I don't go to fanfic.net,but I'm pretty sure that you should avoid some fics wrote by the nick of Alienbird. Maybe that's the one of Alryssa.
Don't take it personnal, sometimes mature ladies just goes trough what is called periods. Some has more of them that could punctuate telegraphs from another era from the look of it! ^_^
I haven't readed any of it... But if something is there then, it is! Sometimes peoples says speaks of something in good or in bad, as long as you speak of it! (Some french expression that does loose in translation. But explain well that if you got someone's attention and it was worth enough to comment, then you scored!)
Well I shouldn't speak, I'm binded out of the fanfic circuit because I'm a professional. (One other reason I can't go on the Net and use MFE pictures for a starter to build up a site!)