Thank you for your kindness,but after reading some of the well written stories here.It seems that I am fortunate to be surrounded by talented people.But please these are just rough drafts so I get a feel for my charactors.So you think I have Bryn's mind set?As for Sinbad I had to get into a mans mode of thinking.and his background .Heres my intake of Sinbad feelings towards Bryn.I'll get everyone in my family to sign and e-mail so we get Sinbad back.
This is after the kiss.
There are so many girls in all ports of call that one blends into the other.No need for apologies its just a port fling.No ties that binds,no pain,loss or sorrows felt or given.They throw themselves at me or the next port sailor.Im so sorry Bryn but nonething can earse that innocent sweet kiss you've given.
In Allahs name Bryn how did you creep in pass my many sheilds and defensives? It was so subtle and clandestine.I had no choice in this matter.was it the shock of your first appearance. the amber of your hair,or the glint in your dazzling eyes, the softness in your touches.How did you get in.When many others tried and failed Bryn.You surprised me in your wit and laughter.Hypnotized me with your gaze.Offered your life for mine.I have held you in my arms,asked you for advise.fought by your side. or is it the softness of your touches as you touched my cheek,or are you fullfilling my secret needs inside.Does it lay in your strenght or intelligence.Each barrier dismantled.How are you getting through Bryn? You tantalized,and suprised
given me your secrets too.
How subtly it happened you disarmed me at each and every turn.You've mudded my thoughts with your beauty and the kindness and innocents of your heart.
Or was it just a innocent childlike good luck kiss.
That ingited my heart and soul with such a raging fire that I couldn't deny myself one kissed filled with my passions.and in that passion did I meet your desire or did I frighten you away?.Please don't make me love you Bryn for I have no defenses and it would take all my strenght to deny you.Please Bryn I don't want to lose you too.It just now dawns on me That in a away I have always loved you.The key to that knowleadge was one sweet innocent kiss that lent itself to another.Why Bryn have you broken through my defenses and made me realize that I love you.