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Cheryl (no login) Posted May 4, 2005 12:06 PM
Point of view anyone?
"Ben drew closer to the alley, blissfully unaware that he was a prime
target for a robbery."
Whose thoughts are these? The authors. I'm sorry, I can't jump from Ben to the waif to the author.
I was enjoying this book but it's passages like this that stops me cold and go huh?
I hope the rest of the week is better. |
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