...this piece got deleted fron pngscape Pacific Expression Board....

...won't be surprised if it does so too on this board...hehe

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"She talks like a maid"
the guy next to me said

But I heard an angel
Giggle out love from the damsel

She walked as if unafraid
But her big black eyes was so sad

She looked at me special
sent good funny feelings thru my soul

I bought her a lemonade
‘cos by now beer courage I had

she smiled at me a riddle
an invitation to her I barely mumble

Later….

I wanted to get laid
But she smiles and kisses me instead

“I have to be paid”
She said, “before I go with you to bed”

I felt like a complete fool
standing there al nude like a fool

She laughed and said I looked great
then gently patted my throbbing head………

…I’m not telling you the rest…….hehe

nah dude....stuff that get posted here...stays on...lol..

so where's the rest of the poem??...LOL

LOL.... "she patted my throbbing head" ANNNNDDDDD????.............. LOL
tempted to continue.......hehe

well don't let us stop you...lol...

One day when I have "beer courage" you'll read the continuation..... hehe

could I email you a six pack???...lol

Yes plissss!!... email ICE BEER stret!..lol

"I felt like a complete fool
standing there al nude like a fool"

That should have read:

"I felt a complete fool
standing there holding my tool"

...now i think it'll get deleted...hehe

madman

da tool gets deleted ?..

if that was easy, heaps of them tools will be ex-planet-earth.

HAR! HAR!reckless & annon, imagine a planet somewhere in the universe full of all the 'deleted tools',some wearing combat helmets, others still hooded, others without

one tool to another over a beer, "...come to think of it, how did you get here"?

"I got deleted"

madman

LMAO !
....I can imagine.......

Not good enough! This is a narration, not Poetry. It's got to push the boundries of imagination well enough. Good on you, keep it up.