Here, when you point out errors to me, don't mention this one:
by Chimera (no login)>Brandt and Oniko blinked, both shooting up straight.
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>"Lance...?" Oniko whispered under his breath.
I got it already. I was trying to equal out the parts more and forgot Oniko hadn't met Lance.
Posted on Feb 25, 2004, 4:40 AM
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