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Watching you goNovember 22 2002 at 4:26 PM No score for this post | Finn |
| Footsteps,
across the tiles,
hinges,
whining
sunlight slants
through and open
doorway
your silhouette
on the floor
the door slams
you are gone
from the floor
from the door
Better to
watch my feet,
than watch
you go... |
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Dead Poet
| I see beauty in your choice of words...No score for this post | November 22 2002, 7:09 PM |
mmm, so soothing and comforting. Crafty manipulation of words- simply beautiful!. Just like a wonder drug for my craving brain. This is the real stuff..more of it, bara. |
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Mangi-nambis
| Re: Watching you goNo score for this post | November 23 2002, 12:03 PM |
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dead poet
| Re: wes da rest?!No score for this post | November 24 2002, 6:54 PM |
sssss....stap isi...guy is still "brewing" them!
da dead! |
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