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March 18 2002 at 5:27 AM
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[Fic](Yaoi) Untitled (1/?) - in need of beta!!
I agree with most of Yev's comments... just a bit more description needed in certain areas, yadda yadda...
I like it so far, though... ^^
~ Ju-chan ~
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