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Memorial Day parade

May 24 2009 at 3:53 PM
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Lynd. resident.  (Login lyndhurst123)

Lets all go to the parade at 11:00 it starts at the American Legion. Lets see our great commissioners march in their 5th memorial day parade and congradulate them! Good job LYNDHURST FIRST. Keep up the good work.! =)

 
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May 24 2009, 3:54 PM 

sorry congratulate.

 
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May 24 2009, 7:18 PM 

This is a Parade for all our Armed Services. For the battles they fought , some seeing there best friends get killed . Its also for all the women that worked on all the wounded , Its for them and them only . Your not there to congratulate the Commissioners

 
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May 25 2009, 7:42 PM 

you're, not your, and what's up with the space after the periods and commas?

 
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LyndhurstOnly
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May 26 2009, 10:56 AM 

LyndhurstLuke sounds like Bandolino , I guess he or she is back to correct everybody

 
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May 28 2009, 5:23 PM 

"LyndhurstLuke sounds like Bandolino , I guess he or she is back to correct everybody"


I can help you. No space after the comma. There should be a period at the end of your sentence. I don't help everybody. Some people speak and write correctly. It's never to late to improve. It will make you sound more intelligent and your point more convincing.

You're (not your) welcome.

LL

 
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May 30 2009, 1:54 AM 

LyndhurstLuke I learned along time ago that if you are going to correct somebody, make sure you are correct in doing so. A space is necessary after a comma or period. It is not needed before the comma or period.

 
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May 30 2009, 8:24 AM 

Yes, I stand corrected. It's what I meant. There are spaces before and after the comma. I'm a work in process. There is always room for improvement. I welcome the help too.

LL

 
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LyndhurstLuke
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May 30 2009, 8:28 AM 

Let's throw a comma in after LyndhurstLuke in your response shall we?

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June 20 2009, 2:24 AM 

The poster was correct. The parade was to honor our service men and women, not the douche bags that "won" the town election. My suggestion to you, Luke, would be to stay on point with your posts rather than trying to divert from the topic with irrelevant grammar lessons.

 
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June 25 2009, 5:15 PM 

Can a grammar lesson ever be irrelevant? It makes the poster sound more intelligent about their point. For instance, you write very well. Keep up the good work.

LL

 
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May 26 2009, 8:13 AM 

I agree with you 100%, this was a day to honor our servicemen and remember all that they have done for our country.

 
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