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March 29 2008 at 10:09 AM
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Ok2BTru  (Login OK2BTRU)
from IP address 70.161.177.20

 
No time for the mind to rewind and combine this statement:
I'm latent. Expressionless.~Vacant, yet blatantly
Make'in-it
Somthing at stake-an'-it get's kind of(voice trailes) fla~ger-ent
Stay awake-in dismissless state-of-mind bor-der-line to omnisciouse
Now left defenseless by common consensus like "not even an interest"
Not even one witness.



~1realist

 
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crayon
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70.159.9.11

who killed you?

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April 18 2008, 8:52 AM 

whats ah battle to ah man// that can step back. in glance//tell you that your flow. was, thought out in advance//probly wrote down. while you sit down.to tha 'computer an desk//i'll 'ruwen your rep//im craon. they 'asume im the best//yea your vocabe sick//but how lyrical i can git//will put ah end to all this 'mad-ness//brake apart your 'pa-derns//i eat his flow up! i am tha rap 'ga-laktis//

 
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OK2BTRU
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70.161.177.20

FUN

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April 27 2008, 8:53 AM 

attack the new one like the song is done
prewit-a-script-addict accusations are dumb
easily thrown from freestylistic, hypocritics, with none..
Skill , that is
this kid came dim with it and missed it
The explicit
with words dry like a triscuit, this bastard bit the biscuit
Now I criticize the critic critiquing the canblistic
Verbally I get it anywhere there's a witness
And still steal the steel out of the hands of the illicit

-If your waiting for the punchline..You missed it!

~1realist


 
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