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April 23 2002 at 8:00 PM
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[fic] Afterwards (1/1) [rated: G][smarm][ficlet]
Typical of your style, I note.... I'm fine with most of it.. except the starting..
It seems stilted, choked, kinda like how you want to start the engine, but it jams up on you.... am I making sense?
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