Fast notes made during Sinbad tape.

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I rewatched one of my tapes with Bryn and Sinbad.
Before I write my stories I like to understand alittle of my characters I write about- in poem form-Forces me to think about the character.This is what I got from Bryn towards Sinbad.You guys tell me if I'm right? I know grammer mistakes-That's why I need an editor and Always had one.But mine only does BandB.

Bryn

I am like the moongoddess,made up of both lightness and darkness.Goddess of the moon and huntress of the night.I'm two sides contained in one fragile frame.A porcelain doll.angelic face essences of innocents,soulful eyes and a gentle touch to rock you softly to your sleep.And kiss your worried brow smooth until the morning wakes.
But the other side the huntress will protect you ferociously with lowered voice,eyes filled with alertness and magic.Weapons at my side and I'm not afraid to use them.So do not think for a moment I will ever leave you truely alone.As long as you are here with me I will guard your back and protect you.
Her feelings towards Sinbad
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As for her feelings towards Sinbad.
I came up with this.

I prey Sinbad that you dream of me as I dream of you.Your touch warm and tender electrifying me with desire,wanting more but keeping silent.
While your smile radiates into my core and burns away my fear and sorrow.The sound of my name on your lips echoes within,sending out pleasure and shears my mind shut from all pain and panic but wanting more of you- desire.Sometimes just seeing you is enough.I can see it in your eyes.I can feel it in your touch and hear it when you call my name.Yet I can't comply for I do not yet understand this new desire.So I will keep silent my Sinbad.
Until we meet again in this slow seductive dance we do of denial.Until then my love will you dream of me as I dream of you and we'll hide our loving bonds in our own shadows.





Posted on Jul 21, 1999, 9:59 AM

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  1. Wow!!!. Noelerin, Jul 21, 1999
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