Tingting go bek
crazy days, crazy times
when you shared my bed.
Tingting go pas
nau mi sindaun
wishing I could feel your touch.
Tingting mas faul
cuz I'm sitting here and
thoughts of you keep getting loud.
Tingting giamanim mi
tokim mi olsem
without you I can't be me.

Tingting go bek
those where the days, yu klia
was it Love we felt?
Tingting go pas
two different people now
walking diff'rent paths.
Tingting kam strong
will I ever get over you
even if it feels so wrong?
Tingting giamanim mi
tokim mi olsem
without you....
I can't be me.

Tingting giamanim u or u giamanim tingting? lol
Nice piece though. Hope all goes well for you dear.

Oi Solid,

I like yor stuff...original...they are breaths of fresh air...

Keep them flowing...(yu gat stail ya!)

M-n

PS: Er...tingting bai giamanim yumi tsol noken larim em kilim yumi...but yumi ken salim em...hehe...

Thanks for the vote of approval M-n, Wisp and everybody else who's read my stuff.
Much appreciate ur comments and encouragememt.
I'll be dropping more of my verses soon.

P.S: tingting giamanim mi
tasol ino kilim mi
tingting tokim mi olsem
sampla paia
wok lo lait yet stap....
:P

Peace.