Darkness Calls

...repost of an old piece (Jungle's Tears)....revised...
could some young rapper improve on this and color it up with some some background beat?

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He’s crude
the young dude
Half nude
from mountains with woods
into a seedy squalid neighborhood

He tries to be good
And even if he could
He’s greatly misunderstood

where the young are rude
The girls have attitude
the old often in a bad mood
Language is lewd
where feuds over food
families become unglued
strangers are harangued
humility gets boo’d…..
charity gets subdued
but saddest of all...
being free 'tambu’d

the jungle weeps
green tears
as consciences sleeps
for a confused young warrior
And crystal streams beckon
To return and ….be reborn.......
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...Mangi-nambis...calling from the South Seas...