<the screen suddenly goes white. as the glare fades, a battered starship slides past the camera.>
VO: Where are we going?
<an antique bronze-colored revolver fires, the only thing not blurry in a room covered with smoke.>
VO: Why did I do the things I did?
<a man in a black uniform, with only a small metallic patch on the collar as a symbol of rank. despite being slim and not really that physically imposing, the look in his eyes is hard enough to slice hull plating with. he wears a bronze-colored antique revolver in a hip holster.>
VO: Why didn't I just ... give up ...
<same man, in casual clothes, kneeling in a graveyard with blood on his hands, the revolver from the previous scenes is on the ground beside him.>
VO: ... back then.
<shift to outer space again, a battle between a battlecruiser and two lighter units. both the battlecruiser and on of the attackers seem to be using some sort of grav drive, while the remaining ship apparently mounts reaction drives. the battlecruiser is winning, barely ... or at least seems to be in better shape than the other two ships. scene shift.>
VO: Or then?
<flashes of faces. a blonde-haired woman, a young boy with sightless eyes, a dark haired girl with a distant expression on her face.>
VO: Is a human being's desire to live that strong? Who knows?
<the man, dressed in the black uniform again. standing before some sort of highly decorated officer, as it seems. the officer is talking, grinning and jovial. the man answers him, shruggin, and the officer's face goes from good natured humor to an offended scowl.>
VO: If anyone asks though, I can tell them something that's at least partly true.
<a banner, split in two parts - lower right and upper left. left side shows seven hangmen, black on a red background. the other is plain black.>
VO: I can tell them it was all ... for the money.
<black screen. white small letter in the center. slideshow.>
shining spiral
for the money
<zoom to the man's face, violet eyes behind a pair of round spectacles, looking straight at the camera>
Man: Is it really that bad a reason?
<screen goes black>
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For whatever reason this came to my mind, it got my mind _off_ Act V stuff and let me focus a bit on Act I again. I've dusted off my Company notes, revised most of them, decided some things about narration and such. The plot of the first part isn't going to be much aside from being a try at military sci-fi, and the main premises got swiped from Ground Control. At least in part.
-Griever
off to scribble
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Nothing wrong with a bit of military sci-fi, it's the way a few of my story arcs are going (although I have a few things plotted out to keep me close to the characters).
This looks like a good story you're setting up.
btw: as resident Honorverse expert could I pick your brains? I'm thinking of setting up a brief encounter between Drake and Honor (in Silesia between On Basilisk Station and For the Honor of the Queen). I'm not sure how this will pan into the general chronology though.
Act I is IIRC roughly the decade before the Manticore-Haven War broke out (the said war lasts for about 7 years in canon before the truce and Saint-Just's being shot - probably the events of Act III will affect this somewhat). Honor spent roughly a year in rehab after the events of FtHotQ and had been in command of the heavy cruiser Fearless for about two and a half years at the beginning of FtHotQ.
So would Drae and Honor meeting in Silesia around eight years into Act I make sense?
drakensis
"I believe that forgiving the enemy is God's function. Ours is simply to arrange the meeting." - General H Norman Schwarzkopf
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I'd planned on having In Enemy Hands and Honor's capture happen somewhere around the break of Act One and Act Two, and muck around with the timeline so that FtHotQ happens somewhere around the middle of Act One. I need to go back and check on Honorverse chronology to see how to make this work, exactly, because the only things I suck with worse than with names are dates. Example? I still think of 1995 as 'not that long ago'.
This is one of the reasons I'm so vague with timelines and timestamps in my writings.
I'm taking a major leap of faith and obliviousness here, and saying that somehow I need to compress the span of time between IEH and FtHotQ to five years (I'm pretty sure it was more than that in the books). Just so it fits in with a rough concept of a plot outline I'm running on teritiary brain buffers right now.
So if you could work it in a way in which the meeting happens three years earlier than you'd proposed I'd be most greatful.
Remember, I'm a hack. I take what I need, and don't really bother with the rest much ... even if that rest has a tendency of biting me in the behind later on. This also means that if you absolutely, positively _must_ have that meeting eight years into Act One, I'll probably be able to adapt.
-Griever
who is getting to writing up those segments for Catty, lest said co-author unleash the holy wrath of Chloe upon him.
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as far as I can determine the timeline for the canon runs...
Ms. Midshipman Harrington (1878)
On Basilisk Station (1900)
For the Honor of the Queen (1903)
A Short Victorious War (1905)
Field of Dishonor (1905)
Flag in Exile (1906-7)
Honor Among Enemies (1908)
In Enemy Hands (1910)
Echoes of Honor (1910-1912)
Ashes of Victory (1912-1913)
Obviously I've missed pretty much aeverything that isn't central to Honor herself and also War of Honor because by then I figure outside influence will ahve made some major changes in the Spiral version.
The Spiral Timeline could run as follows (using S01 as the beginning of Act I: Act I=S01-S10, Act II=S10-S13, Act III=S13-?)
On Basilisk Station (S03)
For the Honor of the Queen (S05)
A Short Victorious War (S07)
Field of Dishonor (S07)
Flag in Exile (S08)
Honor Among Enemies (S09)
In Enemy Hands (S10)
Echoes of Honor (S10-S12)
Ashes of Victory (S12-S13)
The meeting between Honor and Drake could therefore be incorporated earlier... in fact I think I can see a way to meld that with one of the earlier of my story ideas in around S04.
drakensis
"I believe that forgiving the enemy is God's function. Ours is simply to arrange the meeting." - General H Norman Schwarzkopf
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I happen to be reading Honor Among Enemies at the moment. It's been mentioned that Basilisk was 8 T-yrs prior, and one of the Greyson characters was thinking about how things have changed over the last 6 years because of Honor.
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thanks norgarth. that would tend to confirm my canon timeline's spacing (although I've realised I slipped back one year overall since OBS was in 1901 according to More than Honor's appendices
The main compaction of the storyline covers the period when Honor is on Grayson in semi-exile as a steadholder.
drakensis
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