Suddenly........

Sendoh:- Maki-KUNNNNNN!!!!!! I want to get pregnant!!!

Maki:-??????

The end

^______^

dies laughing

D'you have a name, "someone who is really bored.........*_*"?

And did you want me to beta-read this?

Ju
the blue ellie

For one, the puncuation is not right. There is no story to this and everything seemed rather abrupt.

Personally, I think that the usage of puncuation to represent thoughts of the character is rather lazy of the author.

...PasPas, you spelt "punctuation" wrong.

Ju
the blue ellie

See, this is what you're here for. to correct my puncuation and speling

nyakles