ayo rebirth

you gotta, try and rhyme your words, i see maybe like 4 lines in each of your spits that you did that rhyme, none of your shit rhymes at all, and try and throw in some metaphores, and more wordplay, its the only way you will get respect on this board, plus, there are a couple ppl on this board that can rap about the streets, bcuz theyve been there, i have, so i know what its like, any way, just some adive, no hattin, yet, but piss me off and your done.