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Thoughts~1

March 31 2006 at 9:58 AM
Night Star 

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From where do you come from?
where do you go?
People often wonder
they speak rumours
speculations in the air
nobody really knows

fearfully wonderful
you're created unique
celebrate life
free from Modern day Pharos
you live the promise
enter your destiny

 
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frances

nice...

April 5 2008, 2:37 PM 

i really like "fearfully wonderful"

you chose a great adverb...nice. overall, contemplative poem; i like its sense of thoughtfulness. keep writing!

www.spontaneousoverflow.com

 
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