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Tru ill u cant spit....

March 7 2005 at 6:00 PM
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  (Login GoDzSoN_38)
from IP address 138.89.91.239

EyO tru ill/
Now is ur time to pay da bill/
Of causin other people to sickness/
cuz ur lines r horendoes/
i dont now how u does it but u nasty,
here pplz here called me the Illezt Dynasty/
I read your lines they iight other than u dunt make sense/
U barely no how to add the past tense/
on the other hand I get money to rhyme how u tink i got ma BenZ?
You juss need to work more on ur rhyming.
and watch u will get betta.
soon u will get a letter.
to joing a group.
it will be betta den an ice cream scoop.
U aint that special.
Nor that hot to burn in flames,
most of ur lines are pretty lame.
i dont no if this is a battle or an advice.
I realli never ment to critize
but am jusss sayin,
i dont no wat i've been creating.
all u peoples r debation.
On whether i should leev or stay,
but to tell u da truth i dunt relli care wat the crowds got to say.
Diz for every1 to pay some more attetion
if u dunt u will be sent to detention.
and one more thing i wanan tell you tru ill is dat u havent been around the block.
all u cock sucker includin u love the cock.
u no u iz the motha fuken joke of this game.
but there is no point wen u got no fame.
whether u leev or not the site will stay the same.
remmeber u the 1 i got the gun to aim....Bitch
juss remember the name....(GodZ SoN)




Godz Son was here.......

 

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