Miss Primly was waiting for Jane at the railway station. A slim, elegant woman of indeterminate age, she had arrived in a green 1957 Morris Oxford. Jane was impressed.

During the short drive to Primly Hall where the school was held, Miss Primly explained to Jane that before she could begin formal lessons she would have to take a viva-voce examination and would be punished if her answers were incorrect.

Twenty minutes later Jane was in the bathroom at Primly Hall changing into her full school uniform. She then knocked on the door of Miss Primly’s study and was ushered in.

“Your tie is not straight, Robson,” said Miss Primly. “Bend over! Right over! Touch your toes, girl!”

Jane felt her skirt being slowly lifted to her waist and then SMACK! Miss Primly’s hand came down on Jane’s navy-blue knickered bottom.

Copyright Dot 2003

To be continued (if members want)

Copyright?!!! Whatever makes you think anyone would want to plagaiarise fifth-rate derivative tripe?

Like Ron, I am a great admirer of the ‘Derivative Tripe’ school of writing. I particularly enjoyed the long slow build up to the orgiastic conclusion.

I am so pleased to receive your messages of appreciation. Here is Part 3.


Jane did badly in the viva examination that followed. She quivered with excitement when Miss Primly announced that for the five out of ten answers that were incorrect, Jane would receive five whacks with the slipper on her knickers, while bending over Miss Primly’s desk.

You are not to cry out, Robson, and you must keep your legs together throughout the punishment,” said Miss Primly. “Failure to obey these instructions will earn you extra strokes.”

Jane lifted her skirt and lay across the desk. She was surprised at how much the slipper hurt. She had always imagined a slippering to be a very mild punishment suited to naughty children in primary school, but Miss Primly delivered the whacks with such force that it was difficult to remain in position and to keep silent.

When the punishment was over Miss Primly pulled Jane’s knickers down to her ankles and proceeded to sooth her stinging bottom with some cold cream.

Jane felt ecstatically happy.

Copyright Dot 2003

To be continued (if members want)

Your story is really super, Dot. I detect an influence of Jeffrey Archer, one of my favourite authors, in your writing.

Ignore the knockers and

Keep posting!

Dot certainly knows how to keep the tension mounting. People all over Birmingham are wondering, “How does she do it?”

The question they should be asking is, “Why?”

I can exclusively inform all members that when this major work of fiction is finally complete it is to receive approving notices from the internationally disrespected critic Fran Fromme-Wembley.

Part 1 of Dot's story is going down well on Steff's lesbianating site.

A recent response from 'SARA' (whose email address suggests no connection with our own esteemed contributor) reads "Yes Please continue the story. It's got me soaked so far".

I'm with SARA on this one. The tears of laughter ran down my cheeks too!