Dave and Lenny--
I want to thank you both so much for your input and critique of my site. You guys are great!
As a publicist, I write PR materials all the time and news release headlines are never a challenge for me. Guess it's different when you're writing for yourself, and this internet marketing is a whole new world for me.
Dave, I noticed on your site that you have a very short "blurb" of information leading to a sign up form for your mailing list... have you found this more effective than a long sales letter?
Anyway, I have already implemented several of your suggestions on my site (including a new headline) and am working on tweaking the rest to include all of your suggested changes.
Many, many thanks!
Joni
Joni Hamilton, VP Marketing - Ink Tree Ltd.
Phone: 403-295-3898
Email: jhamilton@inktreemarketing.com
www.inktreemarketing.com
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