hard to kill but so easy to wound.
She pleaded him with her eyes. "You must leave, and not return. Merenptah....he is brother and Pharaoh to me...and the people demand it was well..." She would never be able to convey to him what she was up against. "Go." She made her aspect cold. He glared at her.
"This is not over," he said, and departed.
Oh how she hoped he would know better than to return!
But they were one...and shared the ab-soul...she knew he would come back to her, always.
Posted on Jul 29, 1999, 10:54 PM from IP address 209.122.217.205
Looking down tat that slide might well have been one of the happier moments of my life.
"Well, I guess this means I'm off the hook. Be seeing you people around, now," I said, getting ready to go.
"I told you we shouldn't have let her see," Methos complained.
"Like I'd never have caught on," I shot back.
"Okay, pretend I'm in the dark..." Duncan began.
"It's not *mine*," I crowed, with a smile. "It's clever, brilliant, even, but I didn't design this bad boy. Anybody with a glancing knowledge of epidemiology would be *pale* from this...but..ha! Not mine."
I had to confess, it was ingenious though....
"What is she talking about?" MacLeod asked, still put out.
I explained.
"Look, my virus was just that...a virus, common rhinovirus, no big whoop. If someone wanted to go pure deadly with it, they could have, maybe, substituted a cute little RNA virus, a la ebola, or maybe hanta virus...why you'd want to go deadlier with it, I dunno."
I took a breath, and continued, still terribly excited. "But they have low incubation periods. They'd tear somebody up in a few days, tops. And they'd spread like wildfire, not terrible controllable...heh heh, but this...oy somebody knew what they were doing!
"They went bacteria with it. Genius! Not some kill'em quick no-see-ums like anthrax, either. What we're looking at is a spirochetic bacterium, people. Genius. Slightly higher incubation period, depending on the immune system of the host. Can lurk in the blood for days while the host goes about asymptomatic."
Dawsom, MacLeod, and Methos were staring at me as if I was talking about the joys of cooking small children. C'mon, immunology is fascinating. And so is, um, screwing with it. There are worse hobbies!
"Are you saying you're not impressed?" I went on. "Consider the types of bug we're dealing with here. Until we get a PCR going, we won't know what we're looking at, but...c'mon, let's not wait for the assay! Treponema palladium? A little love bug? B. burgdorferi--a little vector borne bugger? Oh...yeah...think of the possibilities!"
Methos cocked his head a minute in thought. "Bioterrorism...attack the food supply..."
I lit up. "That's thinking! As the uncontaminated food supply dwindles..."
"Famine," Methos said, catching on. "And people warring over what's left."
"And wide scale death. Plague, then famine, then war, then...endgame!"
"The Horsemen ride again," Duncan commented, darkly.
We both gave him ugly looks.
"But the point is," I stated, because obviously they entirely missed my point. "It isn't mine! I'm not responsible for this one. Somebody else did it!"
Dawson gave me a look, and shook his head. Apparently the Watcher who got this sample had found out a thing or two...and I realized I wasn't getting off that easily.
"Okay," I moaned, giving in. "Okay okay okay. I do a RT PCR, and find out if it's got Immortal RNA at the core. But if it doesn't..."
But I largely suspected it would. And when they copied it out to DNA, I already knew whose code I'd be looking at.
And we had a good pint of sample blood to run the scans on, too.
I had a bad feeling about this.
Posted on Jul 29, 1999, 9:51 PM from IP address 216.164.192.132
of my genetics classes in collage, hehe.
I can see you have been exposed to this, no pun intended!
Very interesting, I'm a little baffled and am heading towards the next part. 'g'
This is so good!!!!!!1 ((BH))
Posted on Jul 30, 1999, 7:18 AM from IP address 24.4.252.47
virus talk but I get the jist of it. Pretty neat using it in this way. To take the story up another level. :-) I usually stay away from things like that. It scares me!
Posted on Jul 30, 1999, 6:05 PM from IP address 208.255.125.45
"Endgame. They want to bring about the endgame," I moaned, holding my head in my hands. This was a lot to think about. "Emmanentizing the Eschaton. Peace on Earth..."
"It's the Gathering and the Apocalypse rolled into one. And they want it, now," Duncan expained, his eyes not leaving the road.
"Watchers and Immortals...I don't understand."
"Ex-Watchers. And this cult...has existed for some time."
Cult. At the word, I could remember the faces of the two Immortals Methos and I confronted not that long ago. They didn't challenge either of us, they simply strode forward with grim purpose, and we both knew they had been after me. I could never figure out why, but it was beginning to dawn on me. I developed it. And therefore, I'd know what it was when I saw it, and I'd "interfere."
Just like I was doing right now.
I leaned my head back, and thought. Something about this wasn't right.
"You have let him leave again," Akhmose chided, pointing at her accusingly. "You are weak for this man, deceitful one."
"How dare you tell me what I am!" she hissed. "I would not be Rameses' daughter if I let such insolence go unrebuked!" And with that, she slapped him.
He recoiled, and turned a shade of purple that told Sekhmet she had called him out. He was about to make the mistake of his life, and return her favor...but then, Pharaoh entered, and Akhmose regained his composure. He awaited the word of his master.
"Go," Merenptah said, simply, and with that, Akhmose retreated.
"Sister."
She would not look at him.
"Our father was old when he left this world. And And he left it to me to restore this land, with blood if necessary. I have much to do, and so do you."
With blood. And he did not mean only the blood of his enemies. He meant the blood of her chosen.
"I will do this thing, then, Lord."
But not before she had done the rite, and had given him the words of power.
She might let him die, but she would not let him go.
Posted on Jul 28, 1999, 9:21 PM from IP address 216.164.192.105
Methos took his time driving over to the Watchers
Compound. He parked the rental car far enough away
so he could contemplate a little longer what he
was about to do. He spared his friends the real
truth of his intentions, he knew their outrage.
Getting out and locking the door from habit,
Methos started walking forward, not even looking
for the guards. He felt like a sacrificial lamb.
The guards came along side him as he reached the
gate. Methos kept walking as the gate swung open
allowing him to enter.
He was shown into the front office like it was a
social call. Egan’s right hand man came in and
introduced himself.
"I’m Steven, I was told you were here. May I ask
why?" This serious Watcher displayed the
mannerisms of a leader himself.
Methos knew who he was. "I need to talk to Egan,
it’s important."
Steven commanded, "Nobody talks to Egan, you pass
your message through me."
"I received the summons." He took out the paper to
show him. "You called for me, so don't pretend not
to know."
Steven read the paper quickly, seeing Joshua's
signature, felt slightly betrayed.
Methos watched Steven carefully and realized that
he didn't know what was going on. "This should be
interesting." He thought.
Steven’s face looked indecisive as he left the
room telling the guard to watch him.
Methos felt the wheels of the inevitable roll into
motion. Soon he would know why the Watchers wanted
him again.
Less then ten minutes later, he returned and
motioned Methos to follow him. Steven told him as they walked quickly through the
corridors. "Mr. Pierson, Egan is very busy, but he wants to see you."
He showed Methos to the courtyard where Egan was
enjoying an early lunch.
"So, Adam Pierson is here. I'm so pleased you answered the summons. It saved us a lot of trouble trying to draw you out." Said Egan, with false good will.
He pointed to another chair indicating for him to
sit. Then sat down to continue with his meal. He
began thinking what he could do with such an
ancient Immortal.
Motioning the guards to leave them, Egan leaned in closer to tell Adam this.
"I know who you really are, Methos. It took many hours of research, but what did you expect?"
Methos had to ask him, "The Gathering is here so
why do you want me?" He sat there with his hands
together.
"The Gathering? Yes, that is good news.
At the Gathering all greedy Immortals want your
power." Guessed Egan, passing a cup to Methos.
"What would you say to challenging MacLeod." He
asked.
"Which one?" Asked Methos, drinking the hot tea
and playing dumb.
Egan laughed and said, "I forgot about Connor."
Then shook his head, "No, I want you to challenge
and defeat Duncan MacLeod."
"There's just one problem." Explained Methos, "I
refuse to go to the Gathering."
Egan leaned close to Methos, putting his hand on
the chair. "You cannot refuse that which calls
your very soul." His dark eyes looked intensly at him.
"Unless I'm dead." Replied Methos starring into
Egan's eyes, his ultimatum now spoken.
Egan laughed again at him, saying, "Do you really think you can escape your destiny?"
"You can't force me to attend. That's the real
reason I'm here. Waiting until it's over or die."
Confessed Methos.
Egan now leaned over to whisper into the oldest
ear these words, "Don't think you can depart from
this earth so easily."
Now it was Methos's turn to laugh at Egan. "If I
wanted the easy way out, I would have challenged
MacLeod and forced him to take my head."
"He didn't take it last time Methos, I doubt he
ever will." Egan replied, finishing off his meal.
Methos looked melancholy and admitted, "Yes, I
know. For that I'm both grateful and sorry."
Standing up to leave, Egan gave this parting shot,
"You are wise, Methos. I can't understand why you
never became a Grand Immortal."
The guards left with Egan, and Methos was alone.
He was thinking about the Gathering, but he was
also smiling.
"He wants too much power and that’s how I’ll get
him." Methos pondered Egan's parting words.
"I’m glad I’m not the Grand Immortal. It's too
much responsibility. If I can stop Egan then the
Immortals will have a chance at the Gathering
without outside interference."
Yes, the wheel was turning and Methos only had to
wait for it to click into place.
Posted on Jul 28, 1999, 10:27 AM from IP address 208.254.109.13
Darius shook his head to clear the memories away then turned his head to stare at the lit candles which burned softly in his bedroom.
He preferred the candlelight to the harshness of electrical lighting even though the electrical lighting was a far better improvement than the light given off by any fire or candle's gleam. It reminded him of his youth as well as his long lifetime; it was what he had grown up with and had used as the only means of light at night for centuries.
He sighed deeply then stood up and walked over to the bed. Slipping his habit off over his head, he tossed it to one side, then bent down to remove his shoes. The soft light gleamed upon his body; it still showed signs of the strength of the man despite the centuries of pacifism and not picking up a sword to fight another.
He stood and stretched as he worked out the kinks in his muscles before going over to the wall beside his bed, running his fingertips along the stonework and masonry until he felt a stone move.
Bending down, he blew on the crack which held the stone in place as he worked both hands and fingers against it, removing the plaster and mortar that had held it in place for centuries. It was harder to remove than what he remembered it ever having been before--he grinned to himself.
Of course it's going to be harder--it hadn't been bothered in centuries; there's never been a need for it to be disturbed.
Until now, that is.
The stone moved apart from the others. Darius pushed in and it ground across the other stonework occassionally catching itself on it. Soon, a distinct gap was showing in the wall, he pulled the stone outwards into his hands where it fell with a heavy plop.
Reaching into the opening in the wall he felt around for a moment until he felt the cloth enshrouded object he was searching for and withdrew it into the light.
The cloth crumbled away at his touch and he gently laid the long object on his bed, then reached over to grab a candle for better lighting. His eyes looked upwards at the ceiling light and he nodded to himself that he needed the better lighting of electricity rather than the dim canldelight. He flipped on the overhead light, blew out the candle and carefully unwrapped the object.
Inside the cloth was an ancient sword, short and squat in design similar to Roman blades but it was definitely not Roman in orgin. The grip and pommel were intricately engraved and wrapped in gold wire which was made into elaborate animal figures and depictions of gods and men.
Darius ran a hand upon the grip as he fingered the design, then followed the blade upwards to its' tip with his fingers. He curled he fingers into a fist and brought his hand back, his face showing near disgust at the thought of even picking it up.
Greyson had been a good swordman when he trained him--how much better had he become now? Darius felt that perhaps just in case Greyson should show and want his head, he should at least be prepared. He reached down and slipped the sword into his hands, swinging it in an arc to get the feel of it again.
It felt--it felt--unnatural! To be even considering using it went aagainst everything that Darius had been for centuries and taught others too. It would bring him down to the level of savagery that he now was beyond, and the thought of him fighting another sickened him.
He glanced it over a final time, replaced the fragile cloth over it again and returned it to its' hidden niche in the wall. He then replaced the stone; the wall looked as it had before without a trace of what was hidden inside or that the wall had been disturbed. No one would have ever thought that the wall held something very precious and rare and that was how he wanted it.
What should he do about Greyson?
"Perhaps," he said outloud to the walls, "the question should be what can I do?"
Posted on Jul 28, 1999, 5:24 AM from IP address 207.136.48.145
It's an insight to Darius that we never saw. That he still kept his sword hidden makes sense. So if Methos is not around for Darius to turn to for help, he sends the message to Duncan. I guess you've read, Shadow Of Obession? It feels like this story could fit right in there.
Posted on Jul 28, 1999, 10:13 AM from IP address 208.254.109.13
as most of the series books have been to me. I find then full of holes, historically inaccurate in some, either too heavy-handed or out of character with/for the main characters, and the K;immies are too 2-D. Donna's book, "Zealot" seems to be the only one that seems well researched for the history and is a solid story.
I also find that I tend to read some of the stories and tell myself that *I* could write a better story than the drivel I was/am reading.
This story and "S of O" may have some similarities but I find that there isn't a lot of them.(and that is because it's written deliberately different from *that* Darius and plot) I know this because I'm the one writing it and if you were to read it in it's entirity you would see what I am talking about. And since it's not finished, that makes it hard to make an accurate, comparative judgement as to the contents .
Posted on Jul 28, 1999, 12:38 PM from IP address 207.136.54.125
I've read some of the books that made me almost gag. It was written out of character and very silly in some scenes.
I only made the comparison to S of O because not that it was simular but you seemed to fill in a few gaps. No offence intended.
Actually I liked S of O better than Man Of Measure. (double gag) and Zealot the best. Element of Fire I couldn't get into at all.
Yes, you can write better than some of those ah...authors. (dare I use that word?) LOL!
Posted on Jul 28, 1999, 12:56 PM from IP address 208.254.109.13
And flopping around in the water waiting for more.
BTW. Thanks for the information about your site, yes I have been there and started reading, sigh, I'm not getting enough sleep now. LOL
Wonderful imaginative stories, you write. ((BH))
Thanks Celedon 'g'
Posted on Jul 29, 1999, 9:31 PM from IP address 24.4.252.47
Don't ask me when Duncan became a comforting presence. I hadn't expected that, myself. But he seemed to have a better grasp of what I was going through since the Quickening happened...as if he knew what it was like to be losing oneself. He didn't tell me to snap out of it, he only checked in on me, which I appreciated, becaused I knew I made him as uncomfortable as hell.
But today was going to be different.
"Sorry," I said, trying to compose myself. "I'm, um, setting the flat on fire..." I mustered a smile, still holding the candle in one hand while holding my slipper (which I had used to slap out the flames) in the other.
"Tell me what you make of this," he said, and put a newspaper in front of me. No "hello" or anything.
I gave him a quizzical look. "Little paper hats?"
"No, look at the article," and then he pointed.
I read, my heart thudding sickly in my chest. There was an outbreak of what they were calling "ebola" in North Korea. Not a very likely place for that to break out. There was mass hysteria, and they had begun shooting people in the affected village, and burning the bodies. The photo was of people in decontamination suits, and flames in the background.
"Duncan, I know what this...could be. But I'm out of it. There is nothing that can be done if it's mine. It's out of my hands."
He put his hand on my shoulder, and I looked up into his eyes. "Do you really believe that? Can you really think that it's over?"
I had to look away. He was right. It was my business, after all. At the very least, I could take an interest. (But in my mind, I'm re-living the dream, the one where Kronos tells me this is my legacy, and I must simply let the world burn. And I halfway believe this is how it should be.)
"You've talked to Joe?"
"He thinks it's something bigger than renegade Watchers."
"But they're involved?" I ask, remembering Richardson, the only other case I had ever seen of this being used on people.
"I'll explain in the car."
And so, after so many weeks of living in a dream, I was back to the nightmare.
Posted on Jul 27, 1999, 7:38 PM from IP address 216.164.251.122
(I have posted the first half of this a while back but I'm reposting it with the rest of the chapter so there's a continuity of events)
Chapter 18
Italy
Grayson sat apart from his army, his horse slowly picking his way through the now demolished village, which had been ravaged, and it’s villagers either killed or rounded up until he gave the orders that determined their fate. His eyes glanced at the bodies which lay upon the ground in a jumbled pile, an occasional woman or child mixed in with the men and boys that had died.
Smoke rose skywards from the burning wreckage of houses that had once stood proudly around a small square. On one end of town a sheep and goat pen stood but instead of holding animals, it held the remaining women and children and it was to the pen that he directed his horse.
Soldiers scurried about their duties pausing to give a quick salute as he passed; some still were seen fighting those who continued to resist between the alleys and streets. One could hear the fighting better than one could see it but it nevertheless was evident that this battle was still not quite over with.
His hose carried him around the parameter of the pen; he eyed the wailing and sobbing women with a jaundiced eye. Ignoring the pleas for mercy from the prisoners, his attention was drawn to a young woman who sat impassively in a corner of the pen, nursing a child from her full, ripe breast, rocking the child as she did so. She intrigued him; for all the commotion that was going on around her, she seemed to have a quiet sort of dignity and calm.
One of the guards came up to him, saluted, and then asked what the next order was in regards to the prisoners. Instantly, one side of his mouth curled upwards in a cruel half grin then replied as his eyes shifted from one prisoner’s face to another, “ Kill them all when I leave the area but leave one alive so that Rome shall know who did this.” He stretched out his arm and pointed at the woman in the corner. “Bring her to me. Now!”
She was brought to him immediately and he bent down from his horse to cup her chin in his hand turning her face this way and that to get a better look at her. The child in her arms began to stir then cry, drawing Grayson’s attention to it. His eyes flew from the child to the woman, then back to the child. He softly smiled at the baby as he touched its’ cheek gently.
His face turned towards the soldier who held the woman in place. “Bring her to my tent,” he ordered in the guttural Goth tongue, then glanced at the woman and spoke in his native Latin that he had spoken when he had been younger and mortal. “No need to fear me, lady. You shall live as your child shall.” He gave her a half smile, and in a flash of movement, scooped the child out of her arms and into his own and galloped away.
Once he was out of range of hearing the mother’s pleas for her child as well as the screams of the women and children as the soldiers slaughtered them, he stopped the horse and tended to the child who wailed loudly and fiercely for its mother. He clucked his tongue at the boy, hushing it in a quiet tone in Latin while rocking it into a quiet calm. Soon he had boy gazing solemnly at his face, while one hand clutched at Grayson’s long, thick braids that swung with each movement of the horse as he made his way towards a lone spot that looked south.
When he arrived, he picked the child up so that he was eye to eye with him then turned the child around to face southward. “Look upon this world, little one,” Grayson half whispered to the child. “All that you know, all that was before now will soon be gone.”
He turned the child back towards him. “Look at me.” His voice rose in volume as he continued, “I am the destroyer of it all!”
The child began to wail loudly at the pronouncement.
Greece
Metal clashed upon metal, making it sound as if it were a chorus of voices, each voice competing for attention in the deadly battle of life or death on the plain. The cacophony of noise along with the frightened whinneys of the horses reverberated in the hils which surrounded the armies, making Alaric wince in pain.
His head hurt as did his sword arm; he lifted and slashed repeatedly at those unlucky souls who came close to him in the fray so that perhaps they could take his life then have bragging rights as to who slew the barbarian's leader when all had gathered around the campfire at night. Objects swam before his eyes and he shook his head to clear his double vision.
Clouds of dust rolled skywards as men fell to hand to hand combat. Soon the lines on both sides were so intermingled that it was hard to distinguish who was fighting for who until one looked closely at the differences in garb between the men. The salty smell of sweat, fear and blood that had been spilled upon the ground stung the nostrils of every man, but no one seemed to care. They were too busy trying to stay alive.
Constantine took another swipe over his face with his arm to rid himself of the sweat which kept creeping over his face from the heat and closeness of marauding bodies which formed a tight circle around him for his protection from the encroaching barbarians. His eyes swung left and right as his searched for sign of his co-general but with all the fighting going on around him he was unable to locate him. "Stilicho!" he bellowed but the sound was swallowed within all the other sounds.
The men who encircled him wavered and began to fall back into a tighter circle around him as the Goths surged forward until they finally broke through the line. Instantly, he was besieged by Goth soldiers and he retreated backwards in his chariotbut found that it hampered his movement. Jumping out, he slashed and parried his way across the field until at last he managed to wrap his hand through the mane of a horse running loose and vaulted upwards on its' back.
At the unfamilar weight, the horse reared skywards; he held on tightly with both knees and tight grip, taking advantage for a brief moment to take a look around to see how the battle went. Much to his disappointment, there was no apparent victory for Rome that he could see in that split second before the horse fell back to the ground. He pulled at the horse's mane and guided it away fron the fighting as he hacked, thrust and parried his way through the throng until he felt the familar prickling of his skin that signaled the presence of another Immortal nearby. No matter where he looked, he could not find the source of the sensation he was feeling.
Darius stopped in mid-motion as he too felt the sensation that crept through him while at the same time surrounded him in an aura of anticipation of the challenge that was sure to come. He pushed away the Roman soldier who continued to try and stab him while his eyes tried to seek out where the other immortal might be.
Swinging his head to and fro and try as he might, he was unable to pinpoint the location of where the other was. His face became a snarling mask in his disappointment and anticipation of the challenge that was not to be asked for and accepted on this day. He roughly kicked his mount in the ribs as he swung around and rode away. "By all the gods!" he swore loudly as he shook his sword in mid-air.
Methos sat high up on a hillside in a grove of olive trees, calmly choosing olives off the branch he held. Every once in a while, his eyes drifted down to where the fight which spread out below him; he studied with a practiced objectivity both the strengths and weaknesses of the opposing armies, shaking his head as he saw the forces rally then fall back--first the Roman army, then the the Goths.
Popping an olive into his waiting mouth, he slowly lowered himself and stretched his long, lean body out along the ground. As he chewed it occured to him that Darius would want a full accounting as to where he was during the battle. One side of his mouth quirked upwards, showing the deep dimple within his cheek as he thought about their agreemant.
He had agreed to fight alongside of Darius--but not risk his life. His life and head were too precious; he wasn't about to put himself at risk for a trivial fight as this. Instead, he would wait and see how this fight came off before deciding about joining in. His eyelids drooped heavily in the heat and he waved off a fly which buzzed about his face before sitting back upright to observe more of the happenings below him.
The hours drug slowly by as the sun rode across the sky marking the time's passage ans he drove his sword deeply onto the ground to create a makeshift sundial to mark the passage of time. He mentally ticked off the numbers of the Roman legions versus the Goths, while his mind registered the sounds of the heavy fighting. The information he collected would come in handy for bartering with Darius as well as Alaric for things he wanted. A slow smile spread over his lips as he thought about what he might ask for this time.
All was well, he thought to himself. All was well.
Posted on Jul 27, 1999, 12:35 AM from IP address 207.136.49.199
You are a marvelous writer, gosh this was impressive.
Your depiction of the battle scenes are splendid., I felt as though I was in them.
I was especially moved by the village scene with the infant, well done!
I loved the sly, cunning and self -serving nature of Methos, hehe, how true!
I have unfortunately not read this entire epic, is there a site where you have it posted?
Posted on Jul 27, 1999, 12:49 PM from IP address 24.4.252.47
as are all my other HL novelettes. There are 2 other ROG related stories on my Library page as well as several other stories each with a different lead and characters. I have another serial in progress there that features Richie and tells of his time when he is just becoming a part of Tessa's aand Duncan's world and the subsequent things that happen to him as he gets used to having an actual family of sorts. (It's called "Redemption and Acceptance").
There is a rollicking and adventurous story called "Seasons" there that takes place shortly after the breakup of the Horsemen as Kronos pursues Methos across Bronze Age Europe so that the Horsemen can become a major force to be reckoned with once more. It is the longest of my mini epics at 30 chapters.
Another tells the story of Duncan's training at the hands of Connor. There's a lot of humor in it, a lot of pathos, fighting, learning on Duncan's part and it ties up loose ends from the series like what finally happened to Duncan's mom? It's called "Legend".
Another is "By Invitation Only" a story that deals with sexual obsession and revenge. It is a Duncan story and takes place shortly after Tessa's death.
It is very poignant and has caused several people to cry over parts of it.
There is several more there--all of the stories I write are fully reseached as to the historical/archeological/cultural accuracy so what you read within the stories are actual people and events as well as dates of things. Many people within Full Circle actually lived and experienced the wrath of the Goths and what happened next.
To my Library for all my stories and synopsis of them.
Enjoy, let me know what you think of them.
Posted on Jul 27, 1999, 2:04 PM from IP address 207.136.45.150
but why would he be expected as we see him in BoB? He became bitter and angry after the Light Quickening as he saw all his hopes fade then dissipate due to Darius' conversion.
And he felt betrayed by it; he didn't understand exactly what had happened to his father. And maybe Darius didn't understand himself what had happened to him...
Posted on Jul 28, 1999, 12:43 PM from IP address 207.136.54.125
The women cleaned him and gave him linen to wear, braided his hair, and made him presentable to their goddess. And he was, in this state, most beautiful; every bit fit for her. There was not a blemish on him save for the one--the scar. But even this she considered beautiful, as if she could read the source and measure him by that. He was an offering to her--she reminded herself of this. He was not an object to be worshipped, although, by all the gods of the Nile, he could be. He was beautiful.
She swept the braids off of his face as he knelt before her. "My lord," she breathed, knowing this was not how it should be, but saying it all the same...for he was a king to her--she knew this. "I will show you now, the secret."
And she reached into the bowl, and painted the symbol on his chest, far enough down so he could see it. Ourobouros. The serpents. Eternity.
"This is eternity, do you see?" she asked.
He looked down, and waited for her to explain.
"Imagine two serpents entertwined. They are two, but know not their beginning nor their end."
He looked at her, evilly. "I can think of two serpents entwined," he said.
She smiled. "You believe that is lewdness, but actually, you are right. We could be as two serpents....we could do this rite as we speak...if you would..."
"I always would..." he spoke, and they came together. This was eternity...two serpents entwined.
But the banging would not stop, even when the alarm went off, and I rose, reluctantly, as I saw the bowl half-way fall from the table, and rushed to take it to the sink, for I knew I would deal with Methos' disaproval again if he saw this sight...but then, I heard the whine of the smoke alarm, and realized that the candle had sputtered again,and was igniting my papers, and went to put out the flame...
And as the chaos I dwelt in went on, the door was battered down, and it was not Methos, whom I had been expecting.
It was MacLeod.
And though I had every reason to hate him, I was relieved.
Posted on Jul 26, 1999, 11:46 PM from IP address 216.164.251.149
...barging down my door, but I can't wait to see what happens next! Ugh, I'm such a fic junkie, lol...this is wonderful Vixen! I realy enjoy the seamless blending between the past and the present, good job!
Posted on Jul 27, 1999, 1:16 AM from IP address 209.171.113.52
Oh and I just love the serpent, *evg*
I know I should try to look at the entire meaning, but I'm always looking for the smut, hey can't blame a girl for that! :)
Posted on Jul 27, 1999, 7:48 AM from IP address 24.4.252.47
Of course, having things to think over and then thinking them over was two separate things. I am a person who feels...when I think, things become unclear.
I was *nothing* like her, but I nearly lost my head over some resemblance apparently only existing in the mind of a man some three millenia or so old? Because of what? My goth fashion sense? Too much eyeliner?
Sure, Methos. That kind of reasoning and fifty cents won't get me a candy bar anymore.
And what of the grisly end to that story, anyway? Of course she would have had to do that. He was mad. He would have come back forever unless he was stopped. He left nothing alone. It would not have been over unless she put it in no uncertain terms, and getting "nailed",so to speak, is about as "not uncertain" as i suppose a person can manage.
But then again, some things do stay mysteries.
Somethings are facts.
I glance at the cover of one of the few non-scientific journals spread about the room. "The Myth of Isis." Funny how it gave me more impetus to do what I was planning.
But I was feeling that urge again. I needed to sleep. Alcohol no longer brought me to the stage I needed, and I dared not use anything stronger. But there was always one rest...
I picked up the knife, and placed a bowl under my arm. Methos was right, I should be "over" this, but it is still a miracle every time I do it. The point is sharp, and the bowl catches the blood, and though my arm burns at first, the pain quickly subsides.
And I have a little peace.
Posted on Jul 25, 1999, 5:55 AM from IP address 209.122.217.136
Hmmm....you guys know this is not an end...of course....
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just a bridge into the next bit of the tale. I don't let anything go, you see. The muses have me by the nose here, though...because I have to pull off, um...a miracle?
what do do, what to do...
Posted on Jul 25, 1999, 6:17 AM from IP address 209.122.217.136
Well I'm not saying that I am disappointed that you ended this, for now.................I am! (oops, wasn't going to say that.)
And also disappointed that I have to wait for another one, waaaaaa!
Vixen, the end here is very dark, I feel the pain of this (person), very sad way to find peace.
I will look for your next one. ((BH))
Posted on Jul 26, 1999, 10:39 AM from IP address 24.4.252.47
Methos paused here as if not wanted to go on, knowing all the while that I needed him too, even though I knew what was coming. I could see what this Sekhmet would have to do to end this...
"When we found him," Methos continued,"he hung from a tree."
"They lynched him?" I gasped, only slightly incredulous.
"No," Methos answered, with a level look that conveyed to me how things were in that time and place...that there were some cruelties I couldn't understand. "He was hung from a spike driven into the tree."
He did not say "driven through Kronos' body," and he did not need to. I could imagine this being dodn, and the pain Kronos would have felt knowing he would endure this thing that no mortal could have without perishing.
"I brought him down," Methos continued, "but he never quite returned to normal..or whatever passed for normal with him. He raved that this was what she *would* do...he should have known. It was her kind of betrayal."
"He knew her before?" I breathed, swept up with anticipation.
"He swore he knew her some centuries before."
"But," I was confused,"why couldn't he have? What is a few hundred years?"
"You don't understand," he then explained, as if I were perfectly stupid.
"She was mortal."
Posted on Jul 24, 1999, 10:43 PM from IP address 216.164.250.111
It then hit me...how strange this all was. I had completely imagined her to be as myself..an Immortal, but she was...
My mind reeled. She must have been dead thousands of years.
"But Methos," I began, tentatively. "This Akhmose..."
"You've had a very powerful Quickening...and of course you have questions, he must have been very old...but I never knew this Immortal...I can't know everything."
"Do I look like her? You *did* see her?"
He looked at me. He shook his head.
"No. Maybe. It's the way you are...the hair...red...and that...make-up. And the ankh. And..." he rose.
"You are *nothing* like her. You have to stop this."
I let him leave. I had things to think over.
Posted on Jul 24, 1999, 10:49 PM from IP address 216.164.250.111
sigh* I'm afraid she's the same little narrator I just keep using--
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Me. I mean, not in a sick, "I've no grasp on reality way." More like--it's the same first-person narrator who fell in with Kronos, created the virus, loved Kronos--or something, anyhow,and now wonders if she didn't have a little past-life something-something going there, too.
But I just think of her as Vixen.
(Cause I like that name better than Mary Sue.)Also, she changes her name a lot.
Posted on Jul 25, 1999, 10:45 PM from IP address 209.122.217.24
I kind of thought so because of the character voice, but I wanted to be sure. :-) Sometimes reading late at night, my mind plays tricks and I thought maybe I was missing something. *g*
Glad you liked the poem!
Posted on Jul 26, 1999, 7:08 AM from IP address 208.254.111.226
He would give up nothing once he had set his sights on it...and this woman was no different. He left the camp for her...he went to the city...and he entered the temple. And she welcomed him, and he lay in her arms...and then would return to camp..looking like a lion that had fed well.
And this would go on, and the men, brutal as they were...lost discipline, and raided the area about the city. Methos despaired, knowing full well that this could only bring about the displeasure of Pharaoh.
And it did. Merenptah knew that the only way to deal with these death-dealing men was to mete out death...and so it was. Those who were strangers and were found...were dead. Anything to end this pestilence...these horsemen who stole from good men and women, and demoralized the kingdom.
One day, outside the city, Methos and two others had happened upon the bodies of three men...and Kronos was still within. For, even though Methos told him this was folly, he came to her. And she always seemed to welcome him...he would not be turned away...or so it seemed.
One time, he returned to camp something wroth...evilly enraged...he threw things, cursed her...she had bid him not return. And he would not...if he were sane. But of course...he did.
Three days Methos knew he was there...but dared not encroach on this place. If Kronos was fool enough to think he could continue this affair...let him pay the consequences.
Of course, he did.
Because she was a very determined woman, this Sekhmet, named for the goddess of war...and she knew what Kronos was.
And when Methos found him...he was not surprised at the state he was in.
A terrible state indeed.
Posted on Jul 24, 1999, 10:13 PM from IP address 216.164.250.111
on the next thread of your story, GASP..I MADE A MISTAKE!!!!!!!!!
I'm starting to get that feeling of sadness for Kronos again. And this part really drove the feeling home, so to speak. 'g' Oh no pun intended. "Hung him from a tree with spike!! OUCH!! I thought I hurt him in my story heheee. Nice post Vixen!
Posted on Jul 25, 1999, 4:49 AM from IP address 24.4.252.47
...her computer hates her so she promises to be back after she makes friends with it again. Probably tomorrow. She wanted me to bid the board adieu for her, and to say she's sorry she made such a brief appearance at DOBC Party I.
Roses,
Nyn
Posted on Jul 23, 1999, 10:11 PM from IP address 209.160.172.213
Well, I have sent my Caspian Clone back to the K'immieverse (t)
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and am off to bed...and...*Morg is swooped up into a pair of really beefy arms and kissed breathless* CONSONE!!!!!!!!!!! *yes Consone Clone, I am too tired to "punish" you...give me a reason or several to forget your transgressions and you are partially off the proverbial hook!* Nightey night ladies, looks like there is no rest for the wicked!!
Posted on Jul 23, 1999, 9:50 PM from IP address 209.252.235.138
And Consone...didn't he look happy? (Does anyone realize he simply brooded while she was mad at him?--Okay when he's brooding? He's intense, such a big deal? I'm just saying!)
Posted on Jul 23, 1999, 9:55 PM from IP address 216.164.193.90
...parties like this usually go on for the whole weekend. I'm sure we'll see more party goers yet! Most of us curl up with one of our clones and wait out the intermission with a drink in one hand and blues in the background. Cheers! :-)
Posted on Jul 23, 1999, 10:03 PM from IP address 209.160.172.213
I see the gangs all here. I was delayed due to a little rondevous in the stables. *winks at Duncan* <ducks> Good throw Cel...I think you got Connor with that one. <downs a shot of tequila> woooohhoooo!
Joe's band is sounding great as usual! Come on Duncan, let's dance. mmmmDuncan, are you still that happy to see me? yum-yum.
I think Merkie and Fitz should get a room, don't you? Fitz does seem to be enjoying himself...but, then, he has always had a special place in his heart for RavenMerc.
I always love a DOB party. Now where is that Moose going with the remote and a 6 pack? No, Mac, don't try to stop him... never touch Katmandu's remote or beer... it wouldn't be pretty.
*swaying happily to the blues*
HH
Posted on Jul 23, 1999, 9:48 PM from IP address 152.163.194.206