| ReminscingJune 16 2005 at 3:20 PM No score for this post | Night Star |
| Return to sender,
unclaimed love letters,
forgotten addresseses,
scattered on forgotten lover's lane,
dancing feet that have no rythm,
stumble down memory lane,
to that once upon-a-time place,
when skies were a brighter blue
and life was brand new,
youthful hearts,
reach out beyond,
entwined they must,
searching clear skies,
for a loved one
on the run,
playing hard to get,
Our lives words created in time,
will loose their meaning,
and die forgotten,
A fading whisper
in the still of the night,
This hands now wrinkle,
gather around a bottle,
fine wine after I've dined,
staring out to sea,
out to the darkness,
that big mirror reflecting the heavens,
I subtract the years,
through tear filled eyes,
Reminscing...
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| | Author | Reply | Night Star
| Revised~correctionsNo score for this post | June 16 2005, 3:26 PM |
(t'was written in haste olsem na planti mistake nambaut)
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Reminiscing
Return to sender,
unclaimed love letters,
forgotten addresseses,
scattered on forgotten lover's lane,
dancing feet that have no rythm,
stumble down memory lane,
to that once upon-a-time place,
when skies were a brighter blue
and life was brand new,
youthful hearts,
reach out beyond,
entwine they must,
searching clear skies,
for a loved one
on the run,
playing hard to get,
Our lives like words
created in time,
will loose their meaning,
and die forgotten,
A fading whisper
in the still of the night,
This hands now wrinkle,
gather around a whiskey bottle,
fine wine after I've dined,
staring out to sea,
that big mirror reflecting the heavens,
I subtract the years,
through tear filled eyes,
dusting hearts tables,
to recall adventures through youthful eyes,
Reminiscing...
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| Mstey
| Re: Revised~correctionsNo score for this post | June 16 2005, 3:46 PM |
ooooohhhhh..... nightstar...... u tsol!
Nice one! I can imagine myself turning the pages of my scrapbook..... lol.. years later with wrinkled hands..... huh! |
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