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      • pastles (no login)
      Posted Aug 8, 2003 1:04 AM

      For one, the puncuation is not right. There is no story to this and everything seemed rather abrupt.

      Personally, I think that the usage of puncuation to represent thoughts of the character is rather lazy of the author.

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