ARE YOU doing here in this forum you're only wasting your time. Do you not have a life other than criticizing good works. Let me put it this way. Could you have come up with a story like Daniela?
I sure would like to see you try. This story was not written so people would go up to it and say "hmmm...let me waste my time and point out things that I don't like about this novela and tell everybody." Hon, that's what teachers are for.
