Don't worry, your grammar and personality are pretty good (so far, at least). What we're really looking for in an introduction is something that tells us about you. Likes, dislikes, who looks the best nude, stuff like that. We don't need any more avatars at the moment, so keep your avatar profile out for now, 'kay? Also, if you haven't already, for the love of Man and God, PLEASE read the style guide and other documents on the site. Thanks.