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Reminscing

June 16 2005 at 3:20 PM
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Night Star 

Return to sender,
unclaimed love letters,
forgotten addresseses,
scattered on forgotten lover's lane,

dancing feet that have no rythm,
stumble down memory lane,
to that once upon-a-time place,
when skies were a brighter blue
and life was brand new,

youthful hearts,
reach out beyond,
entwined they must,
searching clear skies,
for a loved one
on the run,
playing hard to get,

Our lives words created in time,
will loose their meaning,
and die forgotten,
A fading whisper
in the still of the night,

This hands now wrinkle,
gather around a bottle,
fine wine after I've dined,
staring out to sea,
out to the darkness,
that big mirror reflecting the heavens,
I subtract the years,
through tear filled eyes,
Reminscing...


 
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Night Star

Revised~corrections

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June 16 2005, 3:26 PM 

(t'was written in haste olsem na planti mistake nambaut)
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Reminiscing

Return to sender,
unclaimed love letters,
forgotten addresseses,
scattered on forgotten lover's lane,

dancing feet that have no rythm,
stumble down memory lane,
to that once upon-a-time place,
when skies were a brighter blue
and life was brand new,

youthful hearts,
reach out beyond,
entwine they must,
searching clear skies,
for a loved one
on the run,
playing hard to get,

Our lives like words
created in time,
will loose their meaning,
and die forgotten,
A fading whisper
in the still of the night,

This hands now wrinkle,
gather around a whiskey bottle,
fine wine after I've dined,
staring out to sea,
that big mirror reflecting the heavens,
I subtract the years,
through tear filled eyes,
dusting hearts tables,
to recall adventures through youthful eyes,

Reminiscing...



 
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Mstey

Re: Revised~corrections

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June 16 2005, 3:46 PM 

ooooohhhhh..... nightstar...... u tsol!
Nice one! I can imagine myself turning the pages of my scrapbook..... lol.. years later with wrinkled hands..... huh!

 
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