| God Vs The Devil--Self Written Verse-- PeepMarch 24 2004 at 8:40 AM No score for this post | Soldier of KaOtIc ReCordz (no login) |
| Yo my names Soldier a.k.a Ben, i'ma a 16 y/o white rapper, i'm currently sgned to KaOtIc ReCordz trying to persue this, this is some of my latest work tell me what ya'll think about it...
"GOD vs THE DEVIL"
(Introduction)
As time dawns leading unto tha
apocalyptic rapture, tha two most potent forces
battle to reign over tha human race...a fatal match
of two immortals, tha Almighty God, and his arch
enemy, Lucifer....
(God)
I created this universe, responsible for your existince
I create storms just to prove my emminence
You're just a menace,a nuisance,a disturbance to my people
You're the one that introduced the first junkie to a hypodermic needle
Tought my people to destroy their lives,said it was "cool" to be feeble
(the DEVIL)
but your quick to forget it was you who created evil
sent me to unknown depths and allowed me to deceive your people
you gave them free will, so now I'm givin them thrills
Im not too blame, you created their minds so desperate to kill
instillin words of hate in tha written wordz your usin to educate
an eye for an eye, how can you say your people can rely
on this hypocritcal junk that consists
scripts of herecy, leavin your peoples demise infinite
(GOD)
All of my descendants were once innocent
You were the one in the Garden of Eden that made em act diff-erent
Lied to em and tempted em,you're the one to blame
for every soul that rests eternally with you forever burnin in flames
you play games with the ones i've tought,and make em decide
whether it'll be good or evil that they want to ride with by their side
(the DEVIL)
put an end to your false cries
it was you who let your own son be crucified
brought Dr. Kavorkian into this world, and allowed him to assist in suicides
tha innocent people of the world wonder why?
why would a God so good allow his children to die?
you and I both know the answer to this question
and not to mention, the sole route to Heaven is actually misinterpreted by tha Brethren
how can u expect them to live with only their hope
followin' tha words of tha note, and these laws that you wrote
full of interpretations, so I'm providin assistance
teachin' them the true meaning of their existance
to follow me, tha true righteous Angel
you left me with no chance, so now I'm takin theirs from tha Holy Table
(GOD)
I made you,but with good intentions
My right hand man,meant to be my righteous assistant
But you changed and went your own way
And you bring more innocent souls that way every single day
Every soul I ever created had a holy purpose
They were never meant to become worthless
They possess free will and you're using that against me
I would get rid of you and all this evil,but then i'd have no enemies
(the DEVIL)
and so I leave your "righteous" heart with endless casualties
you allow me to survive, punishin innocent lives in a sadistic catastrophe
you created me, the root of all deception
I am in your image God, check your reflection
my goal is to save lives from dealin with your dejection
providin a redirection, for tha unfaithful
Tha reincarnation of Cain, preyin' on the lost souls like they was Abel
wrongly labelled, as unholy, it was you who enthroned me
tha leader of darkness, and now it is I that will gather tha souls from every dead carcass
My intentions are harmless, it is you with a mind so heartless to start this
To Be Continued.....
Soldier of KaOtIc ReCordz
Pure Adrenalin
Tell me what you think my e-mail is:
insideyourmind@neovampire.com
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| | Author | Reply | Chris Ceaser (no login) | Re: God Vs The Devil--Self Written Verse-- PeepNo score for this post | March 28 2004, 12:04 AM |
That's truly something to think about. I wanna hear the tone of the verses.
Chris Ceaser
P.S. VICTORY ALWAYS COMES OUT ON TOP!! AND CHRIST IS VICTORY! |
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| ythpstr (no login) | Re: God Vs The Devil--Self Written Verse-- PeepNo score for this post | March 28 2004, 10:04 AM |
very very good when you get it down on a trak let us know we would love to hear it and maybe even possibly have you out depending on how you sound
if you got anything on cd send it our way
5399 west richey rd.
houston, tx 77066 |
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| Ben a.k.a Soldier (no login) | HeyNo score for this post | March 28 2004, 4:48 PM |
I'll send my Album to you guys. Theres only 8 tracks on it, but you should like them. I'm currently working on this one now...Thanks for checking it out..
Ben a.k.a SOldier | |
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