Okay for those of you really good poets... I have to write an ode this weekend... I chose to write it about my bed... I am giong to be redoing it untill i think its good if anyone is willing to help me with it or whatever on saturday I would be very thankful!!!!!!!! I am not asking you to write it for me, but do what we always do... say if it sucks of not and say what could make it better! I would love the help!!!!!!! Thanks!

Bri

ok, i'll take a look!

ode to my bed
My lovely bed
You're soft
and big
colorful
and insperational

You're there through the night
So peaceful
And unchanging
you always soothe
and relax my tired eyes

A place of rest
a place to dream
a place to relax
A place to sleep
An excape from reality

Thanks soooo much I havent put in any grammar s**t, but Ill work on that later... I just need to know if the poem is any good and what I can change.

hey,
not bad..not mad..just keep dreaming you'll get there..if you ever get there.
Good luck!!