[]I'm not sure if any of these are good. I'm tryin' though. If anyone out there has any helpful critisizim or any ideas, please hit me up. Piaythisgame@aol.com, if you didn't know.[] VòóDoo

Dying to Live
Living to Die
Nobody really cares
Nobody asks why
When do we know
which way the road turns
and what way we should go
when the world begins to burn
Behind the scenes
Within your dreams
I see the light
It isn’t so bad
But no one said that it was right

When will the torement end
Will my life ever begin
And every now and then
We commit another sin
Just to know
That nobody’s really dead yet
And so
We just got to let go
Our lives need to play out
But just don’t let your flame go out
Why is it so
I won’t let go
Until I know
The reason why
We live to die
I yern to live
Among the stars
And I don’t have a clue why
I do

Don’t be disheartened
We miss our dearly departed
We show our sorrow through tears
These tears don’t ebb with years
Blinded by hatred
Blinded by pain
This is horrid, I hate it
But that hate wont make it
Stop
Till your body drops
To the ground

Another casualty of callous
Defeated by the malice
Of the world, of this earth
For all that it’s worth
Something better exists
But you gotta be worthy, or you will miss
Your chance to advance
From the land of the wicked
To the land of the holy
That is my goal
Salvation for my soul.
So let’s go.

The flows are good. The only thing that I can see that you might want to change, is that the lines are pretty small, lacking words and such. Other than that, it was good.

The is Fla†liner, if you didn't figure out.

I found another rapper with the same name that I used to have, so I just found a new and better one.

Ma|icious.
The wicked shit for life.