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Life goes on

December 21 2005 at 8:07 AM
Speakn my thots. 

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This flame
Dances recklessly within
Like untamed masalai in the wild
Refusing sweet surrender to reality
But potent to the days fantasy
Where are you my forbidden mystic love
Do you still feel the warmth this flame emits STILL
Have you turned your face away
Not to see the flicker and sparkle this flame holds STILL
I look out to the horizons of the Solomon sea
And I realized
I may have been a little too late
There before me
A flame burns on an away island

Today you say
Tok idai, life goes on
Today I say
I understand life must go on.

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speaking my thots


 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

December 21 2005, 9:40 AM 

..o shiat, bloody well written !!...lewa breaking tots...Tok i Dai..indeed !

 
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Fantasy

Re: Life goes on

December 21 2005, 9:49 AM 

WOW!! Beautiful piece! We're heading into a new year... I hope u can do something about that flame.
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

December 29 2005, 12:11 PM 

For that dancing Flame

God's love for you is so divine
And never ending ....
Our friendships also just fine
And never bending...
This reckless dudes lust however is just mine
And not worth the heart-rending...

 
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Life is Good

Re: Life goes on

January 6 2006, 11:48 AM 

I am thankful
That despite being awful
there is someone wondeful
who makes my day beautiful
hence I say with mouthful
Life is good.

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

January 10 2006, 11:37 PM 

Life is Good..
Not such a bore
Alls now understood
whys are no more
Party party mood..
Better times in store
Nevermind the dude
Seen his kind before!

 
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Annon

Re: Life goes on

May 21 2006, 12:53 PM 

time beckons for more
mind dares to explore
new horizons to adore
beyond limits of before
whatevers lareva to restore
Cool-sense to further ignore?
O shiat, dis lewas rotten to the core!

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

May 22 2006, 9:30 AM 

while dis lewa aches for more.

 
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motec

Re: Life goes on

May 24 2006, 4:37 PM 

Life goes on
Its been long..
Surely, this is a long life...
lol..maoro..

 
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NS

Re: Life goes on

May 24 2006, 5:19 PM 

moving on
pacing strides
waiting the "knowing"
to shed light on dark paths
the way is vague
allseems lost
going nowhere

'cept this I know
the path gets clearer
when a step is taken

move on...

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

May 24 2006, 6:08 PM 

Life goes on
But how do I
Leave the aches behind?
How do I erase the memory
Of your voice?
How do I block out the sound
Of your laughter?

Time!
I suppose
Is all I need.

 
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motec

Re: Life goes on

May 25 2006, 8:45 AM 

Nope its not time
You need ME....lol.

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

May 29 2006, 4:19 AM 

and so life goes on...
the usual, the tag-along !

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

May 29 2006, 9:33 AM 

hahahahahahahaha !
good one.

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

November 22 2006, 3:53 PM 

Splendid!! 5 star poetry.

 
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speak'n my thots

10Q

November 23 2006, 4:27 PM 

oh thanks !

 
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Anonymous

J ice

November 24 2006, 11:54 AM 

Life Goes On
A brand new day
This new shoot beyond
So rumpy and gay
Did well to bond

Where is yesterday
The moons I count
But today the same
Laughter is not round
Haunting hatred and shame

Time once had font
I belive in May
It can not matter now
The second hand did fail
.......

Life goes on




 
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Anonymous

Need less moments

November 27 2006, 7:57 PM 


The needless moments
Glaring dubious eyes
Probing, distrusting
Lost for fitting comeback
Obsessed by frenzy spell
This would not have been
Listen !
Did you hear ?
That’s the sound of ‘tick tock’
Just a walk away
The second hand did fail

…but surely, Life goes on

 
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Anon

Re: Need less moments

November 9 2007, 9:19 AM 

Needful moments..
With you, with you
heartfelt sentiments...
luv you, luv you
Confused commitments
For you, for you
Tearful laments
Without you,without you
Frightful torments
Miss you, Miss you !




 
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Anonymous

Re: Need less moments

November 9 2007, 1:47 PM 

Needless heartfelt
Needless confused
Needless tearful
Needless moments.

 
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Anonymous

Re: Need less moments

November 10 2007, 11:49 AM 

whateva
is lareva
lets say die neva
life goes on 4eva
just this lewa..
lets not our poroship seva

 
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Anonymous

Re: Need less moments

November 10 2007, 2:11 PM 

lareva
poroship hia to stay

 
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Q

Re: Life goes on

November 14 2007, 9:45 AM 

Now this must have been targetted at someone special???????????????

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......lol

 
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Anonymous

Re: Life goes on

November 14 2007, 1:32 PM 

special or not
it's still for
someone
a porofren in a
poroship.

 
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