Bow Down

(Verse 1)

This rap game has become my second home/
Climbing for the top spot, A place on the throne/
Im crowned battle king for the drop's from my dome/
Iv been honing my rhyming skill's, See how iv grown/
Hit emcee's like a cyclone, Im no longer an unknown/
My metaphor's an punchline's keep me in the zone/
On my left hand, Third finger a ring made of chrome/
Yeah that's right! JD's married to the microphone/
Rapping is my game, Rhyming is my speech/
Young emcee's in the game learn, While i teach/
But don't get it twisted JD doesn't fuckin preach/
The ladder to success is well within my reach/
Il climb it to the top of this rap genre sky scraper/
Iv wrote so much were low on trees for paper/
So not only am i taking all of your oxygen/
But my rhyme's are raping mother nature/

(Chorus)

So far so good like rugby iv touched down/
But im still pushing an fighting for that crown/
Till i die my rhymes il keep putting them around/
Leaving emcee's stunned from Uk to cape town/
To this rap game i will alway's bow down/

(Verse 2)

They say my rhythm an rhyme's are so well crafted/
I spent time perfecting these skills an then redrafted/
Emcee's won't approach me without years of practice/
When i spit, My rap's sting them like a cactus/
Some have said my rhyme's are a monstrosity/
Battle me!! Il take your cash like playing monopoly/
Trust me, You've more chance of winning the lottery/
The rap game, There is alot of animosity and static/
Rap fanatic, Il take your breath away like an asthmatic/
Multiple rhyme's i fire them off like a semi automatic/
Problematic? maybe, you could say it's my obsession/
Filled with alot of aggression it leave's an impression/
But that's one of the reason's i chose this profession/
This rap genre ain't easy ask any emcee in the game/
The difference is this emcee won't be phased by fame/
But like so many other's i will never become tame/

(Chorus)

So far so good like rugby iv touched down/
But im still pushing an fighting for that crown/
Till i die my rhymes il keep putting them around/
Leaving emcee's crying from the Uk to cape town/
To this rap game i will alway's bow down/


Copyright © JD 2008-2020

that u toot your horn a bit much...try a topical piece instead

Its my horn il toot it all i like thank you..

But that's one of the reason's i chose this profession/
This rap genre ain't easy ask any emcee in the game/
The difference is this emcee won't be phased by fame/
But like so many other's i will never become tame/

^i like this part because u are speaking your mind and/or goals, letting us know a little more about the REAL u

because the main issue with this piece is it doesnt seem completely believable
for example, besides the fact that it seems basic is not that important depending on your age

youre prolly still young but...

u say youre 'no longer an unknown' and youre 'teaching the younger' rappers...but as far as Net54 knows, youre just making that up...u can find me all over the top sites on Net54, giving any advice im seen as being fit to give...so it's verified nah mean...but i dont see u anywhere except here and occasionally at Freaks...and u might cypher in the streets or whatever, thas cool but it's pointless bringin that up on the net...only things u can verify is what netcees will believe...and can u really blame them?

A grown up! I apologies for the childish comment's from my part! It become's the "norm" after spending time dealing with the like's of maddrapper and omega, Answer to your comment, I like to keep away from spittin fiction as much as possible, "Bow Down" is all for real.. but i do get were your coming from,>> "...but i dont see u anywhere except here and occasionally at Freaks...and u might cypher in the streets or whatever, thas cool but it's pointless bringin that up on the net...only things u can verify is what netcees will believe...and can u really blame them?" << Very True! they don't know me, So the like's of "Bow Down" doesn't make sense to them an is hard belive.... Think il stick to were im well known then.


JD

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