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August 8 2003 at 1:04 AM
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Re: A ' Huh?-Makisen-fic-when-you-read-it.........' ^_^
For one, the puncuation is not right. There is no story to this and everything seemed rather abrupt.
Personally, I think that the usage of puncuation to represent thoughts of the character is rather lazy of the author.
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- Ju on Aug 8, 5:11 PM
*gives Ju CPR*
- Pastles on Aug 8, 7:09 PM
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