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rhyme a thought

May 2 2011 at 1:27 AM
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If I could rhyme this dream
With a beat, a certain rhythm
Sort of like the angels hymn
Full of the hidden minum

And in this dream I rhyme
Theres no space nor time
Only a place sublime
Filled with seraphim and cherubim

And spas and fountains
Multicolored bubbles and rainbows
Butterflies and mushrooms.
In a garden of eden

And if I could rhyme this dream
With a beat, a certain funky rhythm
By the living stream
Expressing decent freedom......
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...Manguini-nambis...calling from the South Seas...


 
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Re: rhyme a thought

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June 4 2011, 4:27 PM 

correction!

That last word last line first verse:

word em "minim" for musical half notes, na ino "minum'.

u and i faul ken..hehe

sometimes i couldn't be bothered but then again...

sorry tru

M-n

 
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