How do I tell a mysterious girl to give me a go?
Dead poet & Island mangi need your help:
Here's what I wrote:
MYSTERIOUS GIRL
Mysterious girl, heaven's precious pearl where are you?
You hide, you seek you hide & seek
Sunshine, stop hiding name it's a killing game
Talk to me, write to me, chat with me,
Ever wondered a small hope may cause the birth of love
Right or wrong, intelligent or stupid tell me all
I'll be right here waiting for you
Only you can establish this
Understanding and I will surrender all I am
So you can be sure someone is able and willing
Girl, is it too much of a ask?
I'm just a simple man trying to make a start
Red sweet rose nothing is sweeter than your words
Love may be an illusion but we can make it real
Simple man
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hope...the birth of love...sweet words..
Buddy, this is classic.
I think of her as the soul-mate I have yet to meet.
Love (or the hunger for it) inspires big-time.
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She weaves in and out
A vivid tapestry in my subconscious
Loving me exquisite and exotic
We are in a place outa here
Mystical and enchanted
Butterfliesand bubbles,
flowers, crystal pools, fountains
Breathing in the musique
Yet I am left with this sensation
The wonder forever nags
The elusive I can't figure
Is it a mental illusion
Or a mirage in a dream
Or am I just going stark loony
I sometimes spot her
In a crowd somewhere
And then she's no longer there
She haunts me when I'm lonely
But she entices my hopes
And leaves me craving
Is she the soul-mate
Or just mental debri
From a past life….
Questions without answers
I'm due for a revelation
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