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My Plea

May 11 2011 at 8:57 PM
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Scardy Cat 


MY PLEA
The silence that encompasses us
Is drowning and choking all that was said to be
Our love adrift in emptiness
As if it was never meant to be
If only I could hear a pin drop
If only silence could speak
Maybe I could be assured
Our love is still there to share

The silence that encompasses us
Has become deafening as can be
Golden as it may be; a dark cloud looms over
So speak to me baby, I beg
Before my heart goes astray
The beckoning of a distant drum
Is sounding ever closer
Let not fate steal you from me
Speak to me my love, I dare

 
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Bud

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May 12 2011, 2:42 PM 

ahhhh....the walls of silence! Sucks doesnt it. Better to move on and find someone who can communicate and reciprocate with you! you will be happier for it believe me.

 
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Tasha

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May 12 2011, 2:54 PM 

Maybe the message is there, staring @ U in the face ... through the "silence in the Voice", but you're too busy searching for the "Voice in the silence".

 
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Ru

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May 12 2011, 8:51 PM 

The cold silent treatment is also known as "Passive/Agressive".....you will only exhaust yourself emotionally and mentally. Like Bud says.....move on :]

I like your poem not the predicament :] Yuggarr mahdi wans!

 
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Scardy Cat

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May 16 2011, 10:55 AM 

Thanks RU!....I'll sAY yeeee...its more the poem, not the predicament!...Mi paenim wok tasol na mi write happy.gif

 
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Beibi Rokrok

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May 16 2011, 5:38 PM 

OMG SC
Silence Speaks !
Buzz Off, Distance Drums
Piss Off, Fate !

happy.gif

 
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luvrgurl

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May 19 2011, 6:31 PM 

I loved the poem... =D

 
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dawg

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May 21 2011, 1:14 AM 

dude ! u should be writing millions of romantic/poetic/erotic books seriously ! hehe !

 
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BR

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May 24 2011, 9:06 AM 

hey dawg, you sure Scardie's a Tom ? happy.gif

 
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Scardy Cat

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May 24 2011, 4:10 PM 

Duddette here @ Dawg....thanks! I'll think about your proposition...otherwise too busy at mom....

need alot of inspiration to write though..... funny enough, I get them from silly things like Toads!! happy.gif

 
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Scardy Cat

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May 24 2011, 4:34 PM 

Dudette here @ Dawg! Thank you so much...I'll have a think about your proposition.....otherwise lil things like toads inspire me to write...lol...mi tokpilae! thnks again! happy.gifhappy.gif

 
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