April 21 2004 at 4:44 PM Average Score 2.5 (6 people)
JaY BeE -=305=- (no login) from IP address 68.218.106.218
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I want yall to vote!!
This is what this nigga Razorsharp said...
got a higher score that you / is you dislexic you thought you got a 3.2 / its realy a 2.3 / i dont know why u even fuckin with me / i swear this guy is fuckin stupid / i hit more targets that cupid / but this aint love, i hate whack bitches / he keep coming up short like midgets / sticking his nose where it has no business / but he finna get fuck with the quickness / dog i suggest you go back to the drawing board / cause on the real im starting to get bored / how many times must i fuck u up / before you start realizing you aint got enough / call me the evil genius like green lantern / you rhymes is simple i see no pattern / is this getting to complacated for ya? / the way i fabricated these words just 4 ya / your oviously out of you leauge / im ahead of you please believe / my words is interweaved / while you wear your heart on ya sleve / now dont even bother to write back bitch / i guarantee it aint hotter than this!
ok vote on that...
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First off ....
I dont get pussy?
I run through more holes than ricky
You strickly dickly
So nigga dont shit me
I heard you was on rippleys
Thats sad
You had to prove your self to the world
No one belived a human can rap so bad
Your rhymes bleedin
You need a king size maxi pad
Cause where you is
Is where you gona be at
Get outa line
Jamm ya ass up like a corner back
Niggaz like you
Only hype the crowd when you dancein
Ill rip out ya ribs
Now you can suck ya own dick
Like Maralin Manson
You goin all out while im pacein
You not my son
Cause my kids dont look like jason
JB please stop!
Bitch dont beg!
Im kickin ya girl in her ass late at nite
with my third leg
I cant even hear ya weak lyrics
from outa my speakers
Its gona get more ugly
Than some G-Unit sneakers
RAZOR live yo life man
But peep what im sayin
Ill glue ya hads togeather
Yo ass will be constantly pryin
Might as well glue ya mouth
No one know what the fuck you is sayin
It was fun in the begining
But now I aint playin
My bullets are about
as sharp as your name
no wonder people stay alive
When I shoot'em
RAZOR the number one stunna?
You aint herd fam?
See how them bullets fly him
Like bird man?
Man stop sayin ya hot
Cause you not
Have ya family cryin
When I mail ya parts in a box
I call my gun
Carmen Electra
Cause it fucked many niggaz
I got the Grim reaper sayin
,"I aint fuckin with that nigga..."
Dont get paranoied
But peep what im sayin
Ill glue ya hands togeather
Yo ass will be constantly pryin
Might as well glue ya mouth
No one know what the fuck you is sayin
It was fun in the begining
But now I aint playin
I been rapin to long
To let this bitch get the best of me
So next nigga disrespecting me
Will catch a Histarectame
You keep sayin you beat me
Bitch tell me how?
Ill shoot you over the verizon
Nigga can you hear me now?
Nigga like me
Keep shit load of cards
Under my sleeve
You a dumb nigga
People gota remind you when to breathe
In this diss
Ima make shure that you leave
At ya feunaral
Why they singin this light of mine?
When I dimmed yo ass
You was a waste of air
Moma jokes is a thing in the past
Talkin like a jukebox
Ima have to kill that noise
With yo light up guns
grown nigga still got toys
If you respond
Dawg fuck what ya wrote!
As far as im concerned
I just knocked the speach out ya throat
Man trust me
My real skillz is far worst
But you a sweet "Air Head"
Next to the M&M's and Starbursts
-=All my florida niggaz stand up for this one yo!! All the 305 niggaz. Bam Bam ,Yung Ice, Ceaser.You gota feel me on this.=-
This nigga try to make me stress
Log on with a new name dollabillz
With the same IP adress
You silly stupid
You cant even hype ya own self
Fuckin with Bee
Shit aint good for ya own health
Voted your self
5
Two times
And gave me 1's
To affect my score
Whats wrong?
You aint never take a loss befor?
Is that how you gota win?
Couldent beat me so
Ya fear started kickin in?
How many times i gota tell you boy
Liein is a sin
And if we were spittin on a mic
You still wouldent win
You think you hot?
Take your 2 fives away
You'll have a 1.0 on the dot
Niggaz swearin you gangsta
When you are not
Give me 1's thats obserd
Yo ass cought
Ill kick yo dumb ass to the curb
After this dont say a word
You like my math teacher
Givein me grades I dont deserve
-=Dawg you a cheater=-
(Nope im not done!!)
If I get big
I know ill sell records
You?
On the other hand
Will be shot up
In ya orange shirt
Now you look just like a lepard
Pryin sayin
The lord is my shepard
He cant save you
Thats what you get
For being a Half stepper
Ima show ya ass that im the boss
Spit one more rhyme
Ill have ya laid out
Eatin apple sauce
And ill send
3 slugs to you kidney
If you dont die..
Ill slap you up like boby do whittney
Automatic means,unload quikly
I knew it all along
You niggaz is
Strickly Dickly
But if the bullets dont kill ya
Atleast youll have scars
My guns like penilties
They push you back 10 yards
I got gold guns
Freash out of james bond
Your guns are gay colors
You probley used
A gay colored CRAON!! (HAHAhahahaha)
Point my guns at ya homeboys
They turn in to tatle tella's
How you gona wet me?
When i got a lota umbrella's?
Nigga you better fix your contrast
Dawg you finished
Cause when i beat you up
You gona need push ups to tightin your image(Get it?)
Either that or my guns will tightin your image
Leave your ass diminished,
So now yo ass eat spinitch
Cause when pop eye do it
He wup the other niggaz ass
But not in the real world
Boy ya ass outa gas
Ya rhyme stink
I had to make shure
You wasent talking out ya ass
I tell you I aint even got to work hard!!
This is funny to me
You need to look for brighter days
Cause its sunny to me
Take me down?
Nigga you got me bent!
Dawg i own these fourms
You just visiting
Paying rent
And ima kick you out soon
Stupid koon
Stay eatin them fuckin mushrooms
Tell me
Do you know your friends?
Come round your OWN hood
Tight you up
You'll see how quick your mersadie-BENZ
Man you say you gona get me
When?
Are you gona GET me?
Or get me?
Cause you fuck men
I didnt know one nigga who can rap so wreakles
Texas is the lone star state
You aint a star
So who the lonely star in texas?
You probley dont get it so
Fuck nigga check this...
I eat fake niggaz like you for breakfast!!
vote on that....
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u dumb fuck! i give u no score..u bit off of ludacris (maxi pad) and off of someone in da forums.ill give u all a clue...battle b/w gunit n pakman...exept u changed it from strically clits/tits to stricly dickly???(weak) yall kick this dude of this cite for bitin, unoriginalal fool.u just burned urself. u been called out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!razor won for originality!!!by the way...how long it take u to write that???
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its fuckin funny how your rap style changed out of nowhere. oh yeah and i am a fuckin hip hop head , which means i know you were biting also! you said "Only hype the crowd when you dancein / Like Maralin Manson" rearanging words dont count also dunny ice cube said "natural born killaz" "So fuck charlie manson / I'll snatch him out of his truck / Hit 'em with a brick / And i'm dancin" off the "natural born killaz" song. its funny how i fucking burned you and it took you like a week to get back at me dogg. point being i fucked yo ass up and everybody seems to think so too, by the way this is the second time everybody says i killed you! damn who ever wrote that shit came with the real and fuckin humiliated you, good looking out! must have been a real lyricist! (not some biting ass land shark nigga like bj, i mean jb!) yo i agree we should ban this fuckin fool for being first of all WHACK! second of all a fucking biter! thats sorry when you gotta bite just to compete with sombody!
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Re: SORRY ASS BITCH HAS TO BITE / TO PUT UP A FIGHT?
Average Score 3.0 (2 people)
April 22 2004, 3:26 AM
Yo razorsharp... you lost man just face it ok,I might off took the "maxi pad" thing.and the battle with G-Unit and other dude I didn't even read that..and I said Strickly Dickly,Strickly Dickly and Strickly Clits/tits dont rhyme...and I aint switch shit with natural born killaz man,I said
Niggaz like you
Only hype the crowd when you dancein
Ill rip out ya ribs
Now you can suck ya own dick
Like Maralin Manson
That dont sound one bit like what ice cube said....and you keep saying bj..Mabe you give them? You like those words alot huh? They alwayz come out ya mouth..
And besides you was cought for cheatin nigga... comein on with another name but on the same computer like no one knew..
Like obie say,'Pull ya skirt up,nigga you got murderd"
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yo is diss niggah fo real. yo fuck a razor and fuck jay bee them niggaz is whizzack. but razor beat jey bee! (that nigga is used a luda line) fuck that copy cat. come holla at your boy razor and quit dodging me! jay bee you lost so go battle in the little kids room
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Erase the luda line... I still got you B.
Im not dumb If I would bite a line I would do it on purpose,Ludacris is a known rapper...Who dont know that line?
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Ladies and Gentlemen of the Forum Freestyle Community, I have a suggestion. This is just your friendly forum rapper DisloKated. First off Jay Bee is my boy but no disrespect Jay that Ludacris thing made me laugh. Because yall kats calling him a biter but you got to admit it was funny. He was showcasing his talents that’s all. Second off I think Jay and Razor are equals. Both of yall obviously were Pac listeners (that’s from Eminem too am I biting).
I think the best way to settle this is to schedule like a Yahoo battle chat room (Like what I was dissing Razor about earlier. That he still hasn't responded too. "?"). Anyway we can have the whole forum on the invite list and have a live battle chat. Someone can set up a timer and yall can take turns and we vote on every round. I think it would be fun and would really make yall think on the spot. I think Razor and Jay would also be able to put all this bickering beef to sleep (that was Biggie I guess I am a biteter too. Dawg who even uses biteter any more. Whatever happened to Coping styles? Dang we are southern.) Any way yall e-mail me or whatever and we can see what’s up. Whoever thinks this would be a good idea holler back.
DisloKated Miami Emcee
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if somthing were to be set up i would defanatly be down. lets just settle this shit man cause shits gonna keep going back and fourth and i wanna battle sombodyelse. the reason i havnt really responded is cause i have a hectic ass schedule. so count me in and may the best man win, if i do happen to get "beat" i am man enough to say so. lets just hope my "opponent" is the same way
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Razor You Might Like to Get Crazy With Your Lyrics but, I can respect a man when he accepts a challenge. You sound like a dude that has some honor to him. I will check with Jay but, Get All the Forum Folk You Know to Show Out. Cause Me and Jay going have all our people out there so, have people to support you. Cause I ain't biased but, I will vote for the dude I feel is the best and so will everyone else. Now that I know you down lets make it happened. I am gonna work on setting it up. It will prolly be in the beginning of May. But after I find out who wants to watch the battle, we will schedule it so everyone can watch. So holler at my e-mail or something if you wanna talk on the side about it. My e-mail is jaws_1960@hotmail.com
Peace,
Chan Won aka Caesar aka DisloKated aka Thikkims McNally
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Yo Dislo I feel you nigga,Im kinda ignorant..I went back an read some of RAZOR stuff...The nigga nice yo.If I lose to a nigga like him its only goin to make me betta,Ill except defeat If I get defeated..
Yo Bam Bam,and Yung,What you think about this nigga RAZOR..And tell the truth dawg.
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yo its like this how about we choose a date me and jay bee write the hottest shit we can come up with and we have some judges (people who wont favor one mc over another) this is just a suggestion, i have been writing more that offten and i do feel like i have some real hot shit to bring to the table.
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