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June 8 2011 at 3:59 AM
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Ah! this tropical style
On my very own isle
Exotistic south seas
Living ecstatic fantaseas
Dreaming heavenly bliss
Under palm trees silvery
Dancing gently...isisi
Softly whistling seabreeze
The halfmoon glistens,
upon the emerald lagoon
whilst I crane to listen
the soundtrack a tropical tune
the notorous 'kulele laughs
distant from an old paps
From a palm hut by the seashore...

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~~~Manguini-nambis~~~calling from the South Seas~~~


 
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June 10 2011, 1:08 PM 

Mn nais wan..u missing a woman !:

Holding my friend's hand..
Far,faraway from wud-be husband..
On our very own exotic Island..
Liberating music from natures band..
Forbidden one-night stand on the sand
How very grand !
Ssssh..Fantasy RULES!, please UNDERSTAND !

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June 14 2011, 4:57 PM 

Eloped,
To that exotic island
Just you and me on the sand
Listening to the call of the vast blue
The rustling wind, the cawing seagulls
Entwined, smothering kisses, caressing, holding hands,
Awaiting the silvery glistening moonlight
Dreading the dawn of reality
The ship is here
Fate





hahahahaha...all the dreaming...looks like someone has started something contagious here...lol!

 
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June 15 2011, 9:46 AM 

HUH! Poem meant to be in a diamond shape!

 
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June 21 2011, 10:07 PM 

Just beautiful,most of us,dream of an eden of our own...a place where we can just get lost and forget everything...but then,reality pops up!

 
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