It's very interesting!!!

by smiley :)

I enjoyed reading both chapters, though I have a preference for the second one...heehee :D The language is good too and I love the way you end each chapter...its so filled with mystery and suspense! Looking forward to read more....I can't wait for Anita to be born! :p Smile always!

Posted on Sep 29, 2002, 5:20 AM
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Thanx y'all :). Viet Chick on Sep 29, 2002, 1:01 PM

Ch. 3, 4, 5. Viet Chick on Oct 5, 2002, 1:44 AM

I LOVE ur story!! its sooooo cool! please keep it updated!. debbie on Oct 5, 2002, 4:59 PM

Thanx. Viet Chick on Oct 5, 2002, 6:54 PM

SOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL............!!!!!. on Oct 5, 2002, 10:00 PM

Thanx Mariska!. Viet Chick on Oct 5, 2002, 10:42 PM

nope.. I saw a lot of Anita stories!! its just that so many people make them in a day. debbie on Oct 6, 2002, 2:55 AM

Oh, I didn't realize.... Viet Chick on Oct 6, 2002, 3:44 AM

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