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MAYBE....

May 17 2005 at 12:52 PM
Sweet Surrender 

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Maybe,Maybe…!
A dream woman’s cherished assertion
Spoken with seeming prudence and caution at dusk …
But probably concealing a nervous willingness to make the admission
Meanwhile we will continue to dream many more dreams and ask…
For how much longer can we prolong the twilight confusion ?

Maybe,Maybe…!
A mermaids perplexing expression..
Perhaps a gentle premonition of those dreaded underwater no-go zones ?
Possibly the ocean's stifled remark pertaining to an unreachable horizon ?
Declared initially by a thousand waves in roaring tones
Now re-echoed by the gull and the maid in subdued unison !

Maybe,Maybe…!
A song-bird's mystifying utterance..
A muffled statement of hope from the Isles of love..
Perhaps the rainforest's mantra of measured assurance..
Heralded and sung from high up in the treetops above
Repeated a million times more in this heart, seeking another chance !



SS
16 May 2005

 
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Re: MAYBE....

May 23 2005, 10:05 AM 

WOW!!!...and how'd i miss it?...

Great Work!...keep it flowing...

M-n

 
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SS

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May 24 2005, 11:05 AM 

Thanks M-n.
re: keeping them flowing, em bai hard ya !....been praying like mad for inspiration from that elusive Songbird.... tasol ol pisin tu ya palai nambaut nambaut...na tingting tu kalap kalap wantaim !..

thanks again for the encouragement..

SS

 
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MM

Re: MAYBE....

May 24 2005, 11:15 AM 

SS - pisin ya mas wanpla bighet bret stret......yu shud lockim em na taitim lek na wings wantem rop so em no nap palai igo kam. Sapos yu laik helovin just toksave tasol, mi bai kam holholim em na you wokim save long em..(jokes).


 
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Re: MAYBE....

May 24 2005, 6:37 PM 

oi, tupela inap mi kamap dispela pisin ......o?

.....lol...

 
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SS

Re: MAYBE....

May 25 2005, 10:23 AM 

LMAO...mosong, mm tok "tail krass" blo u sotpla tumas olsem na disla bai hard yet ya !

 
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mosong

Re: MAYBE....

May 26 2005, 2:46 PM 

olaman.........mi wok long grow-o-wim sitap ya.....lol

 
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