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Woman in da Red Dress!March 21 2006 at 2:29 PM No score for this post | ...mE |
| I can see the curve of yur neck
I'm imagining mE running my tongue on it
Holding yur body so close to mE
Never wanting to separate
I move my head down a little further
I'm meet with two mountains of bliss
I kiss each mount with delight
Each apex stands in perfect attention
Both rising to meet each kiss
Each peak fights to get more kisses
I move my head lower...but da forces won't allow meet
Da all foreseen eyes beg me to stay there
Wielding my mouth never to leave
Alas...did da forces allow me to depart
Directing me to a path without an end
Finding myself in a crater
There a light shines out of da darkness
Of bright velvet colour
Glowing...red....hot..red...surrounded by blackness
I found da river of LOVE
A place streaming of Love Joy
Flowing of Milk and Honey
I took a sap from the river
It felt so warm, so pure and so good
Its stream increase in magnitude
And suddenly, I felt a tremor
Da whole earth quakes around me
Da mountains rock forth
Da forces pushed me deeper
As a volcano erupts within
Streaming more of milk and honey
And sudently as it erupted, it ceases
As da tremor subsided
Then I woke Up!
…mE
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Shy girl
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | March 21 2006, 2:40 PM |
very intense.....
Shy girl |
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...mE
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | March 23 2006, 8:36 AM |
Shy Gurl
The mind is a powerful mechanism that can be used in many ways.....mostly it's used in imagination and creativity.
...mE |
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Shy Girl
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | March 23 2006, 11:59 AM |
Then let me get to know your mind. How did you come up with such a piece? |
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mud cake
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | March 24 2006, 1:55 PM |
I'm impressed mE... what kind of a woman would inspire your creative juices to flow like that?.... who ever she is she's one lucky girl. |
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Shy Girl
| wowNo score for this post | March 27 2006, 8:29 AM |
mE.....I couldn't help but read it again this morning....are there more pieces like this that you may have already written or are there more to come? I love the flow of everything.
I am looking forward to more......
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Anonymous
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | March 25 2006, 12:57 AM |
....mE, did the B.R.S with Ch. A. inspired you ? I know the lady in your dream LOL - with off shoulder red dress. LMAO. She is beautiful though. |
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Anonymous
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | March 27 2006, 6:44 PM |
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Anonymous
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | March 28 2006, 1:08 PM |
mE - You got some pretty wild imagination! lol |
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Anonymous
| mE do you want to meet her?No score for this post | March 28 2006, 1:37 PM |
Let me know and I will introduce you to her. Fair dincum she real, trust me. |
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Anonymous
| Re: mE do you want to meet her?No score for this post | March 28 2006, 1:41 PM |
yeah....in the form of the devil.....
hehe |
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Anonymous
| Re: mE do you want to meet her?No score for this post | March 29 2006, 4:10 AM |
hahaha.... Plis. I like it. But how wild. lol. DREAM on mE |
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...mE
| Re: mE do you want to meet her?No score for this post | April 3 2006, 3:11 PM |
I have met her and yes....... fair dincum she is...
and I never tort such woman would exist not just for anyone but for mE....
Cheers!
...mE |
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7milebeach
| Re: mE do you want to meet her?No score for this post | April 4 2006, 12:50 PM |
LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @..mE are you going to introduce her to us? Am I invited to the wedding?
 7mile |
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...mE
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | April 4 2006, 2:30 PM |
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Anonymous
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | April 4 2006, 3:34 PM |
Thanks for sharing her with us...now we all can share the feeling with you mE..
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Anonymous
| Re: Woman in da Red Dress!No score for this post | April 4 2006, 4:45 PM |
oi, ol sae tok em kam lo mun...na ino sae pekepek!
Soulmate o wanem?
M-n |
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