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Mysterious Girl

May 24 2003 at 9:30 AM
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How do I tell a mysterious girl to give me a go?
Dead poet & Island mangi need your help:
Here's what I wrote:

MYSTERIOUS GIRL

Mysterious girl, heaven's precious pearl where are you?
You hide, you seek you hide & seek
Sunshine, stop hiding name it's a killing game
Talk to me, write to me, chat with me,
Ever wondered a small hope may cause the birth of love
Right or wrong, intelligent or stupid tell me all
I'll be right here waiting for you
Only you can establish this
Understanding and I will surrender all I am
So you can be sure someone is able and willing

Girl, is it too much of a ask?
I'm just a simple man trying to make a start
Red sweet rose nothing is sweeter than your words
Love may be an illusion but we can make it real

Simple man

 
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dead poet

For Simple Man

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May 24 2003, 10:54 AM 

Check your e-box!! Good Luck.


 
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Mangi-nambis

Re: Mysterious Girl

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May 26 2003, 1:49 PM 

hope...the birth of love...sweet words..
Buddy, this is classic.
I think of her as the soul-mate I have yet to meet.
Love (or the hunger for it) inspires big-time.

 
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Mangi-nambis

My Version

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May 27 2003, 9:11 AM 

Loony Tunes.

She weaves in and out
A vivid tapestry in my subconscious
Loving me exquisite and exotic
We are in a place outa here
Mystical and enchanted
Butterfliesand bubbles,
flowers, crystal pools, fountains
Breathing in the musique

Yet I am left with this sensation
The wonder forever nags
The elusive I can't figure
Is it a mental illusion
Or a mirage in a dream
Or am I just going stark loony

I sometimes spot her
In a crowd somewhere
And then she's no longer there
She haunts me when I'm lonely
But she entices my hopes
And leaves me craving
Is she the soul-mate
Or just mental debri
From a past life….
Questions without answers
I'm due for a revelation

 
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dead poet

Re: My Version

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May 27 2003, 9:29 AM 

he he he ... bara, yu kam goooooood yah!


 
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tinpis

Re: Re: My Version

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May 27 2003, 11:31 AM 

Wow !...like her, this is Outa here !!

 
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tinpis

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May 27 2003, 11:35 AM 

Wow !..like her, this is outa here !

 
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Ladyluck

Elusive

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July 16 2003, 1:28 PM 

Mama mia,

I love your language.
This is true poetry.

cheers!

 
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